11/23/04
I no longer update on here. All of my more recent fan fiction can be found here.
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And Fate Be.... by Seren
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: "No one stops to consider for a moment why I'm so dependent on those books of mine, why I have so many. I am different. I do not prattle, I do not gossip, I do not twirl my hair and flutter my lashes. Clothing is meant to cover my nakedness, not flaunt my body. I am not covered in cosmetics, nor do I read the silly rags that the girls in my dorm read. I seek knowledge, and truth. I want permission to be myself. I want to walk down the halls of my school, of my world, without hearing the half-whispered remarks about me. I want to sit with my friends, and know that they appreciate my company, and not the fact that I can revise their homework. I want to live." A moment in Hermione's life, where she contemplates her past, present, and future.
Date: 02/02/05 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot
I'm almost crying. And I believe that's all I need to say except THANK YOU.
Lily, James and Harry Potter by Mad_as_a_Fishie
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Lily and James are getting on rather peacefully with their lives when Dumbledore arrives to inform them that they have been marked for death by Lord Voldemort. They enlist the help of James's, best friend, Sirius Black who makes a suggestion that could change their fates dramatically.
Date: 11/29/04 Title: Chapter 3: Padfoot's Pain
Keep on writing, hurry, hurry! Or is the story finished? I love it, though.........poor Sirius! *cries*
Author's Response: Lol, actually that is supposed to be the end. I could write some more if you give me some ideas of what to write. I just thought that Sirius being thrown into Azkaban was a natural place to end. But if you want more then I could easily carry on. Just say the word. :-)
Unexpected Love by anticrombie0919
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: MASSIVE REDO FOR THIS STORY
I'm going through and completely updating it. The plot will basically be the same, but I'm going to-hopefully-make the writing better.
Wish me luck!
STORY IS NOW ON FANFICTION.NET!!!!! NAME HAS BEEN CHANGED TO UNPREDICTED LOVE! This is my first fic so I'm sorry about any mistakes! Summary: Draco and Hermione are both heads, faced with the challenge of being able to stay in the same room for more than five minutes without arguing. Is it possible? And if it is, what happens when Draco and Hermione are able to get along? Maybe a little GA, not quite sure but it will be updated if that changes.
PLEASE READ! Constructive critism wanted!
everything Harry Potter related is owned by JK Rowling (characters, settings, and main ideas, etc. etc.) and all movie rights are owned by Warner Bros.
Date: 02/10/05 Title: Chapter 1: Malfoy
Let me point out that since Muggle technology doesn't work near magic, and the Hogwarts Express is powered by magic, Hermione's laptop wouldn't work on it and so she wouldn't even bother bringing it. Additionally, I protest to you making Hermione pretty; this is robbing Hermione of one of the main factors of her personality. OH, and Quidditch is capitalized, and why in the world are Harry and Ron talking about the Quidditch World Cup three years after the fact? However, I am interested in where this seems to be going and will keep on reading.
Date: 02/14/05 Title: Chapter 4: Fun First Day Back
You are making it incredibly obvious that you are an American even to other Americans like me. Stop using 'shag' at least twice every chapter. Wicked means cool. No one in Britain has EVER said bloody shit. I suggest you do some research on British slang and use it only where needed.
Date: 02/14/05 Title: Chapter 5: The Bathroom
The magical community does not have alarm clocks. And isn't this chapter much too short?
The Epicly Bad Tale of Ron and Hermione by Seren
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: I hate you! You're such a nerd! I hate you! You're so oblivious! The beginning of the Epicly Bad Tale Trilogy, in which Ron and Hermione bicker, scream, and throw members of the Creevey family at one another. With cameos from various AF members and Jesus. Written partially as a direct poke in the eye at the HP fandom. Scriptfic.
Date: 01/20/05 Title: Chapter 1: Part One
God, Seren, I am laughing sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo hard, I'm really glad I decided to look at some of your fics and picked out this! You did a fine, fine, fine job on this! *Applauds.* And I love how you're making fun of fan fic with fan fic....*bursts into hysterical laughter*
Date: 01/22/05 Title: Chapter 2: Fatal Engagement
Whoops, read this yesterday but forgot to review....it's great, but it gets hard to understand when you default to using intials for the character's names. Now, I can easily understand who 'R,' 'H,' and 'Hr' are, but 'L' ? That took me a little while to figure out. Could you please change it?
My Brother, My Friend by Philo
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: As Ginny studies Ron one night in the Common Room she is filled with love, pride, and memories. One-shot, but may become a series of one-shots
Date: 01/19/05 Title: Chapter 1: One
Very cute. Keep it a one-shot, it's perfect that way. You're on my favorite authors list, and your two fics are on my favorite stories list because you're really good!
