Wow! Love the idea of the House Elves, how come Dum only gave Hermione 10 points? she deserves at least 50! only phrase to describe your fic, Bloody brilliant! Haven't read the next chapter yet though, but i hope in 2 minutes ill see Harry fighting.
this is bloody intense... i actually feel like i'm a part of it, about to fight You-Know-Which-Bastard-I'm talking about... still wondering whether Harry's gonna fight though.
sad... Dumbledore's dead... well i don't really care if Hermione gets tortured, because i don't like her, but I still hope Harry would do something!
It was really good, loved the fighting... Lavender never struck me as the kind to fight though... Harry still hasn't done anything...
YEAHHH, Harry's finally doing something... about time. Again, i love the way you capture the mood of fighting Voldemort and seeing people around you dying, love that!
Simply amazing... btw Voldemort is so dumb, how can he hesitate about who to kill? Still i hope he gets tortured before he dies... update soon!!!
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks so much for all of your reviews. Just waiting for approval.
ok, 3 guys have asked you what the prophecy was about, and 2 guys went computer-cidal, so i think ill say something creative: UUUUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPPPPDDDDDDDDDDAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEEEE SSSSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNN or ill start torturing my computer with the cruciatus curse. ^^
LOVE THIS STORY AS USUAL, so i don't think i need to repeat that, you know how good you are!
Author's Response: And like the past people, I would like to remind you that should anything happen to your computer, you won't be able to find out what happened to the characters, now will you? I am very happy you 'love' it.
I really liked it - very interesting. btw im a huge HP/GW fan, so i LOVE seeing Harry and Ginny getting married!
Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks. chapter4 is coming soon!
forgive me if i didn't cry (it's just this boy pride thing), but that was the closest to crying i ever got to in three years... I know i'm twisted but the thing i liked most is that basically every body died, or nearly died, yes i know i'm twisted but that's the perfect idea for a final battle, in my opinion... Rating: TOO GOOD TO BE RATED!
Author's Response: Wow ... I made you close to crying? And you haven't cried in 3 years? Man, this boy pride stuff is a lot saltier than I had imagined. Thanks all the same, though.
weird story, i´ve never felt sorry for Snape, but good nonetheless, since i love new characters.
poor Harry... his really does miss Sirius, but don't we all? anyway, i like your story, keep writing!
update! consider it as my new year present^^
Author's Response: just got my keyboard working, it was having minor problems and then just crashed all together and when it did, had to go out and buy new. so now i can update! YAY
Hopefully you don´t mind moderate, constructive reviews... Anyway, this isa good story, your use of language is quite good, the only thing is that the plot is developing a little fast. For example, we've slipped pass the first day of school and nothing eventfulor revealing has really happened, but you did the 'broody-Harry' figure quite well. Anyway, hope you post the next chapter soon!^^
good chapter! It was a really good idea actually, I haven't yet read a fic in which Harry went back to the veil, very nice idea! By the way, just out of interest, is this story turning into a Harry/Luna one? I'm a H/G fan, but I have nothing against H/L, since Luna is abit like a friend of mine.
Author's Response: Well, im not sure where im gonna go with this story, just gonna write it and who knows maybe it will be a H/L but it could be a H/G because I like them better also =) thanks for the reviews !!
loved it, i can see the little romance building up now... cool power she has btw, i wouldn't mind watching ppl's memories. anyway, can't wait to read chapter 4
Author's Response: Tahnk you I am really glad you like it. Its reveiews like yours that keeps me writing.
great chapter! i love the way you're describing snape, i thought that he was actually quite civil to Amilia, anyway update soon before i fall off the cliff.
Author's Response: oh thank you! Im glad you liked it, hope you enjoy my next chapter
really really really good, i read the reviews, well, who cares about the fic being short when it's so good?!
lily's best friend... that's cool...
anyway i really like it, other than the fact that i find girl's mentality slightly confusing, well, very confusing... nevermind, update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! I want to know what's wrong with it so I can fix it! Please tell me how she was confusing! Thankies!
i don't agree with mister down stairs, i don't think amilia is mary sue as we don't yet know enough about her to judge what kinda person she is. but anyway, great writing! Harry deserves a girlfriend who doesn't cry when kissing him.
Author's Response: Thanks! I am REALLY happy you still enjoy the story and thanks for the great reviews!