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Studying Isn't Everything by smokeline

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: A view into Hermione's diary shows the human that resides behind the bookworm. PG-13 for language. Note: This fic was completed before the release of HBP, so it will only follow through OOTP canon.

Reviewer: moragami Signed
Date: 08/01/06 Title: Chapter 9: The Plan

U SUCK!!!!! I LOVE U!!!! UP DATE UP DATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Two Steps Back by emmablk1

Rated: •
Summary: James is going to be stuck with Lily for the entire summer...wait...isn't that supposed to be a good thing? In between all the angst and indecision, will these two EVER get together? Hmmm...maybe with a little help with a birdie named Sirius...

Reviewer: moragami Signed
Date: 09/07/06 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

look you have to update quickly, or i'll kill you. besides as you can obveasly sea i have nothing better to do with my time than read ff and make idol death threats. so update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The Long Walk by HarryForGinny

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Harry's and Ginny's first afternoon together after victory over Ravenclaw for the Quiddich Cup.

Reviewer: moragami Signed
Date: 05/16/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i liked it. it was nice to see harry happy for once. it was also kind of a new angle, insted of the costumary "ginnys mad at harry for breaking up with her, and doesn't understand" fic. it also flowed very well, but it was a little short for me. thanks for the good read

L'Amour Commence by Pinkerton

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Lily Evans has always hated James Potter. That is, ever since first year when he turned her purple. But as she enters her seventh and final year at Hogwarts, things start changing...

5-31-07--Doing a major update to the first 5 chapters to make them fit with the rest of the story. You may want to actually reread them! Chaps 1-3 are done.

Reviewer: moragami Signed
Date: 02/28/07 Title: Chapter 5: Mind Games

Yes it was short but i liked it. Especilay the end.

Author's Response: That makes me happy. ^-^

That One Crazy Night by Gryffindorgirl54321

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Very Fluffy! you are warned.

Reviewer: moragami Signed
Date: 11/20/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

very funny, very lilght. i liked it

That's What You Do For Your Friends by Dragon_Warrior

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Lily: Smart, sharp, and would never even dream of getting in trouble. Head Girl.
James: Clever, crafty, and Hogwarts' main source of mischief. Head Boy.
Lily hates James, James knows not what to think of Lily, but when they must work together to ultimately protect the lives of their friends, who knows what can happen?

Reviewer: moragami Signed
Date: 11/22/06 Title: Chapter 2: Frustration & Friends

why the hell did you do that? what is wrong with you? first james would not hurt some one just to get to lily cause thats all he's going to do is end up hurting may to get to lily, and second what the hell is wrong with you

Author's Response: Excuse me, but this is a STORY, my story. I decide what goes in it. This never happened in real life OR in the HP books. Jeez, you\'re seriously overreacting. There is absolutely no need to swear. And there is nothing wrong with me, thank you for caring enough to ask.

Author's Response: Oh, yeah, and by the way? James does NOT hurt May. Issues...

Reviewer: moragami Signed
Date: 11/22/06 Title: Chapter 3: Complications

no comment, no freakin comment. OH MY GOD. what the hell are you thinking. lily would never do that to remus. however i do have to give you credit for drama, it does keep people reading

Author's Response: You know, I\'m really getting tired of you. No one is making you read my story, and I\'d really appreciate if you would stop: 1)swearing, and 2) leaving rude reviews. Although, you did say something good this time, I sense an improvement.

Reviewer: moragami Signed
Date: 12/31/06 Title: Chapter 8: Rescue

What the crap was that? Have you ever herd of timing? You could have waited until the next chapter, gotten Lily and James alone and led the conversation in the direction of romance. Then, at the perfect moment you have Lily ask "Do you love me?" and cut the chapter off. Perfect ending. Your readers are riveted and practically begging you for another chapter.
Oh and finally...
I LOVED IT!!!!!!!
Points for origanality. You always get the same old story. No one ever does anything risky. I do think you could have aproched it better, but I loved it.

Author's Response: um...ok...my turn to ask...what the crap was THAT? I really do not understand you. You criticize my story, and then you say you liked it...I\'m getting mixed signals here. But thanks for the review...I guess...

The Perfect Cliché by MagEd

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Here's the story of awkward situations. The story of a stubborn girl and a determined boy. The story of broom closets, bra straps and declarations of affection. Here's the fairy-tale story of how Lily Evans finally fell for the bullying toerag James Potter. *one-shot*

Edited 10/26/08.

Reviewer: moragami Signed
Date: 10/26/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

definate cliche' but i loved it, it was good writing.

Song by Adelfore Flamell

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: She is in so much pain. For the first time she could remember, control was out of reach and slipping farther and farther away every moment. Will she be lost forever... Will someone have the strength to rescue her out of the nothingness that threatened to envelope her completely? A post HBP fic depicting how the war is taking its toll on everyone.

Reviewer: moragami Signed
Date: 11/15/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i loved it. it was so careing, and sweet. i also love the sincerity, and how it was taken from a real experience. it also flowed very well.

Author's Response: Thanks very much. Ya the part about the song just kinda happened. It wasnt really the plan when i started writing the plot... it just kinda fit right in. :o) As far as the flow, that is one of the things i nitpick to DEATH. I cant stand stories that dont follow a natural flow... like a conversation. I also have my beta to thank for this as well. He made the continuity even better without effecting the final result in the least. Thanks again for your kind comments!

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Rated: •
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Reviewer: moragami Signed
Date: 03/12/07 Title: None

funny, really finny. write faster, this story is funny, and i would like to see Lily and James get together.

Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m glad to hear other people think I\'m funny! As to Lily and James getting together, well we all know it\'ll happen eventually. Not gonna happen anytime soon though! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: moragami Signed
Date: 03/12/07 Title: None

funny, really finny. write faster, this story is funny, and i would like to see Lily and James get together.

Author's Response: Double review!

Reviewer: moragami Signed
Date: 03/12/07 Title: None

funny, really finny. write faster, this story is funny, and i would like to see Lily and James get together.

Author's Response: . . . triple review?