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Take My Heart Away by Hatusu
Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Hermione goes back in time with one mission: to kill Tom Riddle before he ever comes to power. A difficult task, correct? An impossible one, she realizes, as a love between them grows stronger than anything she has ever known. Now Hermione has a choice to make. Will she condemn the Wizarding world to almost certain destruction, or will she take the life of the one boy she has ever loved?
Date: 06/21/06 Title: Chapter 7: Enemies Closer
Whoa!1 It's fantastic! I'm absolutely loving it so far. Please please Please Please Please update it soon. I love the plot line so much and I really do love how you are writing the story. It's really excellent. Adding to my favorites.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and the add. :)
Unbreakable by Lily4James
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: It's the beginning of the end, seventh year.
Sure we all know the basic story, but what really happened in James' and Lily's final year at Hogwarts
James likes Lily and Lily likes James, it should be simple but it's not. Will their relationship blossom as they spend the summer together and as they become head boy and girl? Can their friends help get them together? Will Sirius ever beat James' record-breaking number of detentions? Read on and find out.
A tale about love, hatred, food fights and MWPP.
CAUTION: Contains strong Sirius Black moments, be prepared to fall in love with him.
A/N: I feel so terrible and guilty about everyone who is asking me to update because i have tried and tried but every time i post it it gets rejected. I'm going to rip my hair out if it doesnt get accepted soon! I promise to keep trying, please stick with me in this hour of stress, i need you guys!
Date: 03/30/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Invitations and Complications
Great job. I like your second chapter even better. I had alot of fun editing it. you're a really good writer and I hope chapter two gets accepted. I love this story. let me know when chappie two is up! XO Emily
"Mum, Dad, It's Me... Harry." by Mudblood428
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Harry, Ron, and Hermione make a trip to Godric's Hollow to visit the Potters' graves. There, Harry speaks to his parents for the first time, and in so doing, discovers that the dead are never truly lost. (One-shot. Bring your kleenex.)
Date: 05/21/06 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot
It was really good. I didn't cry, but it gave me chills that had nothing to do with the fact that I'm wearing shorts and a tank top...10/10. I loved it.
Date: 04/07/06 Title: None
It looks even better when it's oficial! I love this story. it's creative. hows chapter one(cuz this is a prologue) coming?
Date: 03/30/06 Title: None
this is the best story I have ever Beta'd for. I love it. you're an excellent writer. Keep updating your story!
XOEmily
Author's Response: Thanks- for the review and your help!
Date: 06/27/06 Title: None
Yay!!! It's up!!! Good job! I'm working on chapter 16, but for some reason I'm doing it out on paper, so I have to transfer it all to the computer... anyhoo! Excellent job!!! yadda yadda UPDATE SOON!! more yadda-ing!! You're awesome!!
Author's Response: Thanks. Paper? Interesting...
The New Surprise by rache
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary:
Hi everyone just to say this story is finished, there will not be any more chapters. Sorry if that wasn't clear beforeb>
Harry and Ginny are married, with a seven-year old daughter. As Ginny finds out she is pregnant with her second child, memories come back to her, good and bad. The war is over, and everyone feels safe. Shouldn’t they? Strange things are happening, mysterious plots are being formed, putting Harry and his loved ones in danger. Everyone knows he will do anything for the people he loves…Especially Ginny.
Date: 07/04/06 Title: Chapter 11: An unexpected visitor
This is a really good story. I like how it's written. You have a knack for writing the flashbacks. Excellent job. Can't wait for an update!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I really like writing flashbacks cuz I actually think it\'s more interesting to get a bit of Ginny\'s past in (or Harry\'s for that matter). Thanks for the great review!
To Be This Lost Inside Ourselves by hpmaniac666
Rated: Professors •Summary: All Hermione wanted was a cup of coffee. Now she has wet hair, a see-through t-shirt, and a whole lot of unhappy memories. How have the years changed Ron. Now he’s 24 and a successful business man/mechanic. It’s a lot to get her head round. To make things worse, feelings she used to keep locked away are proving harder to hide. She can’t forget about Harry. And she can’t forget her fiancé. Post-war fic
Date: 03/30/06 Title: Chapter 2: Ron
I really love this story. The characters are behaving as you would expect them to. I hate it when characters do something too crazy. I give your story 10/10. great job
Author's Response: Thank You mucho! :D Glad you like it! I think characterisation is important with HP fics - else why not just invent your own characters?! Thanks XXX
A Path Reforged by Capricorn
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Would you die to save a girl you hardly know? Would you step in front of her and protect her from your own father…the man who shaped you, and led you into a life that you wish you did not have? Will Draco Malfoy? We shall see. One - Shot.
