whoa! i love this story! however, you should've made this into a chapter story, it would've been even more perfect
good and all synonyms that go with this word
Author's Response: Thanks and I have no clue why this is so long and if i\'m the only who sees this then you\'ll all know why i\'m this nuts.
good,great,everything! extremely funny
Author's Response: Thank you so much
merci
gracius
and thanx
wow thats deep............really deep.
TOTALLY FUNNY STORY! LUV IT! ITS ON MY FAVORITES LIST.
Author's Response: Yay (for like, the third time)! I love being added to favorites!
damn.this is the mess you see today with all these "strait" guys in love with other men. and then if the guy breaks up with them or dies, they gotta blame it on someone and basically abuse them in the process.this world today is one hot mess.
i feel bad for hermione right now. lucky gin is there or else there would definetly be another plot to the story, im sure
luv the story, but you need to update faster, i cant wait till the next chapter is posted!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hermione needs to learn how to bake a pie that will kill him in 3 days.ill give the damn recipe myself if i have to, shit!
okay, since you asked 4 ideas, i think that the next scene should be in the clinic where mione works. luna corners her and confronts her about whats happening in miones marriage. then mione ends up crying again, and luna tries to comfort her but ends up kissing her instead.
nice cliffie! i want to know what happened, so please keep writing! one of my favorite stories today!
Author's Response: Thanks, it\'s flattering to know that this is one of your favorites. I hope you continue reading. :)
oh wow....im srying right now. this story is so deep. how did u come up with this?u must think a lot for the story to turn out like that. whoa.....
oh come on!!it was gettin good.wat happened?u had better finish this story, youth,and work on your rap while yer at it.
Author's Response: All right, all right, I\'ll work on the rap. Thank you for the compliment. You reviewers! What would I do without you?
GREAT SEX SCENE! LUV THE PAIRING, IM ACTUALY A GAY FEMALE MYSELF
the part about when gin tells her mom thats shes gay will sort of be like when i tell the jamaican side of my family that im gay. it will quite scary, i garuntee it.
Author's Response: I hope I wrote it so that it was as scary as it would be in real life. I wouldn\'t actually know because I\'ve never had to do it (I\'m straight). However, good luck to you when you tell yor family! I hope it goes well. xx
'stupid arrogant twat' nice name-calling..it adds a great touch to the story.
im a lesbian and god dammed proud of it..my girl, della, makes me feel so loved and i dont give a shit what my family says..great chapter by the way..
i like the part that goes "and all hell broke loose." that reminds me of when i told my family about my sexual orientation..except it was during tahnksgiving and not easter..i got a present from my girl though..she was there. luckily everyone is a deep sleeper..im the only oddball..im a light sleeper. anything can wake me up, even the smallest sounds..
u have to create a sequel or something..this is really good.