Great story! I love the idea of a Sadie Hawkin's Dance. Also, I loved your description of Ron. I can totally see him in teddy bear P.J.'s. The only thing I'd suggest is to make McGonagall more canon. She seems a little unrealistic. But overall, really good!!!

Author's Response: You know, you're right. And I definitely took that into consideration. My rationale is this, though: I had to have something that wasn't the standard ball, AND McGonagall had to be the one to approve of it now that Dumbledore is gone. I tried to lessen the unrealistic-ness of it as much as possible, but we won't be seeing too much of her in future chapters anyway. I really appreciate your input, though. It's great to know that people are REALLY reading.