Date: 03/08/06 Title: Chapter 1: Fire and Ice
it was pretty short, a little confusin to me...randomly ginny's whole family is dead, her best freind is unconcious and possibly dying, harry is murdered by Voldemort, and the best thing she can do is hug malfoy? how about crying over harry or ron's dead bodies or trying to help Hermione instead of making out with the guy that so recently aimed a killing curse in your direction...er....not a bad write, but i do believe that it requires a prologue...7/10
Author's Response: really? Well, she did cry over Ron and Harry, you just didn't see it. Also, if you had a sixfoot tall deah eater standing over you, would you run to help your friend, or defend yourself. THIS is a ONE-SHOT. Not a novel. It popped into my head, and it shouldn't need explanations. You are prolly not old enough to understand some feelings that are just...there. Like when she decided to make out with Malfoy. Do I have to be completely accurate on what Ginny would do?
Date: 05/29/06 Title: None
Hi! Beta here! Congrats on getting this chapter accepted! I do cringe as I notice a few things I missed...It's the curse of the Beta... :-D I can't wait for your third chapter!
Author's Response: Heyy! Thanks for reviewing!! I\'m almost done the third chapter (I\'m so sorry it\'s taking me so long, I currently have writer\'s block and I have NO CLUE about what to put now, but never fear, I\'ll have the story to you before next year! Omg, I\'m rhyming, and it\'s not even good rhymes it\'s pathetic ryhmes.) OK well I\'m going to stop rambling. Thanks for the rview!
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Harry, Come Back by inhphtml
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Harry lands into St. Mungo's unconscious after some mysterious accident. Hermione blames herself, as they had a serious argument minutes before the so-called accident.
Date: 05/01/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Unexpected Visitor
I love this story. I knew I made a good choice by becoming your Beta. Update this soon so that the rest of these people don't have a stroke waiting for your story. 10/10
Date: 06/13/06 Title: Chapter 3: The Argument
Hey Hey!!! It was accepted!!! Brilliant! Still loving it as much as ever! Keep the chapters coming!
Date: 05/21/06 Title: None
It's really good! I liked it alot, but there were a few things I was confused about. Are James and Alexandra twins? The other thing that confused me was that you kept switching POV in the middle of a chapter. It's hard to read that way, but other than that, this is a well written story. I'm adding it to my favorites.
Mistaken Love by mzkisseshere
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary: Drama, romance, adventure and darkness are the ingredients of my story. Harry is heartbroken from the break-up with Ginny and devastated from the death of Dumbledore. Ron and Hermione are captured in their own world. Draco is running from his destiny and his farther. Ginny is confused and feels as if Harry is slipping away from her. A new mysterious character appears and she is anything but ordinary. My story takes place right after Dumbledore's funeral and chains of events are happening which are leading to a climax that is more than you can handle. Read! You won't be disappointed!
Date: 05/13/06 Title: Chapter 1: Confessions with Darkness
OH MY GOSH!!! I LOVE this story! It's absolutely amazing! By the way, This is Your Beta in secret pen name form. I'm so happy for you! Get chapter two accepted! Stat! 10/10. I love Bethany.
Author's Response: lol, you were able to write a review before I could even tell you I got it accepted! =P you know all!! lol
-mzKISSEShere
Date: 06/22/06 Title: Chapter 4: The Difference Between Free Will and Force
Look!! It's chapter four and I'm leaving a review!!!! Even though you forgot to tell me that it was accepted!! **cough cough** This is the best fourth chapter I have ever read...The fourth chapters of stories are usually bad...including mine...but not yours.... You rock!! **ahem** OMG!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!! I'M ADDING YOU TO MY FAVBORITES!!! UPDATE SOON!!! 10/10!!! [/fangirl squeeling rant]
Cliché Nation by just_the_contrary
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: A compilation of the most commonly used Harry Potter clichés in the fandom. Features Angsty!Harry, Sweet!Draco, Head Dorms, sudden romances in the forms of Ron/Hermione, Harry/Ginny and of course, Draco/Hermione, because what's a cliché without them?
The Marauders also make an appearance in this fic, including Lily/Lily's best friend/Lily's other best friend.
Warning: mention of hippopotamuses inside.
Chapter Five is up! The story is done. Also, thank you to everyone who nominated this neatly tied bundle of ridiculousness in the QQ awards, I really appreciate it!
Date: 06/19/06 Title: Chapter 2: The New York Student Exchange
It Is Fantastic. You have mucho skill writing this cliché stuff! I love SexGod Sirius!!! Keep it up... I don't know if I told you in my last review, but this is in my favorites. : )
Author's Response: I also love SexGod!Sirius *shifty grin*. Thank you so much! I appreciate you putting it in your favourites. :)
Date: 06/15/06 Title: Chapter 1: A Collection of All-Sorts
Wow....Hilarious to the highest level. I LOVE it. I love stories like this! This is so clever and creative. I would never have thought of something like this!
Author's Response: Thank you. Of course you can think of something like this... it\'s not very creative lol. Thanks though.
This is Where by Gemma Hawk
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Narcissa returns to an Island of her childhood to say goodbye one last time before she surrenders to the Aurors.
Date: 06/24/06 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot
It is so good! I absolutely love how it runs through Narcissa's life and how everything big happened in the same spot. I like how it shows that even someone evil can have real feelings and love and what not. It was truly a good story and I loved it. Keep writing!
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you! I love reviews like this! Thanks!