11/30/04
Hi ... everyone! =)
My name is Sara, and I'm a Malaysian. That's located somewhere in the South East of Asia. I'm a big fan of HP, and first came to the world of fanfiction during the year 2004.
My favourite genres are Romance, and Humour. Adventure fics with a good plot and interesting characters are good in my books too.
My ships are: R/Hr and H/G. Well. That's all I read, that is. Not H/G so much, though. And lately, I've been writing about Jimmy/Demelza ... read HBP, and you'll know who I mean.
Anyhoo, if you like reaing my fics, please drop a review. Constructive critiscm is always welcome, and in short, reviews brighten up my day. =)
That said, happy fanfic reading/writing!
Sara
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Spattergroit by Rudhampaiel
Rated: •Summary: Takes place after the visit to St. Mungo’s. Hermione’s dwelling on a certain something one of the wizards said.
Date: 03/04/05 Title: Chapter 2: Maybe
OOoh...Bad idea,Ron.But if he did tae off his trousers,what next?His BOXERS???lol!
Ps.I now this must be stupid,but I checed my dictionary and the explanation confused me.What is innuendo?
Author's Response: Er... innuendos are basically the same thing as insinuations. To insinuate is to imply or convey an idea subtly and gradually. My use of innuendo probably isn't the clearest ever, but I can explain it for you in a nutshell. The wizard in the painting told Ron he would have to "stand naked by the full moon" for the remedy to work. When Hermione offers to help with the remedy, she's subtly implying that she'd like to see Ron... 'hem... clothing-less. She doesn't come right out and say that though. Does that clear things up a bit? I hope so. Thanks for reviewing! - Angela
Date: 02/26/05 Title: Chapter 1: Bugger
Hey,pls tell me its not over yet!Its so cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Harry Potter and the Fan Fic no no by Angelwings
Rated: •Summary: Like the earlier fan fic 'As Hogwarts Turns' by fellow moderator Seren, " this has been written for the sole purpose of explaining exactly what NOT to do in a fiction. Odd chapters are the originally bad chapters." If this fan fic doesn't make any sense, it is doing its job right. You have been warned. Thankyou.
Date: 03/11/05 Title: Chapter 1: One shot (thank goodness!)
Hmm-hmm,I have learned my lesson! (WEll,I would if I have written anything before,sigh)But you did a preeeeetty good job.It was hilarious!!!
Date: 12/02/04 Title: None
That was agood one :) Oh,the mental images!!!!
Date: 02/11/06 Title: None
I like tha way you used the bits from LotR in this. Perfect for this kind of romance fic. I like the second paragrpah best ... I can really feel what Harry and Luna are feeling in this.
I just have a few things to point out here, and not much of a problem at all.
"L-look w-who it is...",
I notice that this happens quite a fair amount of times in this fic. Since that an elipse is already present at the end of the sentence, you don't need the comma, like so: "L-look w-who it is..."
"Like it was yesterday.", Luna said.
This happens a few times too. There is no need for a period in this sentence, and the comma should be placed before the quotation mark.
I just loved the ending, as well as their last conversation. Regarding the last paragraph, I think it would be even better if you fleshed it out a bit. Maybe break it into two paragraphs, to indicate that Luna's dreams are happening a while after Harry's death. Overall, I enjoyed this fic, even though I don't ship this. Good job!
The Secret thoughts of Hermione Granger by Hermiones_Revenge
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Hermione describes her Ron troubles in this series of hilarious journal entries, notes passed in class, and lists. And...Mrs Norris is a duck?
NOTE: This was written quite some time ago, in my younger years. It was my first story...which should explain a lot.
Date: 03/15/05 Title: Chapter 4: Detention isn't always bad
The ending was sooo unexpected.I rreally thought she was joking!Anyways,I just have to say that this fic is awesome!You are (to me) one of the best humour writers I've ever read!
Author's Response: Wow, that's high praise!
