Hey everyone! I'm Cassandra, and I'm in Graduate school right now in California. I actually started writing fanfics when I was 13, but I stopped after a year and so now I'm back! I hope I'm not rusty...Enjoy!
Haha...great job there! Very cute, classically romantiic, witty and funny, and great job with Hermione's character. Very like her, both in her attitude with her studies and with her dealing with Ron.
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Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
Classically romantic = meal in a posh restaurant and dancing in the rain, with a Ron/Hermione twist. This was a lot of fun to write (and rewrite).
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Amazing chapter! My question though, why did Draco have to throw the pieces away? Why didn't Lucius just use magic to repair the vase?
Oo la la! Is all I have to say. :)
Oo la la! Is all I have to say. :)
Oo la la! Is all I have to say. :)
I love how true-to-character this is! For everyone.
Such great writing! I love it so far.
I enjoyed how you briefly described little excerpts of each of the character's holiday. :)
I enjoyed how you briefly described little excerpts of each of the character's holiday. :)
Whoa! So intense!
It's all so suspenseful! I'm loving this story!
I love the direction of the plot! Man, I particularly enjoy the complexity of emotions going on inside of Draco.
I actually have some constructive criticism for you. The paragraph where Bellatrix is describing to Hermione the progress of how the Cruciatus curse causes a person to lose their mind....it seemed too scientific for her. Too lengthy and detailed. I don't see her like that. That's just my interpretation of her though.