all for the love of the trio.
Harry/Ginny
Ron/Hermione
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whoo!!! deep! they are in WAY deep. whew! boy they have a lot of digging to do!
Author's Response: naw....they have to fill in those holes they dug for themselves....lol...
Argh! Ginny had to go and goof it up again. Now we will have months of beating around the bush yet again!! it figures! (Even though, I still love it!)
Author's Response: of course...lol....cause isnt this the way it always happens?
i thought it was good. I liked the way you had Molly handle the situation. Ive seen enough of Molly shouting in other fics. Her silently walking away defiantely had a different feeling and it was definately felt by the people in the story. Veryvery good.
Author's Response: oh yeah....yelling the kids know how to deal with....her just walking away....they know they are in trouble....lol....
aww so cute...ya know i think this scene would be fantastic to put in a movie... like if they did that at Fleur and Bill's wedding in book 7(that is if that actualy happens) wouldn't that be fantastic if they danced the tango??
Author's Response: oh definitly.....most definitly....
OK, i am only half done with this chaper...so this like a prelude review... The dialogue between Harry and Ron about all the stuff Hermione did throught their years at Hogwarts was Brilliant!!!! phenomenal!!! I had to write about it imediately! It sent shivers down my spine! It was so simple, but so absolutely realistic! A++ for that one!! (now back to finish the rest!)
OK i finished the rest of it... wow... that was an ending. I cant believe he hit her. (at least that is what i am assuming) Poor thing... But she is safe now. everything is going to be just fine now!
Author's Response: im glad you liked that intechange...i actually had a bit of trouble writing the meat of this chapter since the intent of this chapter was really the last couple scenes....so im glad you enjoyed it....
OK! I had to stop again!!! I just got to the "Mmmm, Harry" Part and i almost freaked out!! I dont know what happens but i can imagine that it is definately going to be BAD! Well... here goes!...
Well done well done! Im glad that he didnt hit her! Yay for the few honorable men that still grace the earth...(except the fact that he is a fictional character... but who's counting!) And Harry and Ginny are SOOO cute. This is really ending great!
Author's Response: yeah he may be a fictional character, but i had to make him a gentleman...
ncie one Potter... keep that up and things just might turn out all right!
Author's Response: lol....true that
whoa that was really cool! I loved the whole on thje swing scene and al that tanspired as a result of it. Really great!
Author's Response: i like the way that scene came out as well....
Good... Though i must say... it was fast. SO many chapters of buildup, and then it just, well... happened. Im not saying it is bad by any menas at all. I was just suprised at how fast it all came out.
Author's Response: yeah but i considered 28 chapters of build up enough to finally let them get together....lol....
ooooo! good ending! A+ ;o)
well basically, where is this going to go from here? It is a great story, but where do you go now?
Author's Response: oh dont worry...i still have a few tricks up my sleave....muah ha ha Muah Ha Ha MUAH HA HA HA HA HA!!!! *coughs* excuse me....i had an evil author moment....
ya i really did like this one. one of the best yet!
very interesting... Dumbledore is going to teach Harry... That is going to be something. And I love the emotions about Ginny. They are the perfect "I want eh girl but she doesnt know" emotions. (I was tehre many a time!!)
Author's Response: lol....thats what i was going for so im glad thats what came across....
haha, i really like the whole double P.O.V. thing. It works really well. And the characterization is PERFECT!!! Boy it is really right on!
Author's Response: thanks!!!
that was really cool! "The Powers that Be..." Wow! That's pretty serious! Great great story.
(btw, I was hysterical at the part about Dumbledore and Ginny playing Rummy. Thats fantastic!!)
Author's Response: hahahaha....yeah im glad i wanst the only one who found the concept extreamly amusing....hahah
the pov was cool. I loved the way you explained about Ron and Hermione. That was more realistic then most first kisses. Although, I would have liked to have seen the actual scene when it happened. It's alright though. Very good story. Lets see how Harry and Ginny hook up now!
haha, i really like the whole double P.O.V. thing. It works really well. And the characterization is PERFECT!!! Boy it is really right on!
i think this is turning onto a really awesome fic. I really really like the way you write Harry and Ginny together. You are very skilled at writing their interactions. The feelings they have are there, but not obvious whatsoever. Thats what makes this fic different them most others out there. You are letting the "coming together" happen a lot slower then normal, and i like that. Different!