12/27/04
Mmm... I'm boring, so onto everything else.
Very soon, I plan on posting a YouSirius or YouRemus fic. I'm working on one of both, and I'm deliberating over which to put out first. You can e-mail with your opinions, if you'd like :)
Sirius is mine. He belongs to me. Anybody else with this in their pesonal inforumation is gone in the head.
You scored as Sirius Black. You are a gifted wizard and very loyal to your allegiance. Whilst you have a big heart and care very much about those around you, you can be a little arrogant and reckless at times.
Sirius Black
90%Harry Potter
80%Hermione Granger
80%Severus Snape
70%Lord Voldemort
65%Draco Malfoy
60%Albus Dumbledore
60%Ron Weasley
55%Remus Lupin
45%Ginny Weasley
40%
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A Conversation with Mrs. Dursley by Examun
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Just after a move onto Privet Drive, have a cup of tea and enjoy a short conversation with Mrs. Dursley. (Based several years after the books.)
Date: 01/19/05 Title: Chapter 1: Over a cup of tea.
This is good! I like it. It's different- I don't think there's another fic on the site like it. Is it just a one-shot? If not, keep going! I'd like to see more of Petunia's flat-out denial of Harry. Is Joanne Harry's daughter? Or does Mrs. Dursley just not like her because she looks like Harry/Lily?
Veiled Revelations by erikthephantom
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary: The Hogwarts Express brings mystery and mischief in the Marauders' seventh and final year at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. James, Sirius, Remus, and Peter are facing a year of N.E.W.T.s, romance, intrigue, and, of course, a little mischief-making. There are plot twists galore! James (in the midst of saving the world) continues desperately to try to woo the incorrigible Lily Evans. Sirius deals with family problems while dealing with his incredible popularity and good looks (the horror!). Remus is provided with a backdoor to avoiding the prejudices of the inevitable real world, but at what cost? (dun-dun-dun) And Peter...well, Peter gets himself a girlfriend (but don't worry: it doesn't affect his hero-worshipping of James...or DOES IT?!)
Date: 01/08/05 Title: Chapter 24: Now It's Forever
I luuuve the ending. So ingenious.
But anyway. I love the story! The plot, the characters- everything! It's awesome. I'll be sure to look for more of your works ;)
Author's Response: you won't have to look too long i plan on putting it up...now...
A Day in the Life of Crookshanks by Hermione200
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: A Day in the Life of Crookshanks is... just what it sounds like! It is a one-shot story seen from the point of view of my favorate ginger-haired feline, as he spends time in the Gryffindor Common Room.
Date: 01/19/05 Title: Chapter 1: The Only Chapter in this Story
Aww, this was soo cute. Crookshanks is awesome! I'll look for more of your works. And give you a 10.
Fate by Liisa
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Sirius returns miraculously from behind the veil, uncovering a secret that's remainded hidden for too long and was obviously not supposed to be found...He undertakes the task of trying to fix the mistake he made all those years ago on Halloween night
Date: 01/20/05 Title: Chapter 8: You Will Be Erased
Oh, God, I hope Harry doesn't go back in time. And, just curious, if they stop the Potters from dying, which would mean the powerful magical bond Lily gave Harry when she died, wouldn't Voldemort easily kill Harry? And if they get the whole family out of Godric's Hollow, how would Voldemort be destroyed? Harry was his downfall, remember? Well, with your talent and creativity, I'm sure you'll work it out somehow. By the way... I have to agree with Ron on this: What in the bloody world just happened? What DID happen? Why were Harry and Ginny pretending to be angry?? I'm soo stupid right now. It's probably from all the midterm studying (which I'm supposed to be doing right now), draining my brain of all knowledge besides the Bill of Rights and the Battle of Saratoga and other useless, boring things like that. Owell, I'll understand eventually. Keep up the good work!! You're making me luve Ginny and Harry as a couple. Soo cute!! I give you a 10.
Author's Response: Well all I can say is that I HAVE taken into account everything (and more) that you've pointed out and I know very well the consequenses. All I can offer to you know is my promise that I know what I'm doing and yes things ARE going to change...this whoe story is about change. If that doesn't float your boat...then I'm sorry. I'm glad you're liking the Harry Ginny stuff. There are a few more chapters of that to come up and thanks for giving me a thought out review and a ten! you rule!
Date: 01/20/05 Title: Chapter 8: You Will Be Erased
Grr, I really need to proof my reviews. I messed up when I meant to say "... which would mean the powerful magical bond protection thing Lily gave Harry when she died would dissappear, because, well, she didn't die,..." Oh well. At least my sentence fragments mean you get another 10!
