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Veiled Revelations by erikthephantom

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: The Hogwarts Express brings mystery and mischief in the Marauders' seventh and final year at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. James, Sirius, Remus, and Peter are facing a year of N.E.W.T.s, romance, intrigue, and, of course, a little mischief-making. There are plot twists galore! James (in the midst of saving the world) continues desperately to try to woo the incorrigible Lily Evans. Sirius deals with family problems while dealing with his incredible popularity and good looks (the horror!). Remus is provided with a backdoor to avoiding the prejudices of the inevitable real world, but at what cost? (dun-dun-dun) And Peter...well, Peter gets himself a girlfriend (but don't worry: it doesn't affect his hero-worshipping of James...or DOES IT?!)

Reviewer: VioletQuill Signed
Date: 11/30/04 Title: Chapter 8: A Little Something New

Great chapter, all these paragraphs and you still dont lose any skills! Update

Reviewer: VioletQuill Signed
Date: 12/06/04 Title: Chapter 11: Always

Raises a few suspicions about bethany and ended on a good note. Kepp it up.. Your stories are real good, but how old are you? I could understand if you were 14...

Author's Response: well, my style is similar to JK's (not nearly as good at writing, but the STYLES are similar), so if you're insinuating that she's 14, i guess i can see where youre coming from.

Reviewer: VioletQuill Signed
Date: 11/24/04 Title: Chapter 2: Snape's Offer

Great descriptions, and the stories great. It kept me reading, (as with the first) for ages, and i reckon you've got the characters exactly. excellent story

Reviewer: VioletQuill Signed
Date: 12/05/04 Title: Chapter 10: Of Stags and Lions

Great effect with the dementors. It was as if i were there and your story is very well described. Good ending also.

Author's Response: ohhhh nice way of putting it! thank you so much!! :)

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Reviewer: VioletQuill Signed
Date: 12/06/04 Title: None

'Rodyl opened her legs and hermy and harry came out' Good story SEPT U LUV URSELF And you kno hoo a am >:P J P U LUUUUUV URSELF U A LOCKHART write a book dudududududu LA SHOOSHINE u write boobish stories about boys (ron n hjarry) whom BUM off u, when really harry n ron dnt lyke u thye lyke hermione Not u :D So i advise you..... (see page 6) STOP BUMMING OFF UR FUCKING SELF UR A BARHC

Author's Response: I'm sorry but I don't like your comment. If you want to send messages like that send it to someone who cares. And yes I know who you are. If you don't want me to report you I suggest you shut up.

Author's Response: Oh and there's a book, not written by me, called a dictionary. Try using one and maybe when you send a review to someone, they'll understand.

Reviewer: VioletQuill Signed
Date: 12/06/04 Title: None

'Rodyl opened her legs and hermy and harry came out' Good story SEPT U LUV URSELF And you kno hoo a am >:P J P U LUUUUUV URSELF U A LOCKHART write a book dudududududu LA SHOOSHINE u write boobish stories about boys (ron n hjarry) whom BUM off u, when really harry n ron dnt lyke u thye lyke hermione Not u :D So i advise you..... (see page 6) STOP BUMMING OFF UR FUCKING SELF UR A BARHC

Author's Response: And what the hell does (see page 6) mean?

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Reviewer: VioletQuill Signed
Date: 01/02/05 Title: None

I got your review, and i think this story is good the way you wrote it. Are you going to write more chapters of it? Because it'd be great to learn how Hermione handled her situation. I give that a 9/10,

Author's Response: Well, to be honest, I hadn't planned on writing more. I'll look into it though! Thanks for the review!