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Reviewer: ronnyc718 Signed
Date: 08/21/06 Title: None

Let's see...

I love that Marcus knew about the change in line-up for a week without telling Oliver.

I love that Oliver calls him "Mar-Mar" first with familiarity, then with mockery.

Silvia, in this chapter anyway, seems absent-minded and doesn't know how to be a mother, but she still seems to care for her son. That makes me nervous for what will happen with her... Is she going to die, or just run off with John, or go totally off the deep end?

There's a few typos and spelling errors, but overall your writing style just really drew me in.

Rest assured that I shall be back to read the rest of this story. Great job!!

Author's Response: I\'m so glad that you are enjoying my story. =D

Thank you for the review.

My Father's Face by shadowdancer909

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: The problem with looking just like my father is that everyone expects me to act just like him, too.

Reviewer: ronnyc718 Signed
Date: 07/28/06 Title: Chapter 1: My Father's Face

This so well-written. Even though I don't think the characters would act that way (Ron and Hermione - grrr!!!), I didn't think it was OOC. It basically showed the downsides of their personalities. Ron really was jealous of Harry sometimes (cough4thbookcough) and Hermione really put too much stock in rules sometimes. I really like your exploration of the dark what-ifs.

Oh, by the way, my favorite part is when Harry talks about fighting their own wars - beautiful!

The Time of Their Lives by Lil Red

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: "It was dusk, and Ron and Hermione had just turned up in the common room, pink-faced from the cold and looking as though they'd had the time of their lives."

--Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban, American hardcover edition, page 157

Have you ever wondered what exactly made Ron and Hermione's day so perfect? It couldn't have just been the sheer fun they had from going to the village to make it the day of their lives...maybe there was something more...

Reviewer: ronnyc718 Signed
Date: 07/31/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Time of Their Lives

Your ending got me off-guard - I love when that happens! This was so sweet and cute, and then all of the sudden it's so sad. Great job! I was getting near the end trying to figure out how this could still fit into the books. This ending was so perfect for that!! 10/10

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: ronnyc718 Signed
Date: 07/31/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Time of Their Lives

Bah - I thought the first review didn't go through, so I redid it... Now I look SO cool.

Author's Response: It\'s ok! Now I got two great reviews in one! lol

Mistakes by Pearle

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: St Mungo’s is a very busy place. And mistakes do happen. Try explaining that to Severus and Hermione.

Reviewer: ronnyc718 Signed
Date: 08/01/06 Title: Chapter 1: Mistakes

Hilarious! Great job - and way to work the sentences in seamlessly, not awkwardly. No offense, but this was definitely not the worst fanfic I've ever read.

Also, I love how Snape was so... Snape-ish... to everyone BUT Hermione. Love conquers all and all that. :0)

Reviewer: ronnyc718 Signed
Date: 08/01/06 Title: Chapter 1: Mistakes

The End by lily_evans34

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: This story is told in Cedric's POV before, and after, he dies. One shot, taking place the night of the Third Task.

Reviewer: ronnyc718 Signed
Date: 08/21/06 Title: Chapter 1: The End

I had to stop reading this in the middle because my eyes were so teary. Excellent, excellent job.

Author's Response: Aww... thanks! That\'s very sweet!

Luck Becomes the Winner by Dutchy

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: A one-shot about Cedric. He takes on a job in a book-store and makes plans for the future.

Reviewer: ronnyc718 Signed
Date: 08/15/06 Title: Chapter 1: Luck Becomes the Winner

Oh, my chest just tightened at the last line. His death is the one that made me the most upset because it was the most... pointless. Bah!!

Great story. I love the idea of him as a writer, and his desire to find someone to share that with.

Happily Ever by Kedavra

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: When baby Harry won't stop crying, Lily tells him a fairy tale. But in the real world, not everyone gets a happy ending.

Reviewer: ronnyc718 Signed
Date: 08/14/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh my gosh! This was excellent. All the time Lily was telling the story I could feel myself getting more and more anxious. I love the tragic-ness (is that a word?) of Lily not getting to even finish the story. *wonders away to find a tissue*

Something More by Buttamellow

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: They had had many fights before... so why did this seem so final? R/Hr

Reviewer: ronnyc718 Signed
Date: 07/31/06 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

Awesome. You avoid so many of the pitfalls that plague many a writer. You keep this strictly in Ron's prespective and keep your present tense consistent throughout.

I love the part where Ron can't figure out why Hermione is disappointed in his answer to how he found her. I love even more that you never explicitly explain it - although it should be obvious, at least to the female reader. ;)

And, of course, the ending is fantastic.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this review. I enjoy reading ones especially like this one because they let me know exactly what they enjoyed in the story. And I\'m so glad that you love the ending, it came to me while I was writing it and I could\'t see it being ended in any other way. Once again, thank you so much!

