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02/28/06




all for the love of the trio.
Harry/Ginny
Ron/Hermione

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I Would, I Will, I Am by FinnFiona

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Hermione is on a personal mission to retrieve her parents from the protection she placed them under during the war against Voldemort. Fortunately, Ron insists on coming along, for he is able to help in a way that neither he nor Hermione expects.
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 07/26/08 Title: Chapter 1: I Would, I Will, I Am

that was cute so very!!! and extremely well written. On of the better light and fluffy fics i have read in a while! Well Done!!

Author's Response: Thank you! It is very fluffy, but I tried to make it somewhere in the realm of realism, just for the sake of my sanity :) Glad you enjoyed it!



Angst & Adoration by Moira Whipstaff

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: This story takes place about midway through "The Half-Blood Prince" and details some squabbles (and fluff :D) between Ron and Hermione. The rating is just to be safe. :)
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 07/25/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

now that was a really good short story. I especially liked that last chapter. I must say the beginning of this last chapter was some of the best Ron/Hermione writing i have read in a long time. The initial silence of the two of them gave me as a reader the ability to really set up the scene and each of their actions in turn. it was different then most other "coming together" scenes i have read in the past. The simple act of him feeling her looking at him spoke so much more then any dialog ever could. Great writing!! Well Done!!

Author's Response: Wow. I'm sooo excited that you said something about the silence part. I tried REALLY hard to make it believable and I just felt like I couldn't really convey all of that emotion with just dialogue. Thank you so much for reading! :D



Ardent by junior_achievement

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Following the Final Battle, two young couples share their first post-war conversations and finally admit their true feelings for each other.

one-shot
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 07/20/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is really a beautiful one shot. one of the better ones i have read. The emotions are all very well though out and it almost brought a tear to my eye. The only thing that bothers me a bit is the gravity of the situation. I would think the Gravity of Ron's and Ginny's situation would have affected them more then it seemed apparent. This is my opinion however, so do understand that at the same time i do believe this story was constructed to flow very nicely, with just the right amount of fluf and accurate emotion. Well Done!!



I'll Never Let Go by bubblegumpinkhair

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Hermione decides that she's done with Ron and his constant want to pick fights with her. Not thinking that things could get any worse, Ron tells her how he really feels. Cute little One Shot form Ron's POV. Definitely a little fluffy.

Excerpt:

Her eyes widened and she opened her mouth to say something. When nothing came out, I removed my hand from her chin, and I felt my face flushing scarlet again.

How could I have been so stupid?

“I understand,” I heard myself saying, but deep down I knew I never would.

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 07/26/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i really liked the ending.... it is definitely the Hermione thing to say :o)

Author's Response: Oh I'm glad that you thought my characteraztion is up to par. I do appriciate the review. It means a whole lot to an author when the reader takes the time to review his or her story.