im definitely interested in chapter seven so can u email it? PLEASE?
There´s nothing wrong with it, it´s just me.. im a guy, so i find stories from a girl´s point of view quite... well, confusing + revealing as well
Author's Response: ok tahnks!
Author's Response: okay I get it!
that's a big revelation going on there! severus... can't imagine someone calling him by his first name. can't imagine him getting involved with a girl either! great chapter! loved it!
HAHAHAHAHA!! you are a BLOODY GOOD writer man! it was so funny! can't wait to see the next chapter! update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks buddy, just glad you liked it. I should be writing the next chapter pretty soon. Let me know if you ever write any fiction, I’ll check it out. All the best and thanks for reading. John Smith
Author's Response: oops, just seen that you DO already have a fiction. i'll have a read now
sorry my lady, i have not - suffering a writer's block here, stuck on the tenth page... im trying to overcome it, but the block is damn heavy. anyway: WE LOVE MEDEA, DON'T WE?
...they're perfect together, Harry and Medea, both loners, both freaks in some ways, both have never been loved when they were kids... anyway, amazing chapter! it wasn't gruesome and you do not have a sick mind! it wasn't half as perverted as i expected (i don't mean it in the bad way), and i have a twisted mind! so don't worry, if any fellow reviewers have any problem with that, he/she can screw him/herself^^
of course I'll defend u, you rule! i haven't updated yet - got rejected twice for typos and silly stuffs like that!
Author's Response: Those mods! I'm having trouble waiting for your next chapter. I've already reread your last chapter once. Anger. Frustration. (at the mods.)
she hasn't given up, it's the bloody mods i think.
I'm going to fall in love with Medea soon - like old fart said, she's the Dark Queen of Potions, she's got almost everything i want - she's dark, she's smart, beautiful in a dark way... i could go on and on and on, but i don't think you'll be interested in my fantasies.
anyway, this is such a cool way to bypass the mods - so evil, im really impressed ^^
Author's Response: You're making me blush (about the evil thing.) By the way, I'm waiting for you to update Mind Magic (Maybe you already have. I'll check in a second.) But if you need to take awhile to make your chapter longer, by all means do. (I can't really talk about taking a long time to update.
mmm... sunsitive skin... I must be getting paranoid. lol may be i am. anyway, sometimes i really hate Hermione, especially 5 minutes ago, when she was being an ansolute bitch to Medea. What's wrong with that girl? I still like her, she's cool. I would date her alone for the fact that everyone seems unerved. The Quiditch match was really cool, pity Medea didn't blow Malfoy's head off... Loved it as usual!
i hope this makes you feel better then: the first four chapters of my story got rejected 9 times in total... i barely made it through... the mods are abit too paranoid about keeping the standard up, just ignore them!
ill say it again: love your story, queen of darkness!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. It does. I respect you so much for continuing to write after being rejected so many times. I won't think about giving up anymore. Have you updated yet?
i believe some how that M is Voldy's daughter... but then, she's also hot enough to be a vampire - sunsitive skin. I don't think she's bella in disguise though. But I might be wrong, maybe she is just a new character, a really cool one by the way.
MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!! Finally someone comes to see Harry... btw if i were Harry i would have killed Vernon Dursley first, as well as his wife... i will make them watch me torture Dudley first and then kill them with the most painful curse i know... Just to let ppl know that i am extremely angry on Harry´s behalf!
bueno, i say it like you do, like 'media'. actually sometimes i say 'midia', both sounds weird though...
1. i announce officially that this is the best fic i´ve ever read. (i´m serious!)
2. this remains to be my favorite fic ever. (again i´m serious!)
3. UPDATE BEFORE I START CUTTING MYSELF AND BLEED TO DEATH!
i think this covers the main points i want to make!
Author's Response: Please don't commit suicide, I like your story and it would be a shame if I didn't get to finish it. Hehehehehehe
Kalira30: i'm not attacking you or anything, but i really think this chapter deserves better - it's detailed, the descriptions are good for these alone i would rate it 7-8. as for the characters - why aren't they real? i've met people who tried to commit suicide, and i don't think we know enough about Medea to judge her yet, there is still alot of mysteries about her. as for Harry, well, he's impulsive, passionate - i can't see why he's unreal.
harrysaunt: same here, im not attacking, just expressing my opinion. there has to be some romance in a good story - it's a part of life unless you want to be a complete failure (eg. me). Moreover, i don't think it's mushy at all, it's quite subtle.
Author's Response: I wanted to thank you for defending me. It means a lot that you would do so, but again, HAVE YOU UPDATED! Let me check.
I guess I'm going to stand up and defend my fav story here... I've always liked the mods, but now, well, let's just say that they're not my fav people in the world... I'm not just going to waffle here... action time: ME VS the MODS, im going to write a bloody essay on MEDEA
YEAH! NEW CHAPTER! anyway, i loved it. the acid bomb was excellent, i was actually thinking about killing him by planting something in the presents (like the one they did to the ministry guy in OotP), but i never imagined something like an acid bomb! update soon!!!
you know what? This is ABSO-BLOODY-LUTELY amazing! Keep writing and I think you may make it to the 'featured' section. im not flattering you, i've read about 5000 fanfics and this is one of the best ive seen. normally i don't even bother reading stories with just the first chapter posted, but today i was somehow possessed and... well, i read this and im just glad i did... update soon please, ive decided to advertise for you in my fic because i like it sooo much!