Memorial by TrueLies

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: This is a very short, one-shot story about a man who visits Sirius' memorial stone on a cool, October night. Once there, he thinks back and reflects upon the events of the past year and a half since Sirius' death.

Reviewer: ronnyc718 Signed
Date: 07/27/06 Title: Chapter 1: Memorial

Oh, I really liked this. Good job! I loved that you didn't directly say who it was - although it is clear by the end. :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I tried sooo hard not to make it obvious somewhere in the middle so I\'m glad you liked the end.

Through the Eyes of an Onlooker by Cruciatus Love

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: The House of Black may look beautifully decorated and filled with life through the eyes of someone who had never lived there, but when two boys have spent their entire childhood suffering the pain their family gave them, this same house looks only melancholy and depressing.

Reviewer: ronnyc718 Signed
Date: 08/21/06 Title: Chapter 1: That Fateful Night

Great job - I love how Sirius is the only one who sees through the mask Regulus puts on.

I also admire the completed feel you give this by beginning and ending it with the title.

Author's Response: Aww, thanks. I always love having a central theme that carries throughout an enrite piece. (It\'s the best way to write a research paper of school.)

The Dursley Descendent by krumflies11392

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Dudley Dursley gets married to a wonderful wife and has two perfect sons. Everything seems to be perfect in his life until an unexpected letter arrives at his doorstep- his son is a wizard! Is Dudley going to have to relive his dreaded childhood?

Dear Fans,

I know that I have not been on Mugglenet FanFic in SEVERAL months and I am sorry. These past months and year have been so crazy, hectic, and frustrating there has been no time for DD. I am sad to tell that I will not be finishing DD unless a random amount of freetime appears.
Instead of leaving my fans to a cliff-hanger, I might be writing an ending chapter to summarize how I planned to finish DD. I am so sorry for all my fans! I appreciate your time in reading and reviewing- you guys are wonderful! 200 reviews! Thanks to my fans!

-krumflies11392

Reviewer: ronnyc718 Signed
Date: 08/24/06 Title: Chapter 2: An Unexpected Letter

ligiligirl, maybe you should word your reviews in a nicer way.

Author's Response: LOL i c u kno ligiligirl!

Reviewer: ronnyc718 Signed
Date: 08/24/06 Title: Chapter 2: An Unexpected Letter

No, I don't know ligiligirl, so I shouldn't have gotten involved. I apologize to the both of you.

Author's Response: Its ok

Reviewer: ronnyc718 Signed
Date: 08/24/06 Title: Chapter 2: An Unexpected Letter

I think my computer may have glitched, so I'm reposting.

No, I don't know ligiligirl, so I shouldn't have gotten involved. I apologize to the both of you.

And, I'll leave an actual review for your next chapter, krumflies. Happy writing!

Author's Response: It\'s ok I understand.

Magic and Molars by Thebird

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: It's a sorry day for a patient of Dr. Granger, neighborhood dentist. Hermione Granger just found out that she is a witch, atteding Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Hermione is going to tell her father about the news...and somebody is going to get a major toothache.

Reviewer: ronnyc718 Signed
Date: 08/01/06 Title: Chapter 1: "One-shot"

Hahaha... I've always wanted to know how Hermione and her parents took this news - this was such a wonderfully funny take on that!

Levicorpus by nerd2006

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Marauders' era, HBP spoilers. James Potter discovers Severus Snape's hexes - and uses them against him.

Reviewer: ronnyc718 Signed
Date: 08/02/06 Title: Chapter 1: Levicorpus

I was so upset when Harry first saw his dad acting like a bully. I had the same shuddering reaction here - which is a good thing. You made me have an emotional response. Great job!

Memories of a Man by EccaDaisy

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: "Six moments in time, they are all different but they all remind me of one man."

Told from Hermione's point of view, 6, 100 word peices that all lead back to Severus Snape. Please Read and Review.

Reviewer: ronnyc718 Signed
Date: 08/03/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love the ending!! Great job.

Author's Response: Thanks. What can i say, im a romantic at heart. If you liked this i recommed that you read A Perfect Day on Ashwinder (It may be here as well, not sure) its brilliantly written. Ecca

Conviction by POTCgirl1337

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: A 17 year old Squib is banished from her wizarding village south of Salem in the year 1690. With no where else to go, she walks miles to the closest town, Salem, where she is convicted of witchcraft on a little girl. She is to be hung by the neck untill dead.

Reviewer: ronnyc718 Signed
Date: 08/06/06 Title: Chapter 1: Conviction

That's so sad. I love the way Ann is so void of emotion. She just states the facts and lets them speak for themselves.

Author's Response: Yay! I was hoping that poeple would recognize that about her! I\'m glad you ejoyed it!

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