That is so sweet! You show Sirius as such a sweet guy! Great job!!!
You're story is so believable! For a moment while I was reading I thought "Gosh! Jo Rowling is so good!" and then I remembered it was your story. Keep up the awesome work! I hope you keep writing!
When I saw the title of your story and the idea of Harry Potter AND Moulin Rouge I knew I just had to read it. Good job! I really hope you write more soon. I love Moulin Rouge so I can't wait to see some of the scenes brought into the HP universe! Keep up the good work!!
Author's Response: I'll definitely keep writing; the only problem is getting it approved on this bloody site! One of the mods approved this on the first go, so I submitted the second installment and was told that it wasn't what Mugglenet was looking for!
I'm so frustrated with this site, I think I'm going to go back to harrypotterfanfiction.com, it's the same thing but there aren't people there to tell you three different things about the same piece of fiction!
Glad you enjoyed it though; HP and MR are two of my favorite things. One day I was really bored in class, and this came out, so yeah. :)
I wish I had found this story monthes ago! I've always wondered if Remus would ever visit Sirius while in Azkaban. Your story portrays what sort of conversation might have occured quite well. My only complaint would be that Remus seems to be more sympathetic to Sirius's pleading than one would think. After all, Remus did loose all of his closest friends supposidly because of Sirius. Great job overall. I look forward to future updates.
Wow. That's all I can say. I"m really hooked onto your story! It's awesome. I really liked this chapter. Please keep up the amazing work. You're a very good writer.
Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant. I've been waiting alll week for this chapter and you have exceeded my expectations. You're amazing!
Author's Response: huzzah! i got an E on my O.W.L.s!!! lol. kidding, but thank you. im glad it wasnt disappointing!
Great job! The only thing that confused me a bit was the part where Lily goes to Prof. McGonagall about seeing Dumbledore. Then the story switched to James sitting on his bed. I wasn't sure what was going on. Anyways, I hope chapter 22 is going really well because your story is wonderful!
Author's Response: yeah, i didnt feel like showing the whole conversation with dumbledore (i dont really like writing dumbleodre) so i figured id jump from the way they got into his office to that night, and then i kinda gave what happened then through James's thoughts. sorry if that was confusing, and thanks for reading on!! :)
You are brilliant! I loved the dueling. Please keep writing! You have a talent that most people only dream of having. Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: oh why thank you! im glad you loved the dueling, i had a blast writing it!
My gosh! You've had me at the edge of my seat this entire chapter. I figured something was wrong once Alice died but you still creeped me out all the same. Excellent job!
Author's Response: yes! im so happy people got into this chapter! i had SO much fun writing it, and i hoped it would at least be somewhat misleading. huzzah! thanks for reviewing!
this is no mere ranger...this is aragorn, son of arathorn...you owe him your allegiance...
ok im done ;)
Snape was written very nicely. I almost wanted to laugh at him because of his anger. Of course, I like to laugh at Snape every chance I get. I would definitly not want to be on Remus' end of Dumbledore's anger. Awesome chapter! Please update soon!
Oscar worthy preformance on Tonks' part. I marvel at her ability NOT to laugh in such an amusing situation. Remus must have had a hard time not laughing also. Great job once again. You've got these characters down and never seem to get out of character. Please update soon!
I finally have time to sit down and read something good and what luck! You've updated this fantastic story! Great chapter. I like this whole thing about writing from Lupin's father's perspective is interesting. Please work hard at the story, its so good!!
Amazing chapter. I've been sitting on the edge of my seat starring at this darned computer screen just reading. Awesome job, all that work you put into this chapter really shows. I liked the addition about Diana's death (although it is sad, it does fit well with the story). Remus's reaction was totally Remus. I imagine him as a very calm man who rarely ever raises his voice and always talks rationally. Once again great job! I hope the next chapter is not as hard! Oh, and as a side note: as I was reading your chapter a dog kept barking outside. I can't help but think of a werewolf howling along with the dog... okay, now I'm giving myself the creeps! Please update soon!!!!
I saw your story under the featured stories and just had to congratulate you. I've been waiting for this story to get some worthy recognition! You've been writing such an original story and its nice to see it being honored. Congratulations!
Amazing. I love this story- I think it is one of my favorite stories (both fiction and fanfiction) of any that I have ever read. You're a fantastic writer- any books you write I will read. I think the ending fit perfectly into the story- I feel really happy about the ending and Oblivious on a whole. Everything feels complete. You've done a beautiful job and I hope you keep writing!!
Freaky ending! I mean that in a good way. You scared me. Awesome!
My goodness! I must have been on the edge of my seat for that entire chapter! Please update soon! I want to know what happens next! This suspense is going to be the end of me. By the way, Kane is an amazingly realistic character. I don't know how you do it but everything he says and does is just so unique. I hate the guy but I truly admire your writing skills to create such a villain.
Gosh you're good. That was so cool! I love the image of Remus in a leather jacket, scars on his neck, and dyed hair. It makes me think of Ewan McGregor in Moulin Rouge. The image just works. Please update soon! That ending is killing me!!!
I couldn't read on after the nappy incident for a few minutes because it was so funny. That was probably the most hilarious bit I've ever read in a fanfiction. Please keep writing! This is awesome!!
What have the children been doing to keep Kane away for so long? Harry and the DA must be doing some serious charming because Kane is a pretty powerful werewolf. Excellent chapter- it seems to me that every other chapter ends in a cliffhanger, and yet they never get old. The only thing that struck me as odd was Remus being unable to adjust quickly to his werewolf body. I would have thought that with all the running around he did in his school days he would remember some of the basic motor skills. Other than that, you are brilliant. I will be standing in line with my copy of all the books you ever write eagerly awaiting your autograph.
Author's Response: Don't worry, you'll find out what the children did later. With Remus - the difference between now and the Marauder days is the Wolfsbane. When he was at school, even when he was more aware around his friends, the wolf was still there and still in charge of motion. But now, with Wolfsbane, it is his mind and his alone and he has to work it out for himself... Thanks for your review and I kind of hope to be signing that autograph someday myself! :)