Lily Evans -
You are the righteous
crusader. You are a moral person who wants to
see justice in the world, even on those you do
not care for. You would sacrifice yourself for
another person without a second thought. You
are confident in yourself and in your
abilities, but you possess the intelligence to
keep yourself grounded. You do not lose sight
of who you really are. Your bravery and
persistence sets you apart from other people,
as you are not one to fade into the background.
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My name isn't tow, or dancer, or whatever you guys think. No, it's *strikes a pose* TAPEH! aka: Tap (lol)
I /love/ to dance, write, and rp on neopets! so if ur ever on...and your in need of a Lily...neomail TowandaDancer18!
NJ ROX MY SOX! *does a little dance* ALL YOU BRITISH PEOPLE SUCK! Jk-ing, I luff you kay and seckzii!
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Oh, and for those of you who don't believe I have 8 classes of dance a week...
tues- 7-8 tap
8-9 jazz
wed- 6:30-7:30 lyrical
7:30-8:30 pointe
8:30-9:30 competition jazz
thrus-7:30-8:30 ballet
fri- 5-6 competition tap
I had to drop a class because of my knees! NOOOO! *falls to ground dramatcially* Ouchies...that hurt! :'(
POOPY ON ALL YOU NON BELIEVERS! lol
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BAD CLIFFY BAD! *spanks cliffy* Me no like cliffys...:(
Wait...why was hedwig carrying that letter? YAY ERROL! *cheers on Errol* Hermione's like a mini Mrs. Weasley! :D Omg, I luff the fans! They're hysterical!
Author's Response: I don't really know why Hedwig was carrying that letter. I like the first-year posse too. I think they're heaps funny. They only like her because she's famous. Thanks for review!
Great! I hate to say this though, being the perfectionest I am (and also the fact we had a test on this friday), you used semi colons incorrectly. On either side there should be a full sentence that could stand alone, and the two should have some relation to eachother. At the end of this chappie, you used it like a coma, which is gramatically incorrect. Please fix this for me and any other perfectionists. Good job besides that! lol But the blood thing was rather disgusting.
Author's Response: Okay, I'll remember that in future. (At least I'll try). Thanks for review, and your explanation was weird, but weird is ok with me, and yes the blood thing was a bit gross. Haha.
Aw! I really like how you're writing this, all the ways they could be going out, right? It's very cool!
Author's Response: That's exactly what I'm doing! I think I'm going to stop at 4 versions, and then continue my full-length Lily and James thang. If you like this and dig Ron/Hermione stuff, you'd probably like that too :) Thanks for your nice review!
Author's Response: Whoops, I forgot to write I have a Ron/Hermione fic.... shocking typer that I am!
There really isn't much to say but, AWWWWWW! Keep on writing! I just love them!
Author's Response: New one should be up soon, thanks so much for reviewing :)
Lily Evans and James Potter share absolutely nothing in common, not even their feelings for each other. Lily, perceived as a ‘model student,’ detests the handsome, popular, Quidditch star James, who she thinks to be something of a git. James, on the contrary, has been infatuated with Lily for years, and has let her and the whole school know it.
As time progresses into Voldemort’s ‘reign of terror,’ the two have to learn to trust, tolerate, and love each other.
Please note, this story is incomplete, and will likely remain so for a long time. I apologize!
ok, i'm sorry but I didn't even finish that last chappie. First of all, WHY would he want to kill her? I mean, I know she's a mudblood but not voldemort himself! and then HARRY IS THE ONLY ONE THAT SURVIVED! It's not just the avada thing, also that NOBODY EXCEPT HARRY HAS EVERY SURVIVED THROUGH VOLDEMORT! Dumbledore too. But once he wants to kill you, you're a goner. And he wouldn't of gone there with 20 deatheaters to kill just a 17 year old girl! and there is NO way that James would've been able to fend off all of them with those simple spells, and Lily fend them off for so long with a simple locking spell.
