Hey, I'm a teen girl who likes to read (a lot), beta stories, swim and anything outdoors! My favorite characters are the Marauders (yes, Peter too) Tonks, and Regulus Black. I generally read Remus centric fics (Oblivious and Imperius are by far the best stories I've ever read!)
I aslo go by Padfootgirlforever or Padz within the HP fandom.
Ships.
The canon
Remus/Tonks
Harry/Ginny
Hermion/Ron
The Fanon
Sirius/Lily
My House is Hufflepuff.
My Stories;
On My Own -- A songfic about Sirius running away.
I'm working on a Regulus Black fic, but all I've got so far is a few scenes a basic plot, the prolougue should be up sometime in september.
And yea, that's it!
Loved it! Soooo funny glad the Mauraders are in on it. You say ch.3 is submited tho it's not there????
Yay, the POA chapter! That was really good :) It's sort of depressing how Remus can't tell Harry anything. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you! I know, it\'s going to add major angst to the story!! I\'ll be away and unable to update for a few days, but don\'t worry, I\'ll be back! We are getting into the final chapters of this story, so stay tuned.
Yay first review :)
My,that was accepted ten times faster than ch. 4!!! YAY! I loved the flashback really well written, this line - unexpectly- made me laugh so hard :If time normally moved at the speed of a turtle, tonight it moved like a snail with a bad hangover and an addiction to sleeping pills
hehe, I loved it! And of course the 'serious--sirius' crack at the end, oh my that one's so old--funny though the was it was in this.
As always I loved it! Update ASAP.
Author's Response: I know what you mean! When they told me it had been accepted, I thought they meant my new story, which has been in the queue for awhile. I tried to lighten the mood with that line about the snail. I tried to come up with a good analogy, glad you liked that :P.
As you can tell, I really loved writing chapter five. I still have to write six, but I\'ll get it up as soon as I can! Thanks for the review!!
Author's Response: I know what you mean! When they told me it had been accepted, I thought they meant my new story, which has been in the queue for awhile. I tried to lighten the mood with that line about the snail. I tried to come up with a good analogy, glad you liked that :P.
As you can tell, I really loved writing chapter five. I still have to write six, but I\'ll get it up as soon as I can! Thanks for the review!!
Author's Response: That new story is up now, too. Don\'t know why I\'m telling you this, but heh... :D.
*does first review dance*
YAY! New chapter :D Really great job!
I really loved this:
“Good day then, Remus. And remember: guilty is only guilty once tried by a jury. Some people never have a trial.”
As Remus walked out of the office, he realised Dumbledore was speaking not about work, but personal friendship.
One thing though, at the beginning in Dumbledore's letter, he says harry is still unaware of Sirius Black's breakout, but it seems Remus only knows after he read the paper....
Author's Response: Thanks!! I\'m so gald it got up, I knew you were waiting :D! Thanks! I thought that line was one of my personal best ;)! Maybe you\'re right about the whole paper thing...I might have made a mistake...if I did...SORRY!! Thanks so much for the review!
Yay! It was tortue to see the little 'chapter 4' and not be able to read it! Awesome as always, although prehaps not that emotional, when he was flipping through the album his emotions seemed sort of forced. But all in all it was great! Although the first chapter is still my favorite. Definatly go with the flash back! No good to write something you won't enjoy! If you don't enjoy writing it, not a chance we'll like reading it. All the mauraders for sure!
Author's Response: YEAH!! I\'ll get started on chappie five immediately. I tried to make it unemotional, but you did pick up on the fact that he\'s trying to force himself not to cry, and he\'s restraining himself, as is normal for him. Remember in book 6: \"Harry had never seen Lupin lose control...he felt as though he were intruding upon something private,\" or something like that. Anyway, point is he\'s really trying to overcome as quickly as he can, and after this one final memory his pain will be gone for a very long time (but not forever...you\'ll see ;) ). THANKS SO MUCH for the review!
Not validated! What?! I want to read it! Come on, admis.!
Author's Response: I know, I\'ve been saying that for ages. They\'re very slow with admitting my stories. Hopefully my newest fic as well as chappie 4 will be accepted soon too!
You updated!! YAY, I still love your story, even though that chappie was a bit of a bummer, it's OK as you said the next chapter will be better:D don't worry everybody needs chapters like this, in which nothing spectacular really happenes. I like the flash back and Remus' reasoning behind thinking Sirius betrayed them. It was good, keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Remus needed some way to explain to himself what Sirius did, because they were too close for him to believe Sirius would do something like that spontaneously, or without a motive. Here, he understands that might very well be the case! Thanks again for the review, capter 3 is in the queue! ( hey that rhymes) but I don't know what happened, on my account page there's nowhere to update stories anymore...UH OH! Don't worry, I'm sure it'll work out.