Campaign of the Unicorns by Funness
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Artemis Malfoy is the daughter no one knew about. She was born long before Draco was a thought. In a mansion among the forests in Albania, she holds terrifying secrets, and watches the beautiful and poignant Campaign of the Unicorns.
Date: 02/04/06 Title: Chapter 1: Running Silver
For some odd reason, I really like this. I love the writing style you used ... matches the atmosphere brilliantly. I don't read vampire stories very often, and I have to say, of the very few I have read, yours is among the best. Yes, it's a bit gory, what with the slaying of the unicorns, but you managed to make it seem beautiful, in a gruesome sort of way.
I just have a few things to point out:
My white-blonde hair becomes windblown, as my windows are wide open, and I am standing in front of them.
The first part of the sentence, '- hair becomes windblown -' doesn't seem to mesh with the rest of it. I suggest that you change 'becomes' to 'is', since that you're using continuous present tense (well, I'm pretty sure ... I've never been too good with naming these grammatical terms ...).
Before he knows what's happening, my fangs in his neck, sucking precious lifeblood from him.
There should be an 'are' after 'fangs', or else the sentence will seem inomplete. Oh, and lastly, I just have to say that the way you portrayed Draco and Artemis at the end of the fic seems to say a lot about how they accept each other, yet can never be as close as real siblings. You did that very well. Overall, wonderful job!
The Epicly Bad Tale of Ron and Hermione by Seren
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: I hate you! You're such a nerd! I hate you! You're so oblivious! The beginning of the Epicly Bad Tale Trilogy, in which Ron and Hermione bicker, scream, and throw members of the Creevey family at one another. With cameos from various AF members and Jesus. Written partially as a direct poke in the eye at the HP fandom. Scriptfic.
Date: 10/29/05 Title: Chapter 2: Fatal Engagement
Oh boy, that was great! Had lots of fun reading it, and the proposal itself was hilarious. I liked the shopping list best, for some odd reason.
Date: 03/10/05 Title: None
I like this.Really.ANd the names for their group is really funny.When I read the Lovers of Avacado,well...let's just say that its really hard to laugh and eat potato chips at the same time...:)
Author's Response: Please don't choke. And let me comment that I get SO excited whenever I get reviews for this one...I'll look through "Hmm, 'I love who' has 12 more...Target practice has 6 more...Evil Villainy has 11 more...YES! I GOT ANOTHER 'OVERTURNED' REVIEW! HORRAY! PARTY!" I have no idea why I'm like this. And another random comment, I just re-read the original story...oh wow...
Oh the Insanity - The Thoughts of Hermione Granger by Hermiones_Revenge
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: A series of hilarious journal entries and lists from Hermione, describing the insane "war" she has gotten herself into with Parvati. Insanity, and hilarity, ensue... A sequel to "The Secret Thoughts of Hermione Granger" (though it'll make sense if you haven't read it)
Note: Another story from "back in the day."
Date: 03/15/05 Title: Chapter 5: Hermione's revenge
That was HILARIOUS!!!I was (literaly)[hang on,did I spell that right???] laughing my lungs out!Mini flamingoes are so cool.Once when I went on a school trip,the teachers told us : 'Do not chase the FLAMINGOES!!!' and now it's flamingoes chasing humans!
Ps.I notice that Hermione is hungry nearly all the time...
Author's Response: Maybe it's because I'm hungry all the time...
Date: 03/15/05 Title: Chapter 11: Epilogue - Learn Your Lessons
Oh wow,that was stupendously fantabulous-ly hysterically awesome!I love your stories,they are so darn FUNNY!!!lol!
No Inhibitions by GringottsVault711
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Ron accidentally takes a potion to free him from his every inhibition - with 'interesting' results. Will this finally be the push that makes him reveal to Hermione his true feelings? Not so much fluffy as funny.