Date: 11/29/04 Title: None
YEA A SEQUEL FOR HOGWARTS SWEETHEARTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Keep on writing, I wanna here more!
Author's Response: okay, so your last review on HS was good! now it's all suddenly coming clear! thanks!!
Date: 11/30/04 Title: None
ooh, yeah, do that! A story continuing from where Hogwarts Sweethearts left off or about Ella would be really cool!
Author's Response: hmm, same as the last response! once my Dark/Angsty fic is done, then i'll work more closly on this one, then when all of them are done, i may do one about Ella, or something. but that might not happen, it's like predicting whether or not JKR will write an eight book. i just don't know. thanks!
Why Hermione Is Different Than All The Other Girls by GwendolynJames
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: If Hermione hadn't met the boys on the train that first day, things would most certainly be different. Featuring Metro!Ron, Loser!Harry, Stalker!Hermione, and Smoker!Ginny.
Date: 12/04/04 Title: Chapter 1: Why Hermione Is Different Than All The Other Girls
cute, i love it! but having Ginny being a chain smoker was soooooooooooo not cool.....
Oh the Insanity - The Thoughts of Hermione Granger by Hermiones_Revenge
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: A series of hilarious journal entries and lists from Hermione, describing the insane "war" she has gotten herself into with Parvati. Insanity, and hilarity, ensue... A sequel to "The Secret Thoughts of Hermione Granger" (though it'll make sense if you haven't read it)
Note: Another story from "back in the day."
Date: 01/04/05 Title: Chapter 5: Hermione's revenge
*runs full-speed into reviewing section, skids to stop herself which causes her to fall on her butt, gets up and starts laughing, crying, cheering, and jumping up and down all at the same time* YOU INCLUDED FLAMINGOES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: please, do not hurt yourself.
Date: 01/18/05 Title: Chapter 8: Trouble in the Dragon's Lair
Wonderful twist, but it was a little too obvious, especially with that A/N at the end of last chapter...oh well, it's still good! :) I absolutely LOVE Ron's lists, keep them coming!
Date: 12/04/04 Title: Chapter 2: Parvati's Revenge
Hermione sounds like she's high or something when that potion is "addling with her brain."
Whatever, it's good anyway. Keep on writing!
Author's Response: The whole thing about Hermione going nuts on that potion was inspired by my behavior when I was on heavy pain killers after getting four impacted wisdom teeth removed. At the time, I didn't realize I was acting funny. It wasn't until later when someone mentioned "how weird I was" that week that I realized that I was not normal during that time period.
Date: 01/27/05 Title: Chapter 10: The Truth Revealed
pretty good, i especially like the use of fred and george inventions
Date: 12/02/04 Title: Chapter 1: Crazy Partys and Evil Plots
good so far.....
we have no idea HOW Hermione ended up being Ron's girlfriend but it works completly fine w/out that......
write more please!
Author's Response: This is a sequel - read it and you'll find out the HOW.
Date: 12/09/04 Title: Chapter 4: Parvati's Revenge...Again
Yeah, the toast was totally random and hilarious......but I LOVE PARVATI!! She's like my favorite girl character in the books.....why oh why do you have to make her evil???
(don't listen to me, just keep on writing)
Author's Response: I have nothing against Pavati - I swear - it's just that I had to make SOMEONE evil.
Date: 12/07/04 Title: Chapter 3: Ron's Revenge
YEA YOU INCLUDED FLAMINGOES!!!!!!!!!!!!
........i would have been better if Ron had actually done that, though...........................
that would have been HILARIOUS
plus i would have loved you to death..............
oh, well, maybe next time.......*sigh*
Author's Response: Next time...hmm...just for that, I promise to include someone bewitching a flock of flamingoes to follow someone else in a future chapter. NOTE: this does not necessarily mean my next chapter...though maybe... Thanks!
Date: 01/05/05 Title: Chapter 6: An Inopportune Time to Act Out of Character
WHAT DID YOU DO TO RON??????? He is my favorite boy character in the books and he is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo hott.......
Author's Response: Wow, I didn't think people would get so hung up on the fact that Ron was suspiciously missing! I thought they'd just think, "Oh, I wonder where he is...that's suspicious!" Check for updates...eventually!
Date: 01/10/05 Title: Chapter 7: Stuck to a shelf in a pink dress
I simply LOVED #2 on Ron's list of ways to get rid of Harry....*starts cracking up again*
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! (wait...what's #2...now I have to go back and read my own story...)
Author's Response: Oh, THAT #2...haha