Well--I DO have to say that I am quite cool. . . well--sure. I LOVE musicals, and am addicted to Myspace. I love Green Day. Those who don't because they are mainstream don't know good music. My dream is to go to a performing arts college, and become a high school drama teacher. Yeah lame, that is my life. . .
I really want to see where this is going, so this has to be short so I can go and read the next chapter thingy. I want to say that you switched the tenses from present to past--which was confusing, and I'm not sure if you noticed that! Well--this is nice, really--Like I said, I have to go read so--obviously there was nothing horrible about it! ahahahahaha good I actually give it a 10. N I C E . . .
wait--you mean that was IT???? Um, I'm sorry but that simply doesn't make any sense-- do you think that there was any finality to that chapter? Because I didn't! If I am correct in my assumptions, and that is what it is--then I'm sorry, but this story--well--sucked. I'm sorry, like I've said. It only makes sense to continue this--for your own well being if not anyone else who is a fan because this is an incredible theme and it is inredibly written. But if you don't update, then the story is a waste. A waste of my time, your time, of energy and the like. . . I STRONGLY recommend, for the sake of the reviews and reads of this story, that you continue--don't just consider this--take this as a given. . . its a given--you start a story, you finish it--and THAT wasn't finished my friend. I'm sorry.
It's cute. Too cute--I'm hoping the professor's rating comes into play later. . . it went a little fast though, doncha think? And poor Ron. I hate love triangles so much! Why can't they ALL just love eachother? (I guess that would be incest) never mind. . . hehehe. . .
Interesting--this is becoming a lot more than just lusty slutty slash. . . it actually has a story to it! nice. . . haahaha--I want more.
This rather is a summary, more than a real story. This could have spanned over MANY chapters, and really did not meet the criteria of a fanfic. Your choice of words are great, and the sentence structure is excellent. That was why I was expecting so much more from this as I read on. It is a one-shot, but really it should be a synopsis--to something bigger. It would be great, too, you know. There aren't many Lucius Sirius fics out there. (At least that I have seen, but I am new here) It could be original and unique. . . I say continue this on a larger scale. It was nice however. Nice simply.
Alright, I KNEW I read this story before! I remember the whole eyeliner thing. I was actually just takling about this the other day, about HP slash. This is also on Veritaserum.com! (Which isn't as good as Mugglenet AT all! this is a pretty incredible story. I LURVE it, because it doesn't go into too much, and it ends perfectly! Haha. Great!
This is. . . very interesting. . . I don't think I have EVER read a story with that pairing. . . I didn't even know that WAS a pairing. Fanfiction surprises me everyday. I love this crap, really, I do. Ahhh. . . good fun. . . good job. This is great. haha. . .
Author's Response: To paraphrase dear Ginny, anything is a pairing if you\'ve nerve enough. Thanks for reviewing! I\'m glad you liked it!
Hmmmmm. . . Interesting--nice.
Author's Response: I\'m glad you think so. Thanks for your comment!
Short, typical--I am going to read more, but I just thought I would say something. . .
Author's Response: Well thanks ..
I think I read this one before--I don't remember, that was months ago--well--anyway--I guess I'll review again--I'm waiting for the romance! This could have been like--one chapter combined!!!!! Jeeze--waiting. . .
Author's Response: Only started posting 2 months ago if that. It COULD have been one chapter yeah, but I tend to write my stories in 4 or 5 chapters. As for the romance, I used the following words to describe the fic \'Dark. Violence, Non-Consensual Sex, Slash, Sexual Situations, Dubious Consent\' None of these really lead the reader to expect \'Romance\', do they? There\'s no romance here, but it\'s not a horrific ending either. The story is complete at SycophantHex - the Eros and Sappho section. Thanks for reviewing
Oh come on. It's rather unfortunate that you leave a cliffie here, because I probably will forget that this story even exists by the time that you add a new chapter--and chances are, you probably won't even finish it! Just--take my advice and write quickly, or else you will lose a reader--I want to hear what I came for ROMANCE!!!--sorry, a little persistent, but I speak only the truth--hahahaha--good job anyway so far--and don't take that lighly!
Author's Response: I know ya want romance! hell, who doesn\'t? This isn\'t really one of those stories though, as I was in a violent and slightly self-destructive mood when it was written, so much so that I\'ve had to \'tone down\' Chapter 4. For full wrath (but still not much in the romance department) check out http://erosnsappho.sycophanthex.com and thanks for your review!
wow. It's usual typical slash. It's written quite well, actually--I am going to read chapter 2 now and can tell you more about it then. Good so far, however, it seems that EVERYONE is quite lesbian. Are they all going to have a happy lesbian party or something? Well, I suppose we'll see. . .
oh yeah. It's good. I'm no Ebert, but I can tell when a story's getting good. . . The whole Ginny-Tonks thing, yeah. And that fact that you can relate the way Tonks felt about Cynthia to the way Ginny feels about Tonks. . . I guess I'll just have to keep reading to see where this is going. . . Good Job-- fizzle homie--G. . . (sorry I couldn't resist)
O M G. . . .I really want to keep reading, but I think this is the last chapter. . . I hope I remember this in the next few weeks for when you update. . . yeah. So--a bit of fuel--it was GREAT. But you already knew that. Most people do when they write a great story. So--er--continue it. And um, keep it real--yo.
Hmmm. . . I really dunno what to think about that! It was good, however, don't get me wrong, but. . . I dunno, it sort of just--ended when there should have been more. I liked the interaction between them. In the beginning, when you were talking about the Marauders, I don't think that they would have cowed from Lucius like that and simply leave the room without a fight. This was in the beginning however, and many people won't even see that, so it doesn't matter. Wow, what am I talking about anyway? I dunno. All I can say is--good job! I enjoyed this!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I had actually planned for more, but I don\'t trust myself to write too far into scenes like that. I have a tendency to get too graphic and that would just make it take longer to be accepted. Glad you enjoyed it. -----RMV