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very good as always. keep up the good work.
htat was a wonderful installment. I enjoyed the part about Pemberton...great thinking! Also the encounter with Aunt Petunia was well written. I look forward to whatever shall come next!!
That was awesome. This is turning into quite the fantastic story. This was by far the best installment, and i hope they just get better from here! There is not so much fluf that the story is tacky, but the times where there is, it fits well. Harry and Ginny are like any new couple. I really enjoy reading this. Keep up the great work!!!
That was awesome. This is turning into quite the fantastic story. This was by far the best installment, and i hope they just get better from here! There is not so much fluf that the story is tacky, but the times where there is, it fits well. Harry and Ginny are like any new couple. I really enjoy reading this. Keep up the great work!!!
htat was a wonderful installment. I enjoyed the part about Pemberton...great thinking! Also the encounter with Aunt Petunia was well written. I look forward to whatever shall come next!!
now that was really neat!! I'm gald that Neville was never found out. It proves how "In the moment" people can be when they are "Snogging." I especially like the rough speach Ron had... very close to the idea I have of Ron.
Well done!!
very sad. Very good... but very sad. Well done
that was a really very enjoyable fic. Well done!
i loke the dream visualization at the end of the story. Very nice. I love your last quote from Card...i might have t o go find that book now. Tere is an elegance and beauty not often found in literature now adays... Well Done!!!
Author's Response: Oh yay! *claps* I\'ve converted someone! Psst--read Ender\'s Game before Speaker for the Dead, it\'ll make more sense :) Anywho, thank you very much for the review, so glad you liked it!!!
very cute. I liked the hwole "pinch me" part.
Author's Response: LOL Thank you! I liked that part too. It was a fun little burst of excitement to write. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
oh damn! That was heartwrenching. Absolutely beautiful though. i dont see how anyone can hate this! The emotion is enough to make anyone think twice, especially the speach by mr. weasely. Im not a big sorrow fan, but every once in a while, a fic just sweeps me off my feet. This was one of them. Well done!!!
Author's Response: I\'m glad I was able to sweep you off your feet, and thank you for the compliment in Mr. Weasley\'s speech. I have been a litle worried about whether or not it sounded alright, so I\'m glad you liked it!!
oh damn! That was heartwrenching. Absolutely beautiful though. i dont see how anyone can hate this! The emotion is enough to make anyone think twice, especially the speach by mr. weasely. Im not a big sorrow fan, but every once in a while, a fic just sweeps me off my feet. This was one of them. Well done!!!
Author's Response: You know, I actually like it when this happens. It brings my number of reviews up!!!
oh damn! That was heartwrenching. Absolutely beautiful though. i dont see how anyone can hate this! The emotion is enough to make anyone think twice, especially the speach by mr. weasely. Im not a big sorrow fan, but every once in a while, a fic just sweeps me off my feet. This was one of them. Well done!!!
Author's Response: And again...
very nice short story. I loke how Fred Nd George got what was coming to them for the better part of 20 years. Great first fic!
this was a great story. Boy you had me hooked in the middle there!
I had no idea what Ron and Harry were hiding. Great job. Im def. adding this to my favorites!!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I was hoping to keep it a surprise until they were actually forced to tell her. :)
WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHAT WAS THAT FOR!!! I DONT GET IT! AT ALL! AAAAAAAAAAAAA....next chapternextchapternextchapternext....
wow... i dont even know what to say
wow that was absolutely the best story i have read on MNFF!!!!! I have said this before, but i have never backed it up with the feeling i have right now! I cant even describe it. Im happy, and sad, and in awe, and upset that it is over... and so much more.
I have never had any other story connect so many things from the books and answer them in so many different ways.
I have to give you some opinions on the story itself!
1) i loved the was you portrayed Dumbledore, especially the part about him wanting Harry to be his son. That was one of the things i would have loved to see happen in the real books. If not that at least the attitude they have towards eachother when they are working one on one.
2) i loved how you wrote snape turning around in the previous story (espcially the part in the hospital wing with ginny) It was so uncharacteristic of him and yet it was so refreshing to read. not many write stuff like that.
3) Also loved Draco's turnaround... and the stuff about the Grey Knight was brilliant. My jaw dropped when i found out it was him!
4) I HATE that Ron died, but i know how important it was so its ok. I just cant stant the thought of anyone from the trio or Ginny or anyone getting killed for that matter. (I suppose it is good practice for when the actually book comes out!)
5) Last but not least... this last epilogue chapter was some of the best writing i have ever read! It was perfect (at least for me) in every way. from Hermione writing 7 books to Harry having twins (i cried over the "Ronald Albus" part), to the UNIMAGINABLE supprise of Hermione marrying Malfoy (at least for me. This might be the only Hr/D that i like!)
All in all... words cant describe how wonderful i think your writing is and i just cant imagine how anyone can top what you set in motion. This is not at the top of my most recomended list and im going to the forums right now to put this in the recomendations thread.
Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us all.
~Adelfore Flamell
wow that was absolutely the best story i have read on MNFF!!!!! I have said this before, but i have never backed it up with the feeling i have right now! I cant even describe it. Im happy, and sad, and in awe, and upset that it is over... and so much more.
I have never had any other story connect so many things from the books and answer them in so many different ways.
I have to give you some opinions on the story itself!
1) i loved the was you portrayed Dumbledore, especially the part about him wanting Harry to be his son. That was one of the things i would have loved to see happen in the real books. If not that at least the attitude they have towards eachother when they are working one on one.
2) i loved how you wrote snape turning around in the previous story (espcially the part in the hospital wing with ginny) It was so uncharacteristic of him and yet it was so refreshing to read. not many write stuff like that.
3) Also loved Draco's turnaround... and the stuff about the Grey Knight was brilliant. My jaw dropped when i found out it was him!
4) I HATE that Ron died, but i know how important it was so its ok. I just cant stant the thought of anyone from the trio or Ginny or anyone getting killed for that matter. (I suppose it is good practice for when the book actually comes out!)
5) Last but not least... this last epilogue chapter was some of the best writing i have ever read! It was perfect (at least for me) in every way. from Hermione writing 7 books to Harry having twins (i cried over the "Ronald Albus" part), to the UNIMAGINABLE supprise of Hermione marrying Malfoy (at least for me. This might be the only Hr/D that i like!)
All in all... words cant describe how wonderful i think your writing is and i just cant imagine how anyone can top what you set in motion. This is now at the top of my most recomended list and im going to the forums right now to put this in the recomendations thread.
Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us all.
~Adelfore Flamell