Author's Response: lol, I understood what you meant! Thanks though ^_-
Date: 01/26/05 Title: Chapter 9: Ask Me Again
I'm so glad you like long reviews, because mine always are. It's not even on purpose! Get ready for another one: Aww!!! Because of you, I completely lurve Ginny and Harry as a couple. And Hogsmead!! Yay! I also lurve how you write Harry and Ginny and Ron and Hermione as couples. It seems really... well... real. And how they would all act in relationships/crushes. Too bad the good mood will indefinately be ruined by Sirius telling Harry about the thing. :( But it's all good. If this story was too happy, it's be un-good. (Not the story- just the happiness. lol... I don't think you could make this story bad if you tried.) Good job! Keep up the good work, and update ASAP! I need my Harry and Ginny fix, and you're the only writer who can give it to me!!
Author's Response: wow, another addicted fan to H/G :P I'm glad you're still ejoying it and reaing!
Date: 02/10/05 Title: Chapter 13: Where Are We?
Wow!!! Reeaally well-wirtten! Omg! This was awesome! The time travel process was, like... amazingly, awesomely described!! Wowies, I really admire you for this. Yay for Harry telling Ginny he loves her; yay for them being in the past!! The plotlines getting really interesting. Update ASAP!
Author's Response: haha! I wrote the time travel scene in my Bio class while I was bored :P Maybe I'll have to not pay attention more often ;)
Date: 03/09/05 Title: Chapter 23: Blast That Man
Oh. my. God. No. Nooo!!! Ewwies, I really hope Sirius isn't dead. But you're such a good writer, despite the depressing content of this chapter! Like, it's so cool how you had 'Sirius' being dead affect Sirius, and all that jazz. What about Remus? Ooh, update soon.
Author's Response: lol, glad you enjoyed :) keep reading!
Date: 03/09/05 Title: Chapter 23: Blast That Man
mmkay sorry I didn't read your responses to the other reviews. Sirius isn't dead, lol. Sorry! But at least you get another 10 out of my mistake :)
Author's Response: not a problem, everyone did it :p
Date: 08/16/05 Title: Chapter 42: A New Past
People who work in the Department of Mysteries are called Unspeakables, lol. I haven't reviewed in, like, a century, sorry, but yeeahh... this story is seriously amazing. I love how you make everything fall in to place. I'm not like "WTF", hehe. It makes alot of sense. There were a few grammatical mistakes, but otherwise, the past whatever-amount-I'm-making-up-for-in-this-review
of chapters have been flawless. 10!! Yay.
Author's Response: yay! thanks :D
Date: 01/18/05 Title: Chapter 7: Quite a Paradox
You messed up my makeup- I cried soo much! This story is so beautiful and sad. I love how you make everyone's character so complex, and everyone is so emotional, and everyone is in character... and you made exactly zero grammatical/spelling mistakes!! Woo!! You're very talented. Hehe... Ron and Hermione in a closet together. You're great. Anyway, I read the whole story so far, and I really, really loved it. I'm starting to sound like a broken record player, lol, but still- you're soo talented!! It's just... lol, I don't think I can descrbe it. It's just the way you write the character's dialogue and emotions... it seems so real. This is the second story I'm adding to My Favorites, so trust me, I really like it, because I'm usually too insuffrably lazy to put anything on that list. Update reeaally soon- what are Harry and Ginny going to do now that Hermione and Ron are out of the picture, and vice versa, now that I think about it? Are Lily and James really going to come out from behind the veil? Seriously, this is the best story on this whole website. Updaaaate!! *Rates a 10*
Author's Response: wow...um...thank you! thank you SO MUCH! it really means alot to me when people take the time to review, but to leave long reviews just really makes my day! I'm so glad you like it! A new chapter should be up soon!
Just Love by leo_sol
Rated: •Summary: Sirius is on his way to Hogwarts. What awaits him there - friends? laughter? romance? How about D) all of the above? Join the Marauders and their female equivalent in this unique story of friendship and love.
Date: 02/10/05 Title: Chapter 6: Five
Dammit, leo sol, updaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaate!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I'm working on it! Sheesh. Eager much?
Date: 01/11/05 Title: Chapter 6: Five
PS) by this, I meant this chapter, because it was my favorite :)
Date: 03/23/05 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6
EEEEEK new chapter!!!! and oooomg it was sososo cute!!!! i loooved it. i totally love how you captured the whole pre-pubescent and confused emotions of the little boys for the girls!! soo adorable, ecspecially the one with james and remus and lily dancing, and all that jazz. keep up the good work, and preferably update SOONER. 10!!
