11/23/04
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Date: 12/06/04 Title: None
Advertising....... A Day in the Life of Cornelius Fudge by x2pttrclue32 What's Really Inside Harry's Head (and other thoughts) by witchwannaB READ THEM!!!!!!
Date: 02/18/05 Title: None
A wonderful idea and so far a pretty good story. I love how you've successfully brought Blaise out of the shadows and given him a quite believable personality. The use of the Founders' rooms for the Heads just for this year is also a new and seemingly well-thought out idea. *applauds*
Date: 02/26/05 Title: None
Whoops, found a little glitch in your story: If Dippet ended the practice of the Heads living in the Founders' quarters, then James and Lily would've been in them, and in the same room! Definetly not allowed.
Wings of Defeat by LordofBling
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Voldemort has been defeated but the infamous Lucius Malfoy is still at large. Can Harry overcome grief filled memories to find him? A/N: This is my first fanfic, so please be kind.
Date: 12/08/04 Title: Chapter 1: The Frozen Past
WEIRD!!!!
And why in the world did Snape of all people save Harry???
BTW, you should read my stories!!!
Author's Response: You'll find out about the Snape thing, but put a another review up with the names of your stories!
Date: 12/08/04 Title: Chapter 1: The Frozen Past
You just have to know MY name.......but I'll give them to you anyway........*sigh*.........
Chenoa............and................What's Really Inside Harry's Head (and other thoughts)
Author's Response: thanks for reveiwing again. I'm typing chapter2 sorry I'm the slowest typer in the world.
And I Saw Her by hammy
Rated: •Summary: Draco/OC fanfic..rated PG for a little language play.. Starts with a too familiar scene in Chapter 18, GoF. Written in three POV's: Hannah's, Draco's and a general POV. Please R&R. =He finally stopped, barely inches from me. The torch light illuminated his face, and as I racked my brain on what to do, I started noticing a few things that I hadn't seen before..like the way his magnificent gray eyes shone in the little light from the torch above me..how smooth his cheeks seemed to be..how distinct his facial features were..how his thin lips were inches from mine....
Date: 12/16/04 Title: Chapter 5: FIVE
Oh, man, I love it, I can just picture Tom Felton playing Draco in it and he looks soooooo hot......oh, um, sorry about that. Keep on writing your fic is on my fav story list and I check it every day for updates!
Date: 12/13/04 Title: Chapter 4: FOUR
Lovely. I wanna here more ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Interviews with Rita Skeeter by LO1
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Rita Skeeter has 7 minutes to quickly interview staff and Students of Hogwarts school of W&W! See what Hilarious antics that Skeeter woman will dish out as she hounds Harry, Ron, hermione, macgonagall, Snape, Moody, Trelawney, Draco, Dumbledore, hagrid, luna and lastly a special guest. Hopefully witty! Read and Review! please review! I beg of you! lol!
Date: 01/17/05 Title: Chapter 1: Quibbler Exclusive!!!!
Rather amusing. I applaud.
Date: 12/10/04 Title: None
Hmm....maybe NOT fluff after all....................
now you just have to write more!
Author's Response: cool! thanx for reviewing1
Date: 03/02/05 Title: None
Very funny. Wait, change that to EXTREMELY FUNNY. You have no idea how hard I laughed.
Date: 12/16/04 Title: None
It took awhile for me to figure out what was happening and a bit is still unclear....however, it is very beautiful and deep and I will be waiting for more.
Author's Response: Sorry if I confused you a bit but basically Remus' dad never wanted children and his wife was told she might not have any. When she did his father treated the first two okay but really abused his youngest Remus. The next chapter deals about the abuse and it does not involve the werewolf attack I decided.
Date: 01/18/05 Title: None
British kids call their parents mum and dad, not mom and father.
Author's Response: right....ill keep that in mind....thanx.
Date: 01/18/05 Title: None
One problem: Fred likes Angelina. If you want, George can like Alicia but we know that Fred and Angelina like each other as a fact.
Author's Response: my bad...i geuss i need to pay more attention to what im doing...lol
Date: 01/19/05 Title: None
You're off to a good start. Only one problem: since when are Padma and Lavender friends? Maybe you should change her into a fellow Ravenclaw.
The Redemption Of A Pureblood by Shena
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: A powerful spell is cast on a wizard who must take a chance at love if he wants to survive. How will he overcome his hatred of the world and everyone in it? How will love enter his stone cold heart? Presenting an appropriation of Beauty and the Beast.
Date: 04/26/05 Title: Chapter 1: Prelude
x2pttrclue32 recommended this to me and boy I am glad, I love it when people do things like this in fandom! *applauds* A good start but you do have some typos....elfs instead of elves included. Rating this a 7.
Author's Response: First of all, im glad you liked the first chapter.
Date: 04/26/05 Title: Chapter 2: Small Country Paradise
*eyes widen* You're basing this off of the Disney movie? Are you aware that there are Beauty and the Beast stories dating back to the Middle Ages in Europe, and ones in several other civilizations besides? Your story would a lot more interesting if you based it off of one of the original tale, not the movie. Rating this a 6.
Author's Response: You are probably right. I've only watched the disney cartoon however, and so don't know the original stories. I sort of just go the idea for this one night and liked it. I know its very similar to the disney vursion, but i enjoy writing it my way.
Date: 04/26/05 Title: Chapter 3: Darkness Falls
Oh my, I am terribly confused....she's being chased by werewolves but there's no moon? And how did she get out on the veranda? And wouldn't she be afraid that Malfoy would find her and kick her out of the grounds? Rating this a 6.
Author's Response: Ok, theres probably no moon because of the dense forest...if not then ive made a terrible error. She got on the veranda by running out the door...and yes she would be worried but she couldnt go out the gates because of the woelves...then sheer exhaustion put her to sleep even though she was afraid. Darn, 6. Oh well. Im glad you tried reading it anyway. Some chapters are better than others. Im sorry if your still confused-i thought it was pretty clear but then im not terribly great at explaining situations properly. Please let me know!
Tom Riddle and the Half Blood Prince by Zetera
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Parody of the Harry Potter series written and completed before the release of Harry Potter and the Half Blood Prince. It looks at the lives of some of the major characters as they wait impatiently for book six to arrive. Naturally, chaos ensues. Suitable for all.
Winner of the first annual Quicksilver Quills Award 2006 for best humor fiction. Thank you!
Date: 05/07/05 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three: The Postman Always Rings Twice
Okay, NOW it's getting funny. Very funny, in fact. I'll keep on reading. :D Rating this an 8.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Date: 05/07/05 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four: Dancing Against The Dark Arts
Funny, funny, funny. I'm laughing. Rating this an 8.
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks :-)
Date: 04/04/05 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One: Unfair!!!
Hmm, this wasn't nearly as funny as I thought it would be. Perhaps it will get better? But thankfully you have perfect grammar as far as I could tell, very good, very good. Rating this a 4.
Author's Response: Sorry about that. A four is a little harsh, but I understand if you didn't like it - maybe we just don't share the same sense of humor. I assume you're reviewing the first chapter, (the reviews come to me all mixed up, so I can't tell) hopefully you'll like it more as you read. Did someone recommend this to you? Maybe they built it up too much. Thanks for reviewing!