my goodness you have a lot of reviews! I suppose that means the story is really good. I haven't read it all but what i had was really interesting and almost like a real Harry Potter book. It's a great story. :)
Author's Response: I only have 57 reviews, I guess that's alot! It's almost like a real HP book? Wow! That's a HUGE complement! Thank you so much!
I think you have put a lot of effort into capturing the night of their death. I like what you've done.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review; my first one on this story! It is quite sad, but it really only took me a double science lesson to write.
Obviously i was expecting something great coming from you, Eagleton. So the next chapter will be expected to be better. Well, keep up the very amusing writing :)
Interesting. It seems that you've put a lot of history into Torrence Potter; it's really interesting! I love it! Good job, mate ;)
coolness! I like how you've kept this story going. I think Torrence is an absolute legend! I kind of fell sorry that Harry and his friends kind of resent her because she's really funny. Great any way.
Author's Response: I wonder why u think Torence is a ledgend :P She's so annoying, but probably the easiest character to write at the moment. thanks for your review!
hey, Eagleton, great stuff! I was hoping Dumbledore was going to teach Harry, we all know what happened the last time Snape tried teaching him Occlumency.
really good stuff though, eagleton, keep it up! ;)
Author's Response: Dumbledore is going to teach Harry Occlumency. Thanks for your review! (update ur story soon!)
This is great! I mean I don't know you at all ... Keep up the awsome work Eagleton! :)
ah, torrence, such a great character. he he. good stuff, Eagleton;)
I wont die of anticipation but I'm more than willing to keep reading, so keep writing!
Author's Response: Thank you for adding me to your favourite authors! I'm glad you like the story. Keep reading and see if Torrence is anything like you expected.
Ok. you know that i think Torrence is really finny and cool, but surprisingly, i thort that the little duel between her and harry was really cool, even though harry actually beat her - who would have thort with her ego and everything! I think i may know what's coming next so im really excited! ok, good, great, you know it all. tootles, eagleton;)
Ok, so is Hagrid not liking Torrence either? he, like, totally gave harry things against her! But anywho, this is such a great story, eagleton, i like the fact that harry is jealous of her but wont admit it, it's classical. well, anywho, can't wait to read on, luv ya, tootles.
interesting. luv it, eagleton. tootles.
Author's Response: Thank you for your continued reviews. They're encouraging!! Thanks Kails!!
Ok, like, i totally thought i had reviewd this but by the looks of things I havent. This is a great story, i really enjoyed reading it. I did get a little confused about Draco and all that, but it still works. Tho why is he like that?
Author's Response: ok, thanks for all ur reviews. I've made Draco nicer because i like him as a character. And you'll see that Anilla isn't a full Muggle. Well, thanks again.
Don't read if you are offended with rape and abuse. Contains events that will be quite offensive and possibly "disgusting". You have been warned.
Runner Up in the Dangerous Liaisons Awards and He Had It Coming Awards.
~The story is now Complete!~
Thanks for reading!
This story is very different to what i have read. I caoulcn't think, at first, why you would write something like that, but it has proven to be a very interesting story. It would be good to keep reading.
Goodness! I don't know about you but i have always thought that Voldemort was soooo cool! i know he's done some horrible things but i don't really care.
Your story is pretty good. i didn't understand all of it but from what i got it sounds good, im going to go onto the next chapter now. :)
Author's Response: thankies~ =D
i guess my writing is a bit confusing since english isn't my first language... in truth, i don't have a first language *cries* every thing is messed up. but thanks for reviewing neways XD
hey, this is really good. I thought James was pretty funny, but i always emagined he was. I like the way you stated it to, it's really cool. Nice work! Whens the next chapter?
Author's Response: Thanx!!!! I update at least once a week, usually on weekends. You're the first person to review my story and I'm so happy! Thank you!
excerpt:
Even when you rumple your hair.
I hate that I’ve come to expect,
That life without you I can’t bear.
(Inspired by Kat's poem in 10 Things I Hate About You )
What a prettiful story! I hate reading romance ones coz i think that sometimes they can ruin a great story, like ginny and draco - things that shouldn't happen. But this, however, was meant to happen and i think that the poems were beautiful. I have read a lot of Lily and James and so far yours is the best. well done. :)