Loved it!! I loved each and every line, its beautiful. You've a great writing style, girl, you rock!!
Author's Response: yay! thanks ;)
Great interpretation of emotions, the poem goes in real deep. Loved the way you expressed their relationship. Keep writing.
Speechless. Just...keep writing, i would love to read more of you.
(PS-there're a few spelling errors in there, look out for them.)
Author's Response: I'll get to those ASAP, I promise. And don't worry, I'll be writing on here until I'm sick of the Potterverse (which will be never)
Fantastic. The poem got me in a mood to read more of Hr/D(which i swear i've never done before). Its actually quite sweet, especially the last bit. I've got to agree, you've got quite a creative imagination.
Author's Response: Yes, my nefarious plan to spread D/Hr is working! I\'m glad you enjoyed the poem, and thanks for the compliments.