Date: 02/04/06 Title: Chapter 1: No Inhibitions
Oh, this is adorable. You're right; it's more funny than fluffy, and this is one of those few R/Hr one-shots which doesn't have them confessing their undying love for each other at the end. A kiss, yes ... but no confession of undying love. :claps happily: My favourite part was Ron yelling at Ginny, Harry and Snape in the Great Hall.
Okay, I just have a couple of things to be nit-picky about. The bit with Hermione talking in Harry's memory:
You want to be an Auror, don’t you? Hermione had said. To even have a chance you have to have a N.E.W.T in Potions, Hermione had continued. Besides – Ron won’t be taking it, I’ll have no one to sit with, Hermione had pleaded.
I think you should write her words in italics ... or else it looks like normal text, and when I first saw it, it confused me a bit.
Lastly, the ending sentence (which I love, by the way):
Too bad he hadn't managed to jinx Filch though
You forgot to add the full stop at the end of the sentence.
Overall, I love this. It's short, and sweet. And I had a great time reaing it! =)
The Little Ones by Seren
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Everyone fights the good fight for their own reasons. Arthur Weasley keeps his scribbled in a notepad. For the Little Ones. Companion Piece to Hermione's Scrapbook.
Date: 10/29/05 Title: Chapter 1: What They Taught Him (One-Shot)
That was beautiful. Beautiful in the sense that he kept that little notebook for so long, and looking through it when he feels the need. I love your writing style, I can really feel and see what you've written.
Date: 03/19/05 Title: None
Oh goody,you're back!That was cool,especially the last part about Hermione being 16,not 10!
Author's Response: Thank you!!!!
Date: 12/30/04 Title: None
This is one story I dont mind making fun of Hermione.The story's good!and the fact that I AM watching LoTR right now,and thinking of Legolas while he's on screen...keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you!! I try to watch or read LotR before I write anymore of my story. It gives me idea's!! Thanks again!!
Date: 02/26/05 Title: None
Er,why is Sam gay...?Just asking.
Author's Response: Umm. . . because. . . . o_O
Date: 10/29/05 Title: None
That was the. Best. Hilarious! I was laughing all through the fic! Crotch-less panties? :raises eyebrows suspiciously: Anyway, that was great. Very amusing. :D
Here at the End of All Things by Ella Norman
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: *one-shot* The Final Battle. Ron never thought he would hear those words, nor live to see the days in which it would come. It had come, and he fighting it, his Hermione, his love, alongside him. He loved her more than life, and she was his all. ___________________________________________________________________ I must say, I'm quite proud of this one. Well-worth the time it takes to read. Please R&R. PG-13 for the heaviness of the situation.
Date: 04/07/05 Title: Chapter 1: Here at the End of All Things
That was sad. I'm guessing you're a fan of LOTR ... when I saw the title, I knew. That was so sad! Everyone's dead! (Except for Ron and Neville, yeah, but ...) the way you wrote it was great. It really got me feeling.
Author's Response: I'm glad. :) That's precisely what it was supposed to do. Yes, LOTR is one of my favorite things on earth (next to Harry Potter, of course).
Daddy by blondebouncingferret
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Post Hogwarts: Ron and Harry are sent to America for Auror training. Ron spends his last night in England with Hermione, and after returning two years later, he finds Hermione with a fifteen-month-old baby ...
Date: 04/05/05 Title: Chapter 4: Catching Up
Hmmm ... Ron took it *very* well, I think. Poor flowerpot. Anyhoo, I find Miranda extremely annoying. Very. And do I sense something between Harry and Ginny there? 'Cause if I'm not mistaken, that's what Hermione did with Ron in Cos movie ... the handshake ... the 'hug' ...
Date: 03/11/05 Title: Chapter 3: Hello Daddy
The suspense is KILLING ME!!!!I can barely breath!Oh boy,that's a shock,I never saw that coming.I mean,Miranda.I don't even know her,and I hate her already!!!