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Deleted my review cause I put it in the wrong place. Whoops! This is for the whole series, I think.
Aww! The first one was really cute. I liked the fact that it was something from a long time ago she should've forgotten.
The second one was absolutely wonderful. I especially liked that Remus had a fleeting thought of her as a 'jaded lover', but pushed it away and kind of makes everyone in the audience go "...*facepalm*". :D
And Rent. I love Rent. Yay!
Written as a Term Challenge: Holidays Abroad submission for Slytherin.
Hi! *waves*
This is a really interesting story! I've never seen anything like this done before, which shows originality, which is good. I love how you showed the wedding clip at the end, that was a really good... thingy, for lack of a better word.
Author's Response: Hey telp, thanks for reading it.
Originality is good, I appreciate that. Also, good word useage.
Ooh, wow. I didn't expect him to have to take the potion daily. That's interesting. Adds to the suspense :) I like how you added Merope's paranoia, and sort of made Tom into a character, y'know?
Author's Response: Well, after reading the part in HBP when Ron took the potion and Moody told him it would wear off eventually, kind of thought making it daily would get around that.
Hmm. I don't know what the end was all about, but ah well. Did you actually research these customs, or did you just make them up?
Author's Response: I actually researched them.
This is for the Term Challenge for which you have to write a story around a holiday in a different country.
Nice way to end a chapter :P Luckily for me, though, I have another one waiting. Interesting how you show his progression, though I don't exactly get why he's straying away from her.
Author's Response: Tom didn\'t drink the potion that morning.
It\'s mentioned in the beginning of the chapter.
Wow. Well. Uh. Is it over? Because... wow. It was really good, though.
Author's Response: No, it\'s not over. There is still one more chapter to go plus an epilogue.
Just to mention, if it was finished, in the description of the story it would say \'completed.\'
Aww! The first one was really cute. I liked the fact that it was something from a long time ago she should've forgotten.
The second one was absolutely wonderful. I especially liked that Remus had a fleeting thought of her as a 'jaded lover', but pushed it away and kind of makes everyone in the audience go "...*facepalm*". :D
And Rent. I love Rent. Yay!
Author's Response: Alas, my series won\'t allow me to answer reivews! So, since you reviwed in two places, I can conveniently answer here.
Tonks seems the type to hang on to memories of Remus, anything that could be construed as positive. This isn\'t really supposed to written as a memory...more of a prequel, I guess...but the thought of it as a memory is great.
Haha, I like how you assume I have an audience, that makes me feel special! I kind of have a sadistic liking for making Remus skip over the terribly obvious and make people want to smack him across the face....but then hug/cuddle/snog him in apology. At least, I do. ^_^
RENT! Gads, I love all the Rent fans around here. That song is going to play a huge part in the series. I like the similarities: Remus and Roger were both so afraid to trust because of what was \"wrong\" with them and what they\'d been through, but Tonks/Mimi, even though she had issues too, just wanted to help, just wanted to TRY romance, for however short a time, because they were in love. ...Aheh. Now that I\'ve psychoanalyzed the fun out of everything, thanks very much for reviewing! Hope I see you around!