04/05/06
Hello! I'm a huge Harry Potter fan, and I'm guessing that if you're reading this you are too.
'my name is [...] and i like cheese, Harry Potter and long strolls on the beach.' (jk) (thanx marry_me_rupert)
FYI:
I'm in Hufflepuff (if you didn't already figure that out)
My HP crush is Fred Weasley (so don't even think about it!).
My favorite HP book is the Order of the Phoenix.
My favorite HP professor is Lupin.
My favorite teacher in real life is my 7th grade English teacher (hopefully you know who you are and thank you for being the best English and homeroom teacher ever! I miss you!).
Some of my favorite things to do (besides read and write) are to go to the beach, spend time with friends and family, and to catch (and then relese) lightning bugs.
My favorite non-Harry Potter movies are Shining Through, Connie and Carla, Meet the Parents, and Fun with Dick and Jane.
My favorite broadway show is Wicked (If you ever have a chance to see it you should!).
My favorite songs (at the moment) are "Bad Day" and "Walk Away" and "Gone".
My favorite tv shows are American Idol and the Amazing Race.
I play the flute! Band rocks!
I love to write!
I want to be a journalist or a novelist (or both) when I grow up. Hopefully someday I'll be on the bestseller list, but that not like my goal in lfe or anything. Maybe I'll just write book reviews that are published on the same page as the best seller list in the New York Times, that'd be cool too.
Well I kind of went all random on you there! Whatever!
Well... I hope you enjoy my stories (and my bio, actually)! Please, please, please review (my stories, not my bio, I don't need to know what you think of my favorite movies)!!!
Thanks!
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Anyway . . . Thanks for reading all the wy to the end of my bio!
I just remembered that I forgot to tell you something!
My favorite animal is a flying monkey! If I were an anamangus (which, unfotunatly, I am not) I would totally be a flying monkey! They are not evil (like they say in the "Wizard of Oz"). They are just framed and misunderstood, just like the Wicked Witch of the West. (If you do not understand this it is becaus you haven't seen "Wicked", the best broadway show ever!) Hey, they arte kinda like Sirius Black, to put it into Harry Potter terms.
And now you most likely think I'm completely insane! In a good way, though, right?
I thought so.
Bye Bye, now! I'm off to go feed my happy clan of flying monkeys! I mean, erm, my cat.
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Broken Promises by Helley
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: This is the story of Hermione's and Ron's love:
Of how it all started;
how it blossomed into something big, something never been seen before;
and how it all ended.
Date: 12/18/06 Title: Chapter 1: Broken Promises
Oh my! What a sad poem.
Author's Response: Yes, but this is the way see their story, because I think Ron\'s going to die in the end. (Or then Ginny) I hope you liked it nevertheless. I tried hard to put down the sadness and the feeling.
Goodbye by muggle_child
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Harry won't stand there to see his friends and family killed. He will not let this happen. So he set out to travel alone in search of Voldemort. Here is the letter he left at the Burrow.
Date: 12/19/06 Title: Chapter 1: Goodbye
Interesting poem.
I don't understand this line, though:
Goodbye sorrow,
That I will never have.
And in this line I think you should use liked instead of like:
Goodbye Dursleys,
Though I never even like you
And in both the part about Ron and the one about Hermione you used a variation of the word DEAR. I would change one of them to something else.
These are just suggestions.
I really do like what you are trying to write and the emotions you are trying to show.
Fiance Fiasco by Madame Marauder
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Kathryn Carothru wants everything a young, pureblooded girl could. Status, wealth, a man of good breeding. But above all, she wants to be an individual. When the chance for a marriage to an eligable bachelor arises, will Kathryn leap at the opprotunity, or get cold feet?
Written by Madame Marauder of Gryffindor House for NEWTS Transfiguration class.
Date: 12/19/06 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot
i enjoyed this story. Nice job, but here are a critique:
This line seemed too repetitive to me:
And I wasn’t paying attention, like an attentive woman should.
I would take out "like an attentive woman should"
Other than that, great job!
Author's Response: Thank you for the mini-beta job! I changed the phrase slightly so that it was no longer redundant. I\'m glad you caught that.