11/23/04
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(made by witchwannaB)
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Date: 02/08/05 Title: None
Good. You mentioned in the summary it was short, but trust me, it's the perfect length. I look forward to new advancements of this story more than any other.
Author's Response: Thanks. I played around with the idea of another brief scene taking place on the deck behind Harry's condo. It sounded to much like a similar scene in chapter one, so I dropped it and about 750 words worth with it. Thanks for the review.
Date: 06/17/05 Title: None
Hi Vader! *waves frantically* I'm bored so I just thought I'd give you some moral support for finishing that next chapter...get over that writer's block! (don't tell me it's just you're getting better ideas -- believe me, it's writer's block) OH, and if you have the time, please R&R one of my stories...you can ignore the Romance categorization on "Pound," it's really poetry. *grins* Rating your story a 9 because I want you to keep on writing it...
Date: 04/11/05 Title: None
Ooh great cliffhanger there. And I really liked how Hermione asked Harry what he saw in Cho and told him she hoped he would find in Cho what he was looking for and then later Cho said the same things about Harry and Hermione. Good job! I'm really anxious for the fifth chapter to come. Rating this an 8.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review wwB, I appreciate it. I'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for taking the time to let me know what you thought.
Date: 01/16/05 Title: None
Wonderful. I loved it and I'm a R/Hr shipper, too. I applaud and look forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you! I still have a bit of work left on the next chapter, but I'm hoping for it to be done early in the week.
Date: 01/30/05 Title: None
Cute! But I do believe Gryffindor's colors are red and gold, not maroon and gold.
Author's Response: Really? I can't believe no one else has pointed this out to me so far. Thanks so much for pointing it out. I have no clue how I messed that one up. Possibly because my school colors where Maroon and Gold??? I love making excuses for bonehead mistakes. =)
Author's Response: I checked my facts and stand corrected! Don't know where I left my brain when I wrote that. Thanks witchwannaB!!!
Date: 01/31/05 Title: None
Whoops, I realized I gave you a pretty bad and meaningless review the other day, though I did find that one mistake. However, parts of your story are confusing. I couldn't follow what was happening when Harry was dreaming, then went over to Hermione's and found Seamus there, then all of a sudden you were talking about how Seamus and Dean had asked Harry to go clubbing with them, then you mentioned Seamus staring at Harry's picture of Hermione. It was all very confusing.
Author's Response: I will read over that part again. I thought the transition was fairly sharp, and obvious from dream to reality, signified by beeps. I guess I could have set the dream off in italics or some thing to make it more obvious, but I'm not a big fan of that. If readers can't tell Harry is dreaming, I'm not doing a good job writing it. I'll have to look at it again. Hey, I really appreciate your honest feedback! Thank you very much!
Date: 05/15/05 Title: None
This was confusing. I have no idea who exactly Jennifer and Ivy are, and the only hints as to whether these people are Muggles or wizards and witches is them praying and the use of the word 'nurse.' You're trying to explain everything that's happened before this while telling what's happening now, and it's just too much. Rating this a 6 only because it seems like you have a good idea of what your story will be about and it's a good and new idea.
I love...who? by Hermiones_Revenge
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Harry writes a love note to one person...but someone else recieves it and gets the wrong idea. From here, confusion and chaos come about. Who is really sending the notes? Who really likes who? What is going on?!
Date: 03/30/05 Title: Chapter 1: The Note
This is very cute and yet at the same time hilarious. I have a feeling it will be on my favorites by the time I'm done reading. Good job so far! And you get applause for supporting R/Hr, my favorite ship! Rating this a 6.
Author's Response: Yay R/Hr
Date: 03/30/05 Title: Chapter 2: Results of a Miscomunication
Oh my, this is getting rather complicated, isn't it? I'm laughing my head off. Rating this a 7.
Date: 03/30/05 Title: Chapter 3: Likely and Unlikely Pairs
My head is reeling from all that is going on here. It's kind of hard to keep track. But other than that this is a pretty cool fic so far! Rating this a 7.
Author's Response: It's supposed to be hard to keep track of, that's part of the humor
Date: 03/30/05 Title: Chapter 5: Two down...
Oh my, this is too much, this is much too much....again, it's a bit confusing. But I love it anyway! And I totally despise H/G! Wow! Rating this a 7 yet again.
Date: 03/30/05 Title: Chapter 7: Bagels
I would have reviewed the last chapter but it wouldn't let me. Sorry about that. But arguing about BAGELS?!?! That is really random, which is why it's even funnier.....I'm still laughing. Rating this an 8. Good job!
Author's Response: Thanks
Date: 03/30/05 Title: Chapter 8: I can see clearly now (sort of)
A perfect ending! And you didn't pair Draco with Pansy! I LOVE YOU! Rating this last chapter an 8. Good job! This fic is going on my favorites list.
Author's Response: I didn't want Pansy to just randomly enter the story...though Millicent Bulstrode kind of did...oh well
The Mirror of My Dreams by LadyJenilyn
Rated: •Summary: A young waitress at the Cafe Du Monde in New Orleans attempts to help a lost Draco, gets hunted down by an angry Lucius and discovers much about her past, her identity and her future in the Wizarding world.
Date: 02/16/05 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One
A good start. However, it doesn't seem to me as if you really know the French. Do some research if you need to, and put in something about the accent she'd have if she was speaking English with him or the accent he'd have if he was speaking French with her.
Date: 02/16/05 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two
A wonderful ending to this chapter. But if you ask me, that should've happened much later in the fic. Also, Draco should be covering up his little slips much more and most definetly should not be showing Mirael his wizarding money.
Date: 04/20/05 Title: None
Two words, Lex: pure genius. I love it. And there are no grammar errors and everything flows very nicely. Giving this a 9.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you very much! I like to get new readers. Glad you were interested in reading. ;)
Date: 05/23/05 Title: None
*shakes fist at Krum* You stupid, can't you recognized canon when you see it? Rating this a 6.
Author's Response: Oooooh, I hope this doesn't stop you reading! Please keep reading, there'll be plenty of Ron/Hermione moments! Thanks for the reviews!
Collected Works of Semony Lnicket by x2pttrclue32
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary:
Dear Reader,
If you are like collecter, you might enjoy to collect things. Some of you might collect sea shells, or books, or dictionaries. But of all things, I hope with all my heart that none of you collect dismal stories. The chapters that you are about to read contain parts of the story of Harry Potter.
In fact, the horrendous things in this collection are too numerous to name. I wouldn't think of mentioning such things as an evil wizard, birthday presents, ghosts, an owl, or a spider-filled closet.
I have put these renditions of this disaterous tale together for the sake of my research, but you might be better off walking away from this story, and collecting dictionaries instead.
With all due respect,
Semony Lnicket
P.S. This chapters in this collection may be read in any order you please. Although, it would probably please you more if you did not read them at all.
Date: 02/15/05 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One: The Boy Who Didn't Die
OMG this is really good! You are now on my favorite authors list because you are a wonderful writer and your stories ROCK! I found a couple of typos but other than that it's good. You have the writing style of Lemony Snicket down very well. Good job! I look forward to the next chapters. :)