Author's Response: Well I'm not going to reveal that right away in this chapter, would I? I have a reason for Voldemort attacking her, but I'm not going to explain it in the second chapter. As I said at the end -- but you said you didn't finish it so I guess you wouldn't have read that -- this chapter will make sense, though it seems really random now. As for Harry being the only one to survive, I took that as the curse actually being cast, not just wanting them dead. As for the colloportus spell, she hadn't held them off for very long, had she? Just because it was a long bit of writing and a bit of dialogue doesn't mean that the time span had been incredibly. James: It didn't say all twenty Death Eaters hadn't entered the room. Only a several: Wouldn't Voldemort want some to guard the door in case she tried to get away? Only a several, and to me, that means about five or sixth. One of them stunned, that's five. Didn't Harry -- even if he did have the help of his friends -- hold off ... how many was it? I can't remember ... a bunch of Death Eaters in the Department of Mysteries? And, yes, twenty Death Eaters is quite a few -- I vaguely remember planning on lowering that number, but I guess I didn't -- However, even if it's not showed in this chapter, I do have a reason that Lily Evans is important to Voldemort. I'm sorry this isn't just going to be a fluffy LilyxJames story, and if you chose to stop reading, by all means do -- no point in reading something you dislike. But thanks for reviewing. :)
ROTFL! I started cracking up when they said they could still hear her. I really like the way you made it different, by doing the letter and not the typical train meeting as you say. GREAT JOB! Update soon!:D
OMG! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! BAD LILY! BAD LILY! How could she fall for that? SHE'S SO STUPID! *smacks Lily* No...I didn't mean that! *huggles Lily* I come back from Florida, and am glad that I didn't miss out on waiting for the first of three chappies I missed because it was a cliffy, so I was happy. BUT THAT WAS AN EVEN WORSE CLIFFY! MEAN! I loved the dracula bit though, I was cracking up! :D
Author's Response: Lily stood up, rubbing her head where she fell. "At least I get a hug out of it," she sighed. "But being pushed around is kind of sad." James apparated in at that moment. "'Pushed around'?" he quoted. "Who did this? WHO?!?!?!!?!" Sirius and Remus sighed as James went on a devilish rampage for the convicted pusher.
I DIDN'T REVIEW! AHHH! Well I might've reviewed and missed it, it's very possible considering I'm tired and am procrastinating while in the middle of a book report...lol! Well, enough of me stuff, let's talk about your ficcy, lol! I LUFF IT! And yes, you're right, sequel /can/ compare! You are an amazing author! Again, I'll say, you are almost competetion for JKRowling herself! I love the whole Sirius and Remus thing, Remus doing all the work and Sirius complaining about it, lol! It's very Sirius like and hysterical! And the thing with Peter, at first I was like "why are they being so mean?" then when I read the part about the rat I'm like "ooooh!" hehe! 10! take the 10 for the rest of your reviews from me because it'll always be a perfect 10!:D
Author's Response: YAY!!!!! YAY YAY YAY!!! 10 10 10 10....if you'll excuse me, i'm currently on a beach somewhere basking in the glow 10!!!! woot. ok, i should be building an opera house for school right now. see what all you crazy lovable people have done to me? i am odd. :)
I've been so delayed! But I finally caught up with you again! It's just as good as the last one so far! Keep up the good work!:D
Author's Response: thank you!!! and for once it's not me being delayed! woot! now you have a whole week to catch up to me...heh....
AWWWW! POOR PETEY! *huggles Petey Wetey*
Author's Response: he's a bummmm, but at least he's slightly sympathetic now
OMG! I GET IT! The point was not to get either of them...it was to get Peter! Or at least I think...but Peter didn't like Voldemort. He only ended up joining the death eaters because he was a coward and didn't want to die. BUT GREAT JOB ANYWAY! Poor Lily and Jamesie! :'(
Author's Response: muahahaaa....but that is what peter said, and how can anything he says be taken in truth?
So depressing...:'( Words can not describe how much feeling was really in that chapter.
Author's Response: i wrote it to depressing evanescence music, namely 1 song called "hello" (it was on repeat over and over and over....you get the idea). so to get the angst that i was channeling, i suggest you listen to it :( tis sad :(
GRRRRR! Why does everybody haff cliffies today?
I guess I spoke a bit too soon...lol! Rotfl, great way to end the chappie!
This is hysterical! I was reading another one where Harry and Hermione switch, but this is much funnier! Besides I think that person abandoned the fic because they haven't updated in a while. It's really annoying because now I don't know how they switch back, I hope you don't do that! The funniest thing was when Hermione got her T.O.M., ROTFL! You're "bathroom" bit was extremely funny, I was practically in tears! THe under the table part was very funny as well, keep up the good work!:D