03/11/06
http://celpoint.blogspot.com/
i dont have much to say for myself except that i am a highschool freshy who procrastinates his homework to write.
I watch "The West Wing" just about every day of my life and enjoy 24 although i cant find time to watch it.
I love to read as well although most of the inriguing stories are so long that the prosect of catching p seems impossible.
Note that my website also displays work from a little while ago and i have since changed my writing style. but feel free to check it out. The primary use of my website is as a forum to post my artwork.
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my primary work will be "the administration." im still woking on the detals of the shaowed truth project._______________
The Administration
As i understand, this will probably be one of its kind on the site. (im definitely wrong :-)
I dont want to spoil too much but ill leave at "you're gonna see alot of Scrimgeour."
INTRO ACCEPTED FIRST CHAPTER STILL BEING WRITTEN. AAAHHH!
Introduction accepted: I have just submitted the introduction. Please read it. If you don't enjoy the intro give me another 2 chapters to convince you that this story is worth your time.
As always, i cant get better unless you comment.
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Marked
The one shot has been accepted. i dont like peter pettigrew at all, but i thought this was a very different story that few had thought of writing although im sure that one of the 6747 stories online is about him. :-)
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Irreparable
ONE SHOT
The world can repare itself time and agan as it ventures through one war after another, but there are some people who are left irreparable.
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Maledizione, Cosi Forte-
STORY HAS BEEN DROPPED. IT WILL NOT BE PUbLISHED. didnt have the patience t deal with all of the picky rules for submissions. if youd like the original document though, just clikc contact auther above and ask me for it. ill sned it right over.
i have just submitted my first story in a while. it is a mix of romance (Hermione/Lupin) and suspense, intorducing a character we never expected:
-The One who is hated is strengthened.
The One who is destined falls.
The One who was thought gone arises.
And the One left...loves.
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The summer before the 7th year.
With the fall of the Order of the Phoenix, Hermione and Lupin must unite to not only defeat Voldemort, but yet another, stronger, more brutal entity from long ago.
But as the events unfurl, Hermione finds herself wondering wether the one man who is her guide and aegis might actually be working against her.
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Excerpt:
The figure of a human body lay curled up on the floor, hugging the shadows of the darkness around it.
The body moaned miserably.
“Hello?” Hermione tried again, bending down and laying a hand on the motionless body.
The person spoke, their voice barely audible, deep, and monotone, “Herm-“ it said, trying to complete her name as if their ability to do so would judge the length of their life.
Hermione’s heart began to beat even faster to the point of a bit of pain.
“Yes.” She reached for the person’s head which was bent against the ground and turned it to face her.
She gasped and then allowed a single tear drop to leave her eye.
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The snake, the nail, the hammer and the fate of the snake's tail
this is a light rhyming poem i wrote on instinct. just for fun.
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B7: ...and the scar of victory
i wrote this a few years ago. the writing is choppy an i didnt know where the story was going when i wrote it. feel free to read, but dont judge me by it. (unless its good).
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COMING SOON, Shadowed Truth Project
A Woman of shadowed Truth
Shadowed Truth Project Part 1
A woman hidden in the midst of a dark corridor.
The Dark Lord in a small room of Hogwarts
And a shadowed truth.
The actual descirption is far more compelling im just to lazy to rewrite it. when its accepted youll see it below.
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Harry Potter and the Spirits of the Storm by QueenHal
Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: A Post-HBP fiction.
When Harry’s quest for the horcruxes turns desperate, he leaves the security of his homeland to seek out the advice of an ancient and most unusual Council – one whose allegiance is only to themselves but whose knowledge is so vast it may be his only chance. What Harry discovers there will change everything. Soon, he comes to see that this is all so much bigger than just he and Dark Lord – his role, though pivotal, is terribly minute compared to the challenges the Wizarding World must now face.
Meanwhile, across the Atlantic Ocean, a young witch uncovers the truth about her bloodline. But only when catastrophic events begin to unfold, does she realise her importance in the greater scheme of things...
It is a tale of epic proportions: bringing in the truth behind Slytherin's betrayal, and the choices the Founders had to make to ensure the longevity of their world. Enemies must unite, lines must be crossed, and children must forgo their innocence. And behind it all, fly the Spirits of the Storm, waiting, watching, scheming. Welcome to the greatest epic war the Wizarding World has ever seen.
Chapter 11 is posted.
Date: 03/11/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Suspicion
you rule!
As the Wall Crumbles by Aequitas
Rated: 1st-2nd Years • Summary: She laughs and turns, eyes set on the door on the other side of the kitchen. Her hand touches the doorknob, cold but inviting. Light envelops her as she steps out into her imagination. Open the door, child, her grandmother once said to her. Your imagination is waiting. On a beautiful summer afternoon, a child learns of her two worlds--reality and imagination--and what she must do only six years later in order to keep both in existence.
Date: 03/18/07 Title: Chapter 1: As the Wall Crumbles
hey. i really like the story but it would be so much better if you wrote in a normal format!!!! please, please, go ahead and keep this one on, but please also submit the same story in the usual format. id love to read it
Author's Response: Er, I\'m not sure what you mean by normal format. Do you mean the quotation marks? But thanks for reviewing. I was afraid that my paragraph formatting was off, and it was, and I fixed it. LOL.
