First of all I would like to inform anyone who chances by this little page of mine that I am quite in love with the gorgeous Sirius Black. The fics I enjoy most are one set in the Marauder's Era, particularly those centered around Sirius or Remus. I tend to start writing stories that I intend to submit to this site but then they never get finished...I'm not yet sure if this is a good thing or not.
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Now if you're still here with me I'll tell you a little more about myself. My name is Michaela (as you've probably noticed by looking around the top of this page ^.^), I was born in Sydney Australia but now live in Perth, Western Australia. I doubt many of you guys would have heard of it so I'll just say it's on the other side of the country =) I've got longish dark brown hair and brown eyes, love to read, travel and listen to music. Favourite bands include Nirvana and Green Day, and if I went to Hogwarts, I'd probably be in Ravenclaw.
That was a really great poem, wonderfully written and so sad, but so good at the same time :)
Well this is the first SS/HG fic I've read and I must say it's very good. Hope you update soon!
Oh wow, that was awesome. Really funny, I love the fact that Lucius had to rhyme *giggles*
Very good, I liked how you said Ton looked back as if imprinting the image of his father's house in his memory. Just one thing, Tom's mother died almost right after he was born, she only lived long enough to name him... But ignoring this fact I like the fic anyway, it is written very well.
Very well written and it is quite likely that this was pretty much how it happened.
Very nice opening to the story, now I want to go and read about what is the reasoning behind James getting a time turner- I definately wouldn't have trust him with that! Nice comment Kettleburn made to McGonagall about her getting fooled by Sirius' "angelic face" but you already know how that I like Sirius, and any mention of him is a good one ;) The description of the cold morning and the dialogue between the two professors was very descriptive and believable, hope you keep it up in the next chapter!
Once again, very good. A few things that I would like to point out: "“Mums the word Minerva dear.” Smirked James." I think that it would look/ read better if you wrote it- "Mums the word Minerva dear," smirked James. I also think 'the forbidden forest' is written as 'the Forbidden Forest' because it's an actual place name, but I could be wrong... This chapter was well written, so because of this I was feeling frustrated at McGonagall's disbelief of James too! Haha, this was good because it made me feel more from where James was coming from and I understood his actions and words more.
Hello again Ami!
Sorry to nit-pick but I just noticed a few spelling errors:
"the Wuidditch pitch" -> "the Quidditch pitch"
"the Maraduer’s nightly" -> "the Marauder's nightly"
"from bellow the" -> "from below the"
This chapter was very good in the way it described James' feelings to seeing the older Sirius. Plus James' hope to die before the age of forty made me feel sad just thinking about the horrible fate that is in store for our beloved Marauders.
Personally I don't think you could or should add anything more to this story, you ended it in exactly the right place so putting anything more in would probably detract from what James had done and gone through.
So this is a very good story, I've told a friend about your stories but she is lazy as anything in regards to reviews so I shall probably have to persuade her to do them, if that's what you want :) ttyl
-Mic
Author's Response: Thanx for the nit picking, really helped alot. Luv you lots Mic! -Ama
Ooh! I just submitted a review for your fic at ff.net, it is quite long but I couldn't think of any way to cut it down. Any idea when chapter 13 will be out?
-your loyal (and slightly, nay, very Sirius
obsessed) reader, Michaela
Author's Response: Very soon m'dear, very soon. I'm writing it as we speak. Hope it to be up Nov. 14th or 15th. I had said the 13th, but that doesn't look like a possibility. Glad ur so Sirius obsessed and I'm glad someone likes Elise. hee hee. You're too sweet. Thanx so much, it's such an encouragement. -Ama
I love this story, it's really well written, very funny, but sad and sweet at the same time. I'm a bit of a sucker for Marauders fics and this is just the sort of stuff that I love to read, it's definately worth my "10" rating!
Author's Response: Oh shucks, hee hee. I'm rouging. I'll update asap.
10/10, awesome as always girl! You already know how much I love Sirius and this fic, but I thought I'd drop in and leave a review. Hope to hear from you soon and that another update isn't too far off =D
Author's Response: Hee sent you an preview to chap 16, hope you like, *giggles* full o' mush n' stuff. Luv yas alwayz. -Ami
Because I didn't do reviews for all your chappies in ff.net, I'll do them as they get posted here :) When Remus realised that there were things Sirius didn't even want to tell his diary, that made me feel so sad. Things must have been really bad for my poor Snuffles ;) And the thing with him being hidden behind the photo fram, I can just imagine his mum doing something horrible like that. Overall I really like this chapter, it was very short but still very well written and sad and sweet. Must get going to give Sirius some comforting kisses and cuddles, can't wait for your next update! -Michaela
Very glad the next chapter is up, it is as good as the last one and I'm looking forward to the next :)
Author's Response: So nice of u to take the time and review toutes mes chapitres, hee hee.
Hey it's me again, I thought I should come and review this chapter seeing as how I have already reviewed the other two. Once again I really like this chapter, Sirius sounds just like how I imagined he would at that age :P Can't wait for you to add more!
I really like it so far, please update soon!
Author's Response: haha thanks for reading
Pity it's one-shot, I really like this and hope you write more fics. Bring on the Remus/Sirius slash! You describe the characters well and their dialogue is also very believable. Nice job!
Well written, I really like it so far :)
Author's Response: Gratzi mile.
Author's Response: Gratzi mile.
Hehe, dear Mrs. McKinnon seems a little naive about what those strange noises coming from Sirius' room are *snorts* A cat indeed...Well I'm loving the story so far, but I think it would be better if you gave a bit more detail with what's happening between Remus and Sirius, instead of just giving hints ^.^
Author's Response: Heh, a cat...*wallows in brilliance* JUST KIDDING! Sorry I said "gratzi mile" twice in your last review...eh, whatever. I'm glad you love it! I was thinking about doing a chapter from Sirius and Remus' point of view, but I haven't been inspired yet. THANKS FOR READING!
Hehe, quite funny though I have no ideas about how you can continue. Although I prefer your more serious fics, this was good too.
Definately worth a 10 rating, I love how you wrote this! Sirius' jealousy of Remus' fork made me grin :P