My name will tell you my favorite charcater. Apart from that, this story is funny and fun. Please update soon.
How will you change this story now that Dumbledore cannot be in it? Will you edit him out. If you will, while your at it, edit the C.B. back in, (Im joking, dont take it seriously, I think).
Author's Response: I'm not changing it at all its just going to be one of many pre-HBP stories that is wrong
Ok, I finally found out how to send revies, so here goes...
*sniff* I miss The Creevey Brothers. The poor things, they were so young, so naive.
They battled for Hogwarts not knowing they'd die.
There, I expressed myself, *sniff*
Author's Response: yeah that is sad, but its a fact so many people die young when war is involved and the loss of life is just horrible.
Nice Story. Wonderful, Absolutely Hilarious. Please update soon.
It's...ok. I liked the theme song and the episode you got the script from, I've seen it. lol
It's ok...Draco is a born fighter, but its a bit too OOC. Draco would NEVER marry Hermione and would NEVER kill his dad. If I'm right by reading summary's of other chapters, you killed Ron as well, didn't you?
I think I'll give you a...uh...erm...6?
Author's Response: well... it might have helped if you had actually read the chapters and not just the summaries. no, i did not kill Ron and besides Draco being a good guy, i believe my story is very cannon. But, (sigh), thanks for the interest.
I also think Luna/Colin is a nice match. You're like me. I was thinking of that kind of relationship for ages, because they're both so weird, they kill the hell out of me when I laugh. "I don't think you should be an Auror Harry. They're part of the Rotfang Conspiracy, I thought everyone knew that. They're working to bring down the Ministry of Magic down from within using a combination of Dark Magic and Gum Disease."
Even harder to avoid than Gilderoy was Colin Creevey, who seemed to have memorized Harry's time table."
Colin is my favorite character and Colin/Luna is ONE of my favorite relationships. Anyway, must stop giving quotes, before it becomes a habit. I just couldn't resist telling you, nice idea.
8/10
Author's Response: I'm glad you agree. One day I might even post my Colin/Luna fic on here :D
hmmm, It's not like I hate the story, but has it ever crossed your mind to have one of Harry's children named after the man who sacrificed himself for the family. Why not name ONE of his children James? That's what I'd do. Oh well, never expecrt the best.
7/10
Author's Response: Actually, Harry did name one of his children after his father - Sirius middle name is James, which I bring up in the seventh chapter. The reason why I chose to only use it as his middle name was because 1) Lily and James shouldn't be brother and sister, and 2) Harry may love the image of his father, but he was closer to Sirius who also gave his life for him. As for Christopher - his second name is Arthur, after all Ginny had to have some say in the matter as well.
Ah...I merely got bored through the third chapter, who said I didn't like the summary?
I dont intend to be funny either, I'm just giving some advice.
Author's Response: It was just the use of "lol", I figured you didn't intend to be funny. And I thought you meant the summary needed to be more exciting, with quotes and the like? That's why I mentioned the summary, because I thought you didn't like it.
Er...I haven't exactly read this chapter. I got bored very soon, lol.
Sorry, but you need to make it a bit more entertaining. Put quotes on your summary. Quotes that might catch readers attention.
Author's Response: Why'd you bother to read this story if you didn't like the summary? And I don't think the fact that you got bored very soon is funny.
Nonetheless, thank you for reviewing.
I was waiting for this to come. Little does Harry Potter know however that Colin Creevey Is Also On The Dark Side*Once again shows left forearm bearing the Dark Mark*
If Harry hurts any of my favorite characters, and I mean HURTS, I will never forgive him, (unless he does something really good, lol.)
10/10
OMG. This was wierd. Is Snape a Death Eater? I am one of his biggest fans. I can't believe he actually did the Cruciatus Curse on Harry. Harry should tell Dumbledore what Snape did, see how he reacts.
You have crossed the line. Along with kr1st1na who killed The Creevey Brothers, you have turned Harry to the dark side in the last chapter. That is so cool. Can't wait to see if he turns back or not. Update soon.
Author's Response: :), I promise I won't kill the Creevey Brothers. Updates are on the way. :)
The first chapter was good. Although most chapter, even in the books, are boring if they have the Dursley's in it, I am very amazed and happy that Petunia was actually worrying for Harry.
Author's Response: Yes the Dursley's are quite boring, I feel that Petunia being a mother, has to eventually show at least a little worry for Harry's health. She'd be completely cruel and heartless otherwise, and we know she's not because she loves her Duddikins. :)
I have a question, how did you get the image of Slytherin on your personal info, I tried to do the same when I made Gryffindor, but the picture is not appearing, only the words.
Author's Response: Actually I think it has something to do with the site, my picture only appears every once and a while which leeds me to believe that the site isn't always up so the link to the picture is broken, not allowing it to show. I had to refresh 3 times once and it still wouldn't come up, so I think it's a random thing. my suggestion is to just keep checking back. :)
Nice one...will Harry ask the hat anytime soon. Will it be in front of everyone or anyone?
Ill give you a 10
Nice one! What is happening, and how many chapters are there? I think I'll give you a 9.
Sweet. He died. Nice. I like that. That's the best. Harry Potter died. He's actually dead. No more nerd with glasses and a wierd smile, (I'm a Hypocrite, because I wear glasses). He's actually gone. I love that so much. Just don't bring him back, it will have made that abnormally long message for nothing. Don't ever bring Harry back.
10/10 easy
Nice Diary, You know, Merlin reminds me of my Fan Fiction. For anyone who is reading this review of mine, this can be a clue to what is to come up in my own Fan Fiction. Merlin and his diaries, something about Merlin is being planned, but I can't say what. To get off the selfish subject of me, I must say this chapter was GREAT. Rated 10. You inspire me to make my own Fan Fiction about Year 6.
Hm, you are really making this like Star Wars. Fear>anger>hate>suffering. This whole thing really is true though. Your Fan Fiction reminds me of mine. Nicely done. One of the best I've read.