Clair De Lune by Astrid Skywalker
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary:
It was full moon when the Dark Lord sealed a part of his soul within a magical amulet, and then broke it in half. One half was left to the faithful werewolves to guard. The other half was tossed into the impenetrable depths of time where no one but him could get it. When the first half has been found, the Order of the Phoenix selects Hermione Granger to go back into the past to search for the missing piece. What is waiting for her is a brutal task that will test her beyond her limits, and an undying love that extends beyond the boundaries of time.
RL/HG, Post-HBP
No werewolves were harmed in the making of this story.
Winner of 2007 Quicksilver Quills Awards - Best Non-Canon Romance
Update (9 May): Chapter 17, Burning, is up! Enjoy!
Date: 04/18/07 Title: Chapter 15: He's Harry's Dad
two words for you: B-R-I-L L-I-A-N-T!
I love this fic. even without your beta, it came out perfect.
I really have no idea where the plot is going but i am still trying to figure out whats going on with the ring that remus gave her.
She ould have to stay back in time to give him the ring but that doesnt work because then she wont be with him in the future.
every tiem i htink about it i get cnfused but i love the story! update now
Author's Response: Heehee, thank you so much! : D Yeah, something\'s weird about that ring and her jeans, eh? Wonder how that\'ll work out... >.>...
Date: 03/05/07 Title: Chapter 14: Written in the Stars
number one: absolutely brilliant. if u wrote a book, id buy it. ur writing skills/style is really developed. i wish i could write like that.
im kind of in to sociology. ive noticed you have a great knowledge of myth mostly the classics and some greek/latin.
that gave me 2 guesses: femal 18-24
or male-i have no idea how old. i was jsut curious. british? just wondering.
anyway, i really think its amazing. a brilliant story, brilliant character devlopment, brilliant writing and sense of humour where it should be.
u really have me contemplating particularly in regard to the ring fitting and how things will be with ehr and lupin when she gets back...if she does and the reprucussions of her not returning.
dam! its so good.
Paying the Price by hearyoume
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary: After failing to complete the task given to him by Voldemort, Draco turns to the Order for help- and becomes a member. During his seventh year at Hogwarts, he must tell no one of his true loyalties. However, when he and Ginny are forced to spend two weeks of detention together, she begins to catch on. It seems he hasn't fooled her, but will Draco be able to fool the most powerful Dark wizard in the world? If so, at what price?
Date: 06/26/06 Title: Chapter 13: Confrontations
This is crazy good! i mean..........woh! yeah.
Author's Response: :D Thank you! Glad you like it.
Date: 06/26/06 Title: Chapter 13: Confrontations
This is crazy good! i mean..........woh! yeah.
Author's Response: (:
Why Me?! by Lillian Potter
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Lily is frustrated at life. Petunia is horrible to her, her parents know nothing about her world, and, most of all, James Potter simply won’t leave her alone. Having endured him for the past six years, Lily is determined not to let him ruin her last year as Head Girl. But she’s in for a surprise: Potter has now become an authority figure. Can she possibly set aside her hate for him, or will they bring walls of Hogwarts crashing down over their arguments?
Date: 03/19/06 Title: Chapter 2: The Trainride to Home
ur still doign great. nothing in particular i want to see except, please, please, please, dont, do not, never, have james gfight off Voldemort or something. i think that would be abit corniy
Date: 03/11/06 Title: Chapter 1: Goodbye
This was really great. I mean, im completely not into romance, but i just thought, whatever ill take a look at it. its perfiect. not completely clear what will happen next, the parents act like all parents do and James is not so arrogant that we will hate his character but just enough. the only thing i had a problem with was when u said that lily knew james would take the comment "to heart". that doesnt sound like james. We dont yet know hes sentimental. really good!
A Destiny in Time by Gmariam
Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Summary: Harry Potter has fulfilled his destiny, and survived his final confrontation with Voldemort; the Dark Lord has been vanquished, but at a terrible price. Dozens are dead, including some of those closest to Harry, and he blames only himself for failing them. Desperate, he returns to Hogwarts hoping to change what has happened and save those he loves. In doing so he unknowingly saves himself, but the consequences require great sacrifice.
This short story is now complete. It begins on the battlefield just after Harry’s duel with Voldemort, and follows Harry as he tries desperately to right the mistakes of the past, only to rewrite his own future.
Date: 04/18/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six: Farewell
to be honest, i initally wasnt thrilled but kept reading snce i new it wa short.
The first sign of brilliance was when i realized the way you had done the time trner thingy. it was amazing. i only realized that was going to happen at the last moment.
but the rel part that went BAMM!!! whe i read it was the last chapter.
It was amzing, fantastic, heart wrenching. it was so sad but when an author can mkae you feel sad for the characters, that when there's tallent.
but the part that really bugs me is that until right now i was sure Harry lives because A) harry dying would be stupid (ithought) and B) the homeric story ends with the character alive and having passed their test and C) it would seem like a cheap way to prevent sequels.
but when i rea tis i realized that harry dying can be super sad but also could really succceed. thank you so much for this fic! definitely going to my favorites.
Author's Response: Hi there,
Your review made me giggle at first.=) I am so glad you kept reading, for whatever the reasons! I am thrilled you enjoyed it, it means a lot to me when people read this story because I worked truly hard on it. I know it\'s sad, I am glad you still liked it even with the tragic ending I\'ve given Harry. Hopefully in a few months things will turn out a bit better for our hero, but it seems possible to me that he may not survive, and this story just wouldn\'t allow it. I really appreciate all your kind words and wonderful comments. Thanks again for reading this story and for the great review!! ~Gina :)