11/23/04
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~The Truth Uncovered~ by psychofreak
Rated: •Summary: This is Ronald Weasley's last year at Hogwarts and has recieved everything he once saw in the Mirror of Erised. He's become Head Boy, holds the Quidditch Cup, and actually looks good. But there's someone missing in the Mirror.
Date: 12/31/04 Title: Chapter 19: The Distance Relationship
I cannot wait to see what happens....keep up the good work! :)
Author's Response: You also! Oh, and thank you for recommending my story on the MNff forum. I also recommended your story...but thank you! I really appreciated that! I'm just waiting for my approval. But Happy New Year! Peace Out!!
Date: 12/05/04 Title: Chapter 12: ~Halloween Dance~uncut
Tricking us was so not cool........I LOVE YOU!!!!
Yeah, it did seem kind of weird with the child-proof lock and him proposing so soon.....
but Hermione refusing was so in character it was hard to tell if it was real or not! Good job!
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm sorry about tricking you...and you all who like to read other peoples reviews! lol. "I love you too"...sort of?? lol. And yes, of course it seemed weird with the child proof lock and him proposing! lol. But I needed to put in an answer for Hermione that still showed that it was somewhat real! So that you might still think of it as a real ending and not a Fake or a Joke! lol. Thanks, for the awesome review...this one made me feel happy that people can take a joke! lol. Peace Out!!
Date: 12/05/04 Title: Chapter 13: Letters From Lucy
I'm sorry but Ron kissing Lucy back was soooo not cool! YOU SUCK NOW!!!!!!!!! (well, not entirely, but still.....) And wow is Hermione pissed off.......I can't wait to see what happens next!
Oh, and please, people, read my story
What's Really Inside Harry's Head (and other thoughts)
Author's Response: LOL...I suck now...*goes into corner hiding* Tear...well I don't freaking care! lol. Just kidding! lol. And of course Hermione is pissed off, she kicked Lucy's butt! lol. And I'll come and read your story! I'm sorry I forgot to look at your Bio...I'm on my way after I finish responding to my reviews! Peace Out!!
Date: 11/29/04 Title: Chapter 10: Number One Fan
Wow, why did Harry say that totally gross thing that I won't repeat here? That is so totally not his character.......bad author! No dinner tonight for you!
Author's Response: LOL...I took that from my friend, like I said in my other reviews and everthing. Its mostly based on my friends and me, because I guess I have a interesting life! lol. But I put that there, because hello how are you going to get people out of your common room before a Professor comes barging in! lol. And yes, I'll recieve the slap on the arm for that! Ouch, I didn't mean it to be that hard!! lol. And okay...I'll go into my room and cry in the corner...I hear voices in my head, I see people who are dead...humph...Peace Out!!
Date: 11/30/04 Title: Chapter 11: Halloween Dance
ooh, Hermione had better said no only because she doesn't feel ready to do that kind of stuff yet..........if it's not because of that i'm going to kill the author!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Yeah, she said no because she doesn't feel ready to get married at all. Come on, their relationship was only month or so. Um...the stuff about killing the author...I hope you're joking...hehe?? Well I don't mind you killing me! Do you want my street address?! lol. Thanks for the review...don't worry things will get better! lol. Peace Out!!
Date: 12/29/04 Title: Chapter 18: Lab Rats for Weasley Wizard Wheezes
I still don't get why they decided to test things for the twins....can I hope that I'll find out in the next chapter?
Author's Response: They decided to test somethings for the twins, to get money! Remember, Fred and George are the rich ones in the family...so in order to get Hermione back, Ron thinks he needs money to do so! lol. But you'll find out more in the next chapter! lol. Peace Out!!
Date: 11/28/04 Title: Chapter 9: The Quarrel
Nice story.......it's on my favorites list........some grammar errors and stuff and a little confusing at times........but I like it! The only thing I'd change is that Ron is like not himself now........I mean, he definetly is able to love and junk but that's not exactly his character to be completely and always like that. Oh well, it's good anyway.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you've read my story. Wow, I really like your comments okay...lets tackle them.
Okay...I know I should go back and check on my grammar, but I'm to lazy and for that I'm sorry. But I'll pick a date this weekend to go back and fix it! Okay! I know it seems some what confusing, because I switch from 3rd POV to 1st at times, but you can tell the difference because of the paragraphs. I hope that helps, plus I didn't want to write in "I's" all the time, it seemed to boring.
Yes, I know that Ron isn't a love sick puppy, but come to think of it. He does change his personality a lot! And for that I blame my friends and their situations that I put him through. lol. I'm mostly basing this story off of them, and trying to stay true to his character, but he does have outburst here and there, so don't worry. I'm not slipping that far away from his original character, I'm just touching the line outside of the circle for a while! lol. But wow, I'm on your favorite list. Thank you, that really means a lot!! Well I'm glad you think my story is good, but I think things are getting better and better don't you think? lol. Peace Out!!
