Hello! I love Harry Potter!!!!! Like most of you here. I am seventeen and I am in grade 12. I love finding new stories to read my favorite stories are " But I do Love You" By "iheartyou" and "The Second War Begins" by "OhISee" They are great stories and i reccomend them to anyone wanting to read a good fanfic. My fave book is HBP, i am so excited and sad for the seventh one, happy because its another HP book, but sad because its the last one!!:(:(
Oh and by the way....Sean Biggerstaff is the hottest sexiest man alive in the world and in the universe and galaxy. You will never find a guy hotter, sexier ever again!!!!!!! Hence my name? Sean's b-day is on March 15!
OOOOh this little paragraph is being written on March 27'05 and i just got back from Italy. The best time in my life. When i was in assisi i saw a painting that someone did of the poster for CoS. It was so cool. And i also saw the statue of Romulus and Remus! I was like.. oof Lupin. Speaking of Lupin they have some sort of brand of clothing named Lupin and i bought a pin of the pic of a guy that is supposed to be Lupin. He doesn't look like lupin in the movies, but hotter. lol, anyways everyone should go read my fave stories they are awsome. And everyone should go to Italy! LOL It is Awsome. CIao
Umm.... It kind of doesn't make any sense. I like the idea and I LOVE simple plan and that song is my fave song on their new album. The story just doesnt make anysense to me though. Maybe if you slowed things down and clearly showed what happend and so forth. Another not, you forgot:
We spent all our money on stupid things but if i look back now id probabky give it all away......
Author's Response: thanks for the constructive criticism. i went back in and explained a little more, hopefully it makes a bit more sense now
I have great respect for someone who writes things contradicting characters and i have read a same sex fic before, so i thought that i would give yours a go, then i read the summary. I am so sorry but Sean Biggerstaff is my absolute fave guy ever and i just can't picture him......you know. But keep writing none the less, i know you would anyways even if you got ten thousand hate letters, and this isnt a hate letter, just saying sorry that i cant readt. You do have a good way with words, i read the first chapter, it is really good, but just not for me. I would read it if it were anyone else. Lol, keep up the excellent writing though
Author's Response: I'm not sure what you mean about "contradicting characters", because we've never had any sign of Oliver's sexual orientation...unless you mean Percy?
Thank you for your encouragement; I understand about good fics that a person just can't read. And yes, I would keep writing anyway, particularly since this fic is already finished and just needs to be posted. :-D
This is a really good story, can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: yaaayyyyyyy 600 people have read this story!!!
VERY Deep!i loved it. I have been searching for so long to add another story to my favorite list! I just found it! this is a very well written story and ilove how you detail everything ican actuALLY see whatis happening in my mind. very good
Author's Response: Thank you for your words. They are very encouraging. I'll do may best to update as soon as possible.
awsome job
Author's Response: thanks..i worked really hard on it!
ooh. i like it.. it was a lot to take in though... but i like it.. on to the next chapetr for me!
Author's Response: A lot to take in??
ok... ive read half of it... but my class is almost over(im in my spare period) so i will read it when i get home... its good so far !!! :):):)
Author's Response: Ooh... spare periods are good times to read fan-fics. thanks for the praise. :):):)