"Dreams do come true, if we only wish hard enough. You can have anything in life if you will sacrifice everything else for it."
J. M. Barrie
Great chapter. A little bit of critique, watch out for spelling errors. I like what's developing between Harry and Petunia. Good work!
Wow. I never thought that someone could make me like Petunia. Great job!
Love the chapter!
I like that Arthur tried to say Dumbledore and couldn't. Nice touch. Also, I love the line about watching their little girl become a woman at the end.
Ooh, that Malfoy I just want to %^$%^$ and then I'll &^%$^%##$# string him up and %$*%@$*$# and strangle him with his tongue! That'll show him. Nice to see you back!
Author's Response: Wow... erm... Narwen you've made me lost for words. I'm glad you feel so strongly about the subject of Malfoy because I think he might be a regular feature in my story... although don't quote me on that!
I love Fred and George. That was a great chapter, I loved the humor. It was light but it helped cover a lot of characters emotions. I could understand the mischievousness of the twins with the embarassment of Hermione, the confusion of Ron and Mrs Weasley's frustration. And I adore that Mr. Weasley just sat there enjoying it.
I agree completely with Hermione Clone7. Dean is a loser. Argh!
Great chapter. I loved Hermione's talk with Ginny about love, it was spot on. And I stand by my previous review. Dean is a slimeball and needs to go swallow rat poison.
To your reply about who Ron was arguing with about quidditch over football, it was Dean. Now about your story, I have suspicions on who it is but I won't post them here, I'll just wait for it to happen. Great fic!
Now I've hit the end at this time. I am so glad that I don't have older brother's to do that to me. In the story, it's hilarious, in real life, I imagine it to be fairly mortifying. Great fic and I've added you to my favorites list! Ready for chapter eleven...
Yay! New chapter! When I read the chapter title, my first thought was, oh yay! Ron's gonna be captain. But then I was thinking it was going to be Ginny. I don't know why, but I love being right. I think that's a great choice and it is definitely not been used a lot (if ever) and I'm sure you know how difficult that is in the fanfic world. I liked this chapter, wow, a lot, and I look forward to the next one. By the way, I have finally updated and the chappie should be in in a couple of days.
Author's Response: Hoorah! I\'m glad I\'m back, it\'s so good to know that everyone is still behind me. As for your story I think I\'m actually up-to-date but feel free to come back and shout at me if I\'m not. See you next chappie!
“Search me mate, she’s only my girlfriend, I can’t be expected to understand the inner-workings of Hermione’s brain!” So odd how a simple line can really make your day. I'm glad to be the first to review and I'm glad you got your next chapter up. I loved it so much that I'm gonna follow the crowd of pretty much everyone who reviews and say.....drumroll please.....Update! Thanks for a great read!
Author's Response: hey Narwen I'm glad you liked that line because that was my favourite one too! I dunno it just seemed like a very Ron thing to say. (Actually a very bloke thing to say!) Anyway not sure when the next update will be - I'm back at college now so it may be a while before I can get my creative juices flowing! I should imagine it'll be at least a week... or two... or three but we'll get there eventually! :)
This is in correction of my review for chapter five. I meant Voldemort, not Dumbledore. Sorry;)
Author's Response: Wow Narwen thanks so much for bumping up my review count! That took some dedication to read it from start to finish in one sitting!
I'm afraid I haven't finished reading your's yet but you are on my faves list! If you check the forum's I've sorted your link issues for you!
Anyway I'm glad you cleared up that it was Voldie and not Dumbledore Arthur had trouble saying because I was lost there for a minute! Thanks again you're a STAR! (Obviously I don't mean in the trekie sense! *lol*)
Oh wow!!! That was a great start to a story. You jumped straight into the action. I am absolutely going to read more of this and add it to my favorites.
Great chapter, again, it's really good.
Yes, Percy is an idiot but we love him anyway. One of my greatest desires for him in the next books is that he dies defending his family. Morbid but a great idea, I think.
Fluff! Fluff! Fluff! Love Fluff! New Zealand, eh? Is there going to be a great signifigance with New Zealand in this fic? Just curious. I love New Zealand, planning to live there someday. Home of Lord of the Rings!
It's good! BTW, where do you find the challenges for MNFF? I haven't been around here very long.
Beautiful. It is like a mirror into real life. We don't just suddenly become evil in one day. One little thing happens, then another, then another. You can't just decide to make Hermione bad without giving reason for it. You're finding that reason and exhibiting it. I love it.