Just one question, isn't Harry's birthday in July? If The due dates the end of september, thats 3 months early! DEAD BABY!
I like it, but the ending is very cliche' and simple. I don't like the idea of it all being a dream.
Lovely story. Sexy yet tasteful. There were a few errors, just typo's really that the mod didn't seem to catch. The only thing I think you need is to do some brit-picking. But other than that I love the story so far, I'm a bit upset that I couldn't read chapter eight with the link you left though. I was really looking forward to it. This story deffinately keeps you hooked.
What he did to Madam Pomfrey sounds oddly familiar...
Author's Response: Doesn\'t it though? Shame on him! I\'m sure he was shocked when he walked in on them, but also he thought it looked...er...fun. Thanks for reading, Bewitching. - SIW
Oh my oh my oh my! I have waited for so long, then my computer crashed for what seemed like forever! It returns to its proper state and you have yet to update! I'm beggining to get anxious! I hope you know that your readers love your story so much that we twitch at the thought of waiting! But don't rush! Take your time and make your next chapter just as extrodinary as all of your others and don't allow anyone to rush you! Stay spectacular!
-Bewitching
Author's Response: Hi, Bewitching. The holidays and traveling really slowed things down. I was also working on an orignal story and several other fan fiction stories. Chapter 19 is posted. I\'m well into Chapter 20, but there is going to be a Chapter 21 for this story or the chapters would be way too long. I have two new works of art that will be posted with Chapter 20 and 21. Thanks for your interest. - SIW
And one last thing I forgot to mention! Buexbatons (sp?) is only an all girls school in the movies, but in the books, there is a point where a male Buexbatons student whispers to another. I don't know if you realized this, but I thought I ought to point it out.
-Bewitching
Author's Response: Hi, Bewitching! Pansy\'s family has business on the Continent, so Gareth, Pansy\'s oldest brother, met Clarice at a wizarding function in Paris. After they hit it off, Clarice introduced her friend from school, Isabella, to Gareth\'s younger brother, Reed. I haven\'t implied that only girls attended Beauxbatons, merely that Pansy\'s sisters-in-law attended the school.
I was quite annoyed when Beauxbatons was portrayed as an all-witch school and Durmstrang as an all-wizard school in the GoF movie. I guess it made for that dramatic \'dancing bird number\' the Beauxbatons witches did at the feast. lol So, yeah, I knew that, but thanks anyway. - SIW
Oh! Its Beauxbatons! Okay... I feel much better now! And I appologize for the spamming!
Author's Response: Thanks okay.
Author's Response: LOL! I meant to type, That\'s okay.
Atcually... I want Pansy with Kevin...
Am I strange for that?
Author's Response: Not at all, Bewitching. I can see why. Kevin doesn\'t have all the baggage Draco does, and he\'s attractive and charming. But is he right for Pansy? Thanks for reading. - SIW
new chapter anytime soon?
Author's Response: Yes, as soon as the queue reopens. - SIW
Very nice! Not what I expected, but great! Update again in a hurry!
Author's Response: Hi, Bewitching! I\'m working as fast as I can, juggling all my projects and RL. I\'m glad you\'re still with me. Only three more chapters for Part II. - SIW
Oh yes! his is so great! I loved it, great job. What is Part three called may I ask?
Author's Response: Hi, Bewitching! Thanks for reading my story. Part III will be called You Are Mine. I hope you\'ll give it a try when I post it. *hugs* - SIW
Okay, in the summary, it says Let Me Change Your Mind About The Slytherins You Love To Hate. You have to figure that the story is about a "good" Pansy and Draco. Only an idiot (*hinthint) wouldn't figure that out. And this is fanfiction, not loyalty world, I mean, if this were Loyalty World, then there wouldn't be H/Hr fics or H/D fics or evil Harry fics. Its a lace to show creativity, which anyone with a functioning brain (*hinthint*) should be able to do. Now stop leaving Theme Biassed (no idea if I spelled that right. *why I have an amazing beta) reviews to get attention.
P.S. You owe me SIW. :D
Author's Response: Sure, I\'ll owe you one, Bewitching. *wink* - SIW
HOW MUCH LONGER?????????? AHHHHH!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: The queue is down! As soon as I can, I\'m posting Chapter 17. -SIW
The queue is down? Thats weird, I just submitted 2 one-shots. Hmmmm... mugglenet is getting a bit buggy! I know, funny word...hehe, buggy...
Author's Response: It says the queue is down because they are trying to fix the problem created by hackers. Well, I\'ll try to add it tomorrow. -SIW
I totally disagree. Well, I maybe agree with the Draco maniac thing, but how is Pansy a cruel freak? And Draco being a maniac is fine, he's in charactor and very interesting. Maybe you should learn to read.
Author's Response: *grins* -SIW
UPDATE SOON!! I CAN'T WAIT ANY LONGER!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Hi, Bewitching I went to Lumos, and I\'ve been working on an original story. I\'ve just posted a new fic and two chapters of Pure & Proud. Chapter 17 of HFA will be next. - SIW
Hmm... the warning you ut didn't quite fit... at least compared to other chapters. But it was a very good chapter, and I enjoy where it is going. I like that instead of protecting herself against hexes, she protected Draco, that must have shown Draco something. But will he ever remember?
hehe...
Author's Response: *grins* -SIW
Very nice, bt I know Bunny is going to walk in and kiss him or something and Draco won't be able to explain himself because he won't remember! He'll be told he's marrid to Bunny and not know what to believe. I bet that "Unknown" curse came from the betroathal thing too... yuppers.