Author's Response: Oh god, I realised I hadn\'t thanked you for adding my story to your favourites list! THANK YOU times twenty million, it means so much that you like this story enough to add it to your special list. I am beaming! THANK YOU AGAIN!!! :D!!
I loved this chapter! You did the funeral perfectly! And I just adored the ending,
"Remus Lupin had become an optimist."
great, just great! 10/10 if we still had the old layout!
Author's Response: YEAH!!! I\'m so glad you liked this chappie! I loved writing it, it was a blast, much more fun than either of the other chappies, (and the fourth for that matter, not much happens, you\'ll see) however, if you decide you\'re up for the former on the author\'s note in chappie 4, it should be as good as this one! Thanks a squillion for the positive review!!!! :D
Okay, this is the first Fan Fic that actually made me cry :'( Continue definalty!
Author's Response: Oh gee...thank you! I didn't expect my story to make anybody cry, but I'm glad you were touched! I appreciate your review so much, thank you a ton! I will update (chapter 2 had some glitches) as soon as I can!
Okay, this is the first Fan Fic that actually made me cry :'( Continue definalty!
Truthfully? It wasn't good, I guess the whole ledgen was orginal but the rest, well there are many, many stories like this out there and just this wasn't teh best one, I noticed the story is not compleate so put a prolouge maybe of the bite and then a epilouge of werewolves finally being excepted or something like that. Just an idea.
Truthfully? It wasn't good, I guess the whole ledgen was orginal but the rest, well there are many, many stories like this out there and just this wasn't teh best one, I noticed the story is not compleate so put a prolouge maybe of the bite and then a epilouge of werewolves finally being excepted or something like that. Just an idea.
That was really good, you did it excellently! The way you wrote Voldemort was fantastic! This line was by far my favorite:
"and even a small smile in his lips, his Gryffindor courage running through his being like a pulsing aura of power."
I liked how you made Voldemort taunt James a bit before killing him and how James fought back, awesome!
Ps: Do you know if Mr. Hermione Granger abandoned his story, or replaced me, or did something else happen? Just wondering. Thanks!
Author's Response: Hi ! Well, I\'ve always thought that James was very, very fond to his house: don\'t know where I got this impression though :) Glad that you liked my story :D PS: I really don\'t know. A short time after his story was posted, he just stopped responding my emails. I\'d hate to think he got discouraged, but it might have happened. You should try emailing him and ask him about it :)
Well I suppose I really should review, but it's going to seem extremly migeity and brainless next that novel of Astrofire's, lol.
Anyway, you know I like this, the mystery surround Nex is great :) But really though, what's with the spaces between the paragraphs?
Whoah! I wonder why they've been attacked. You write Prongs really well! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks!! Attacked = because this is one of the times the prophesy outlines about defying Voldemort. I do try to make Prongs believeable!!
“I swear I’ll kill her one day,” *sob*
anyway, a month in hospital! They weren't hurt that badly were they? I dunno. Again Prongsies is written really well.
Author's Response: Glad you picked up on the irony :)! I was hoping someone would :)! They were hurt pretty badly...but were hospitalised more for monitoring than anything
:D!
Author's Response: Chappie 6 of BARAAHP is in the queue!!
Awwww, that was sweet, I suppose my 'hunch' was right, lol:) Excellent chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks!! And haha, yep It was! Since I know you particularly are eagerly waiting for \"Between,\" to be updated, it\'ll be up soon, I\'m having serious writer\'s block concerning that story!!!!!! Thanks for the review!!
I haven't checked this story in awhile! Anyway, the first part was so sweet:)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Aw, the ending almost made me cry. I loved this part:
"It was an awful feeling; it swam inside of her along with ten million other feelings: joy, pain, and wordless emotion, just to name a few. Had her feelings been a painting, it would have been ridiculously abstract. "
Author's Response: :D. I didn\'t really know how to describe what she would have been feeling, so the first thing that jumped out at me was the word \"abstract.\" It was just kind of a \"Eureka!\" type moment, you know?
Thanks so much for the review :)!
Peter is so tactless!! I'm so sure the oven wasn't really on. Loved the end, and this line "I swear, one day all Potters will be famous for their stupid scars"
Author's Response: Yes, well.... Peter is *cough* special.....
And Sirius just has a habit for having his jokes backfire ;).
Yeah for reviews!!!!!! They make my day!! So thanks so much for them ;).