Date: 03/09/05 Title: None
First, let me applaud you for supporting R/Hr, my favorite ship. *applauds* But anyway, I thought it was nice, though rather fluffy. You could've included much more feeling, however. But no grammar errors, good job!
Swapping with Snape by Loz
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Thanks to an ingenious plan of Dumbledore's, Severus Snape and Harry Potter swap bodies. They're doing this to fight Voldemort.
Dumbledore says it's the only way Harry can survive. But can Snape get over the trials and tribulations of being a teenager again, and can Harry battle unruly Potions students and greasy black hair?
In short - will either of them survive?
The latest chapter is shown from Snape's point of view.
Date: 02/02/05 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve
This is getting pretty funny....I like how you've shown that the two are starting to realize things about the other and take on habits of the other as well, which I do believe WOULD happen in real life if this were to happen. You're doing a fine job so far.
Journey to Perfection by Lycanthropist
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary: Remus Lupin has not always had an easy or a happy life, but now after resigning from a job he loved and enjoyed, he's forced to once again sulk on his lonely and bitter existence. Wallowing in his self-pity, Remus ventures into the Hog's Head, only to meet a erudite woman that may just help to disrupt the monotony his life has become. Remus/OC, Post-POA.
Date: 03/02/05 Title: Chapter 1: Meetings in Pubs
A nice beginning. Isabelle seems like she might slip into Mary Sue-dom if you're not careful, but I can already see that her good looks are very well balanced with her personality. You had a few typos: you capitalized 'host' when describing the first of the other three people in the Hogs Head, and added an 'e' onto the end of 'shit' in the paragraph containing the words Isabelle says before she leaves the pub. I look forward to reading the next chapters of this.
Author's Response: Isabelle's practically the antithesis of Mary-Sue, but as you said, her personality will later balance her looks. The 'e' at the end of 'shit' was there on purpose. Thank you for reviewing.
Date: 03/02/05 Title: Chapter 2: Homes of Pessimists
I loved your few lines about the home at the beginning of the chapter, I can easily see you're setting up your story for plenty of secrets and events to come, as well as throughly creating in-depth characters both with Isabelle and Remus. However, you are giving your readers little incentive to read on. Please try to work on that.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing.
Date: 03/03/05 Title: Chapter 4: Poems and Apologies
That was an awfully cute way to apologize. And with Wolfsbane, that's really thoughtful. *awww*
Author's Response: LOL, I loved her apology. It took me a good five or six drafts to write the damn poem, so I hoped it came across okay. Thank you for reviewing! :)
Date: 01/07/05 Title: None
This seems to be an interesting story so far, and, even better, I didn't find any grammar errors! I think I'll thank your beta for that. :) I don't really understand why Harry just left the Burrow, though.
Date: 01/07/05 Title: None
Cute, and, yet again, no grammar errors. *cheers* However, I am fully confused as to what happened that Bill need Mrs. Weasley for....
Author's Response: Thank you! Your reviews mean a lot, and yay! No grammar errors thanks to my wonderful beta, Kibblemouse :). (About Bill: even after all these years of being a Weasley and participating in Weasley accidents, he is still a bit squeamish over the sound of broken bones and got a little shaken)
Date: 01/14/05 Title: None
Ooh, you included a dream, that's a very good plot device you have there! Dreams can be symbolic and hint at things to come.....
Date: 01/14/05 Title: None
Lovely work here. Lots of plot and mystery. I am quite anxious to know what is happening. Congrats!
To Sever the Lining from a Cloud by Textualsphinx
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: This tale of the teacher whom everyone loathes,
Accounts for his anger and elegant clothes.
It dripped through my mind when, too scantily cloaked,
I got caught in a rainstorm and throughly soaked.
WARNING: Despite the glints of humour, you will need a handkerchief.
Date: 02/04/05 Title: Chapter 1: One shot
This is seriously the best fic I've ever read. You are right: everyone can love, and wants to love, and longs for love. People who do not seem to have these qualities have been hurt by people they loved, or else made a sacrifice with love that backfired or had a horrible effect. This cloth was woven evenly and with obvious skill and talent; it is beautiful and all love it. *proceeds to give you a standing ovation*
The Secret thoughts of Hermione Granger by Hermiones_Revenge
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Hermione describes her Ron troubles in this series of hilarious journal entries, notes passed in class, and lists. And...Mrs Norris is a duck?
NOTE: This was written quite some time ago, in my younger years. It was my first story...which should explain a lot.
Date: 11/30/04 Title: Chapter 4: Detention isn't always bad
randomness....... i love it though!
Date: 12/08/04 Title: None
Everything's happening way too fast! You need to slow it down! But I totally like the idea of having an American witch or wizard come to Hogwarts for a year......work with it!
Author's Response: I like fast! Fast is GOOD! W/e and Meg is staying in England for Seventh Year and maybe longer. *hint hint*