wow, after 6 long years, I'm finally back. working on a new piece. the story is almost finished. I think you'll fall in love.
looking back at my old stories, I think, "what the bloody hell did I write?"
I think this is the most brilliant story I've read yet. Honestly, I thought this same thing and I can't believe someone actually wrote it. I was going to write a fic on what I thought, but I read yours and I don't want it to seem like copying. So well done, and I cannot wait for your next submission. Your story definitely keeps the reader interested. :)
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! Yeah, I'm pretty surprised I haven't seen more of these stories before, I've gotten a lot of people who have said they thought about this concept as well, but never actually got around to writing it. Anyway, thanks for the review, I really appreciate it!
Nice chapter! You kept Hermione's 'know-it-all'ism, and described it very well. There were a few words that stuck out to me though. You may want to look for a beta for Britishisms in your story.
I'm not a Hermione/Draco supporter but I love this story. It's unlikely yet believeable at the same time.
I'm not sure if I can actually see Draco talking to Hermione like that, but the bickering between them was excellent. If they have another argument like that, you should throw in a bit of the "old" Draco and have Hermione react confused or something on the different ways Draco communicates with her. Good chapter all around.
Very enjoyable. I love how Snape detects every insignificant aspect of her, showing he truely cares for her. Can't wait for an update!
Great story. Interesting enough to keep the reader pulled in.
Author's Response: thanks :) Chapter seven is up at
www.livejournal.com/users/hermioneiswho
This is so cute. I love it. I hope you update soon! 10
Author's Response: Thanks
It's extraordinary. I'm hoping you'll update soon. *saves in favourites*
This sounds like a very interesting game...I will have to try this some time. But enough being OT, I thought this was a very interesting beginning to seemingly hilarious story. This is definitely a humour I haven't read anything close to yet. There were a few faults about this chapter though. I think it could've been a little longer having Neville tell his story, and then it end with a new player beginning. Also, as I read I found quite a few capitalisation errors (i.e. Head of House, Gryffindor common room, Great Hall) I was wondering if you had a beta help you out with this story. With someone's help I think you could make this story even better. Also, don't forget to double space between paragraphs and dialogue. And finally, I don't think Dumbledore would prefer students to drink unless you're purposely having him be OOC. Humour stories have that exception. In all, I enjoyed this short prologue, I'll be waiting for an update, and I'm going to try this game very soon with my friends! I think this story has great potential to make me laugh and I can't wait. Nice job.
Author's Response: I've sent in the second chapter but its only just over 800 words long and I had real trouble getting it that long. Does anyone have any advice on how to lengthen up-and-comnig chapters?
Wo0t w0oT! Awesomeness!
Author's Response: Yay! :) (:
*claps* Please..continue..:)
*kisses fingertips* It is fantastik! lol
I give you a 10.
Author's Response: Thanks! Update Soaked in a Sea Of Envy soon!!!!!
Great job! I could definitely see Harry unsure, because of his past and people not telling him the full truth about other things. Update soon.
I always suspected Ginny and Neville..but anyway, great chapter.
I gots the chills.. :p lol The next chapter will be wicked. ;)
Author's Response: Like what kind of chills?????? TELL ME, OR I SHALL SMACK YOU WITH FRENCH BREAD!!! Sorry, latley I've been kind of obsessed with french bread...
The chills are good. Don't worry. And I can't wait to read chapter 8. :)
I don't mean to review for myself but I just wanted to let you know that chapter 9 is up but something is messed up. So I'm trying to figure out what.
lol! One room. Good beginning. Try to get into the description a bit more. Can't wait for an update! :)
lol! One room. Good beginning. Try to get into the description a bit more. Can't wait for an update! :)
AW!!! I love it!!