I promised myself I'd never read fan fiction...then I did. Then I promised myself I'd never write it...then I did. Oops.
These days I'm working more than full-time, and I hardly have time to breathe, let alone read or write, but the Potter series will always remain near and dear to my heart.
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Wow! This is a very long--but thoroughly engaging and excellently-written story.
I'm not a fan of Snape. I really, really, really don't like him. However, while many of Snape's actions in this story are, well, highly improbable, you managed, for the most part, to keep him in character while making him almost tolerable (on occasion, at least).
Also, though I don't believe that a Muggle could ever be as involved in the wizarding world as your Ms. Norgard is, Clancy is a truly astounding character and a perfect match for Severus Snape. She can really keep him on his toes...I enjoyed the many (lengthy) exchanges of biting insults between the two.
Nice job!
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"And, no, I do not intend to don a plumed hat. As for that popinjay," he muttered, casting a withering glance at Lockhart, "a plumed hat may very well be a staple of his wardrobe."
Brilliant! Absolutely hilarious!
Nice job, overall...
Is Sirius losing (not "loosing") his touch?
Can't wait to read more...
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Very good...the ending was a bit fluffy, but that happens, I guess...keep up the good work...and stuff...
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Ha ha! Lily rubbed Sirius...but seriously, nice job...I love the "Don't touch your broomstick!"/"I'll get the spare broomsticks..."
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More fluffiness...ah, well...
Good story...
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Azkaban--with a "k"
Lucius Malfoy, not "Luscius"
Isn't Regulus younger than Sirius...?
Nice story, in spite of some spelling errors, etc...
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Hmm...interesting...so Mrs. Potter's a bit like Mrs. Weasley, then...
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Good story...it's hard to review so many chapters adequately--that is without excruciating details--I just keep repeating myself...sorry 'bout that...nice job.
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Nice ending...good story...pretty well-written...and stuff...
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Snivellus sure was a jerk...
“So you think you can defy me?” Ooh...chills....how creepy!
Nice job so far...
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Nifflers, not "knifflers"...good story...well-written...nice job...
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Good story...there are several very noticeable typos in this chapter though...overall, nice job...
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Good story...very interesting...
Moony, not "Mooney..."
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Flamingoes are pretty.
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Filch is always bursting into random places unexpectedly wearing fluffy nightgowns...when will he learn that this is just not appropriate?
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Something evil had happened, and she was taking pleasure in it...Parvati is so evil...
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Flobberworms are fascinating!
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When random llamas...
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