Hmm...what do YOU want to know?
I'm pretty much a Malfoy fanatic. I got started in fan fic when my lil' sister started writing. That's how I found this site, actually.
Some things about me:
-spicy crunch salmon roll is my favorite food in the world.
-I could eat soybeans everyday for the rest of my life.
-I'm an up and coming opera star (yeah, in my dreams) but, I love to sing regardless, so I deserve my dreams! :p
-I have read Jeannette Walls' The Glass Castle 19 times.
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Then we can talk. :p Catch ya'lls later.
Oh, this chapter was interesting.
Lucius is baaaaad.
I wonder who Fiona is, and what secrets she's hiding.
I'm not sure I like crying Snape unless there's a reason though.
Good job! :)
Author's Response: He's in a lot of stress. He lost his father, and that is going to impact you, whether or not he liked him or not. Plus he is peeved at the whole fact Fiona is pretending everything is spiffy, when in fact, she is lying. It's just going to take some time for him to get it out of her I guess. Keep reading!!
Good job once more. I'm not sure I liked Sirius in this chapter. But Fiona was well written again. Satisfied by there panic-stricken screams ('there' should be 'their')...just something I caught. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Just tell me what I can improve on the Sirius thing and I'll see what I can do. That's funny, cuz I helped you on your little 'spell' problem in that one chapter in the library in your story (which is good, except for the fillers...you know I hate them.) Keep checking for errors!! :)
This has such a good beginning..it flows smoothly and is entertaining..it make me want to read more, which is important in a first chapter. I also really like the title of this story...anyway, no technical problems at all, and it's really sad how your portrayed Lily's relationship with her sister... good job, I'll be reading more.
LOL, I love the length of your chapters...they are good for quick reads when I don't have much time. :) This chapter was interesting...where is Remus? I think the boys all know. Just a few things that I caught: This phrase: 'All around her the whispers came like, cutting her like knives' would be better if you removed the first 'like'. Also, the phrase where you used 'orphan', it should have been orphans. These don't take away from the story, but I thought I'd point them out in case you wanted to know. Good job.
Poor Lily...but then again, there are so many people that have used alcohol as an escape...:ahem: ;) I feel so bad for her, but I totally loved the end when James rescued her and he thought of her as a precious burden. That is such a nice way to hint at their future romance. He already thinks of her as precious.
Too cute! I'm liking this.
Again, beautifully written...you're still flashing back and forth right? It took me a little to figure that one out, LOL. But, anyway, another great installment.
Heh, I missed this story before...very good.
I've never read Ginny quite the way you've written her. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: *Nods* Thank you very much. Hopefully the next chapter will be up soon. It's quite sort and I have no doubt that it will be confusing. Thanks for reviewing.
This story is written well, and in spite of the subject matter, it keeps you reading. One thing that struck me as strange however, was the friendship between Hermione and Lupin. Perhaps there should have been a little more backround information on how they came to be so close (flashbacks and such). It's just weird for her to be calling him by his first name and everything. But other than that, it works for me.
Author's Response: I'll remember that for future chapters and such...I'll definiatly try and get more backround in there next time. Glad you liked it.
So cute. And so much said in very few words, which IMO, a sign of talent. :)
LOL, I LIKE this story. It's believable. (Well, except how did Hermione get a cell phone).. And Draco is funny. :)
Author's Response: Thanks! Hermione got her cellphone from her parents for her 16 birthday, LOL! :)
Too cute. I liked this chap as well. This is probably one of my favorites from the D/H section. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
The last two chaps were great. You're doing a good job.
Brilliant. Absolutely the best D/Hr fic I have read in a long time. It makes sense, it's not rushed, it's just lovely...and I could see something like this happening...well, maybe not, but it's still fanfiction...just lo
Brilliant. Absolutely the best D/Hr fic I have read in a long time. It makes sense, it's not rushed, it's just lovely...and I could see something like this happening...well, maybe not, but it's still fanfiction...just lo
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! I'm so honoured and I'm glad you think that about my fic :)
Are "they" going to find out what happened between Hermione/Draco at the hospital? That's the question running through my mind when I read that.
Good chapter.
Author's Response: Ah, they can see everything...
Very good. It took me a while to get through it, but it was worth it. I'm not really into the whole Hermione/Draco thing, but this story is really good. Keep up the fab work. ;)
Although the story itself is quite interesting, I'm a bit confused about something. When in time (during the year) does it take place? Is it at the beginning of the year? I assume so because of the assignment of HB and HG. The only thing that I doesn't sit right with me is the reasoning behind why 6th year students would be given the HB and HG positions. Other than that, good story.
Good job. Is Hermione not going to even try to work things out with her old friends. She's so quick to say they are "ex friends", whereas Ron still considers her a friend. Would she give up on them so quickly? Very interesting fic.
The beginning was catchy. I like that you started it in the midst of the action...not too many stories just jump into things like that. I can't wait to read on and see what happens.