I am a Harry Potter maniac (aren't we all?). My name is Kellene, (just so you know, I'm a lady).
I live in Maine, (which is in the United States). I go to Hogwarts (translation- school where I'm in seventh grade).
I love Harry Potter, Lord of the Rings, acting, swimming, singing, dancing, and playing basketball. My true passion is writing and reading. My teachers have given my many writing awards and honors (such as going to Young Authors). Many people say I am talented in writing, but it doesn't show in fanfiction because I am just playing with Jo's characters and world. I also enjoy it when people review, so please review.
See you in cyber space-
Kellene
If Trelawney is a death eater and she made the propchey, why doesn't she just tell Voldemort? It would ruin the whole plot of the Harry Potter series. Try to think of the outcomes before writing. I mean, it could be relevent, but if it isn't I would try to fix it. Try, try again and if that doesn't work, THEN TRY AGAIN! Never say never.
Great job.
Author's Response: Haha, thanks!!!
Great, like all your chapters.
Author's Response: Thanks!
It's good as the plot. My main concern is with your grammer and spelling. Please do try to watch out of these things. I also don't think Harry would kill anyone besides Voldemort. Other than that, it looks good.
Author's Response: Well that is your opinon although in the first few chapters there are some misspelled words and the grammar is horrible. But if you read any of my Author Notes you would know than that I am going to update them, I just haven't had the chance!
I didn't read all of it, but it sounds good. I only read a little because it's about 1:00 in the morning. Night.
Sounds good thus far. If you'll write, I'll read.
Great chapter. It's so good. I am truely touched by your writing. Good job.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Good job. If you wrote this two years ago, does that mean you're not going to finish it? It's really good so far.
HA HA! HA HA! HA HA! HA HA! IT'S SO FUNNY! HA HA! HA HA! HA HA! HA HA! AM I ANNOYING YOU? HA HA! HA HA! HA HA! GOOD JOB!!!
Author's Response: Of course you're not annoying me, I love reviews! I'm glad you liked it so much, thanks for reviewing!
RON DIED!?!!?!?! HOW COULD YOU?!?!?!?!? Harry gone mental? I'm off to read a happier fiction. Goodbye.
Good. You have a great hook and I think I'll keep reading. That is if you update soon.
Nice job. I love it. I hope you can write that sequel soon. Please write it soon! Once more, great, fantastic, wonderful, amazing job!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Great job. I've read all of it so far, but I was too lazy to review all of them. I think you may be on to something with Harry seeing things. You are creative and you should keep up the good work. You should also update soon! :)
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it. We'll find out in July about the Legilimency, but I really do think so. The next chapter has been submitted.
Wonderful job. I love your A/N. I'll watch out. Anyway, your story is so well written. Keep up the good work and update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks! One more chapter to go.
This is great! I love it! Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it.
I love it. There are no grammer errors or spelling errors, your plot is amazing. This is a great story.
Author's Response: Thanks for noticing, I'm glad you're enjoying it.
It's just as good as all of your other chapters. I enjoy reading it because of your great grammer skills. Update soon and keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Well, thank you! You'l have to give my betas some credit on that!