Author's Response: haha, thanks. glad you liked it. just starting next chapter now. it'll be harder for me to do, 'cause i've got to mature everyone by two years and still make it realistic.
Date: 01/08/05 Title: Chapter 6: Five
I feel so SpEcIaL... I'm the first to review this, though I definately shouldn't be. With the exceptions of a select few, you are one of the only writers on this website who can succesfully keep all of JKR's characters... well, in character, not make your original character a complete Mary Sue, make an interesting plot, and use proper spelling and grammar. Sorry if I sound like a broken record player- the reviews I leave for the aforementioned select few authors sound alot like what I just said. But hey! It's the truth. Anyways...
I can't believe more people haven't reviewed this. It's awesome! I mean, the students you're writing about are in first year, and you make them act like they really are eleven and twelve. (James and Sirius don't know what they're feeling when they look at Lily and Allene, but they know it's good. Awww!!!) I'm sure that you'll continue to do the same when they're older (act their age, I mean- not act like they're eleven and twelve. You get it.)
You said the next chapter's going to be Halloween. Wicked sweet! But does that mean we won't get to see our favorite characters go to the ball? It doesn't matter- I just thought it'd be cute for Jamsie and Sirius to "not know what they were feeling, but know it was good" when they saw Allene and Lily in their purty dressy things. LoL. Update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! It's for reviewers like you and Azkaban13 that I like writing this stuff. And thanks for noticing my grammar, one of my pet peeves is bad spelling! So I try to be good at it.
I really appreciate your input, ALL OF YOU, and my next chapter (which I should probably go finish now) is dedicated to you.
The Three Muggleteers by Maggie
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Everything went absolutely crazy in 6th year as Draco Malfoy and his cronies get sent as foreign exchange students to a muggle high school in America. It's all insane and completely unpredictable: Voldemort gets married to his teddy bear, Lucius & Death Eaters practise Irish-dancing in Azkaban before they break out to join Voldemort in his newest and stupidest yet evil plan to take over the world, Greg turns into a chimp from his brain transplant. Bullies at school, hillbillies, 60's groove dudes and random French Maid costumes will turn their world upside-down. Hopefully, reading this story will convince you that Draco is not pretty. *~*This week's highlights: Draco gets his first driving lesson.
Date: 01/23/05 Title: Chapter 11: FOOD FIGHT!!!!
LoL!! The gawky blonde foreign exchange student. And the Elvis impersonator, and the petting zoo... haha. You're a genius. This story is so ridiculous it's hilarious. Keep up the good work, and update soon!
Date: 03/23/05 Title: Chapter 14: Potter vs. Riddle
LOLies. you're so random and hilarious!! i luuuved these three chapters that i somehow didnt notice were posted, so i give you a 10.
Date: 01/15/05 Title: Chapter 10: The Quest to Find Draco’s Body and Revive Cho Before High School Starts
You are my IDOL. I seriously got a six-pack from laughing so much at this story. And this chapter!! Joey Gladstone. Full House. Voldemort marrying Bobby (?). LOL!!! Update soon!!!
Author's Response: Um...what's a sixpack?
Either it's British or I just have no slang vocabulary...I really hope it's the first one.
Date: 01/29/05 Title: Chapter 11: FOOD FIGHT!!!!
Aww, sorry!! A six-pack is a set of very defined abdominal muscles. You get highly defined abdominal muscles from doing excersises like crunches and push ups. By saying I got a six-pack from your story, I was saying it made me laugh so hard that I got a six-pack... like, how one's abs hurt when they laugh very hard, you know? I'm sorry, again :)
Date: 12/27/04 Title: None
Ooh, good plotline! I've never seen one like it. One question, though- why does Diana have to go back in time to see the Potters die? I don't really get it. Otherwise, I understood everything perfectly. I also find it hard to believe that you speak English better than me, and it's not even your native language. Nice job! Update ASAP. (PS) 'Like I didn’t feared enough professor Snape just at the sound of his voice, that conversation made me more vulnerable. His face leaning towards mine, the rude tone, the reprisal.' I think you got a bit messed up on this- if it were me, I'd rephrase it something like" "If Snape didn't scare me enough just at the sound of his voice, this conversation worsened my fear, what with his face leaning towards mine, his rude words, and his reprisal.