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(made by witchwannaB)
Very nicely finished. *gives you a standing ovation*
Author's Response: Thank you.
like that other reader said, poor, poor Ron!
And, seriously, if Seamus has been living with Hermione for the past two years and going out with her even longer you'd think he'd know her better.....KEEP ON WRITING!!!!!
Author's Response: yeah you'd think but then again they aren't really supposed to be together are they? lol...thanks for review too!
Whoops, accidentally clicked submit before I was finished....Becky's accent was annoying me. It seems you were mixing the accents Fleur Delacour and Viktor Krum.
Author's Response: maybe..sorry bout that! i try to avoid accents!
*starts crying* OH NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Poor Ron. Poor, poor, poor Ron. Wow, I'm really getting into this, aren't I? *laughs and wipes tears off face* It's good, lots of cliff-hangers!
Author's Response: yeah i noe lol. wait till later chappies! i'm glad your enjoying it thoo!!!
dude you included flamingoes!
I_HEART_FLAMINGOES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
you rock!
and this fan fic is soooooooooooooo random....
a little TOO random, surprisingly enough
Author's Response: the flamingoes thing was sort of a fluke! i meant to say "Psycho Pink teddy bears" but something on tv caught my attention and i wrote Flamingoes! i think it's alot funnier! hey, too random never hurt anybody! thanks! you rock too!
I LOVE IT!!!!! WHOEVER WROTE THIS IS A GENIUS!!!!!!!
Aw, I love it! How odd, this is the second fan fic I've read pairing Draco and Luna...........
a very, very odd pair but it seems to work.
Good job!
Author's Response: Hmm, perhaps it's the next DRAMIONE-LIKE pairing, eh? No? Nah, probably not.
Awww, that was sooooo cute and yet completly not fluff. The ending was purrfect...kissing rocks! Good job, Gringotts! Rating this a 9 and leaving it on my favorites list.
OMG THAT IS SO RANDOM!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(but you're crazy)
Author's Response: thanks!!!
Is anything going to happen that's vaguely interesting between Hermione and Draco?
Hurry up so there will be something juicy for me to read! :)
Author's Response: There will be something "interesting" between Hermione and Draco coming soon. I was going to put something in chapter 5, but I changed my mind and decided to make everyone wait! :) I guarantee something will happen in chapter 6 or 7...if I'm in a good mood (you better e-mail my sister and tell her to be nice to me)...
This is pretty good so far. I especially like your idea of a Slytherin/Gryffindor pair, and can already see the connection you have that will bring them together.
I have a feeling I know what's wrong about the prophecy......good use of the horizontal rules, it's much clearer now.
Author's Response: Ooh, some one who might be catching on! Great :) Thanks, it was a real debate before hand, and I figured if someone told me to make either horizontal rules, or add another space, I would - so thanks for that comment.
You need to put some horizontal rules (
This is getting rather exciting.....
Author's Response: Thanks, I am glad you think so.
Hermione's patronus is an otter.
Why is Padma in Gryffindor House? She's a Ravenclaw. I think you mean Parvati.
Author's Response: I knew that she was an otter based on a previous review, and JKR's site recently - just didn't update it yet. As for Parvati/Padma - wow? Where did I go wrong? I thought that was flip-flopped. Thank you so much for pointing that out, and I will fix it right away.
*confusing*
Author's Response: Eek - I hope to have everything sorted out next chapter.
One word: FREAKY.
Author's Response: Ohh, good word to choose. Thanks for the review.
Hey, you, author person! If you kill both Hermione and Harry, I'M killing YOU! (just kidding)
Author's Response: Ha Ha Ha - Who knows? Oh - thats right - I do! lol.