Don't read if you are offended with rape and abuse. Contains events that will be quite offensive and possibly "disgusting". You have been warned.
Runner Up in the Dangerous Liaisons Awards and He Had It Coming Awards.
~The story is now Complete!~
Thanks for reading!
A few mistakes I should point out:
"Merlin Granger," he breathed into her ear. (Should be Merlin, Granger) same thing in: "Crying again Hermione?" should be: Crying again, Hermione.
It hardly matters now, but those are direct addresses so, before the name there must be a comma.
Other than that, it's really great.
You made the same mistake in this chapter as in the last one.
Also you have American mesurements as opposed to metric.
hate to be such a pain but: egging should be edging. I know, I have this thing that when I read a fic mistakes pop out at me.
Sorry, it's great, but Draco isn't really in character.
It wasn't as bad as you put it up to be. In fact, rather tame.
interesting, must read on.
Good start. I really think that this is intersting.