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12/28/04

Yes, those are my real initials.
Birthday: April fourteenth. Age: Early twenties
Pets: Two Great Danes and an Iguana

Favorites-
HP books: Goblet of Fire and Half-Blood Prince
HP movies: Philosopher's Stone, Chamber of Secrets and Goblet of Fire
other book favorites: Lord of the Rings Trilogy; any Star Wars book
other movie favorites: Star Wars movies; Lord of the Rings trilogy; Star Trek: First Contact; Coneheads; True Lies; Judge Dread; Terminater trilogy; Dracula: Dead and Loving It; and many, many more
videogames: ALL Zelda games; Final Fantasy series; Mario games; Star Wars: Rogue Squadren series; Star Fox: Assualt; too many more to mention

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Swapping with Snape by Loz

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Thanks to an ingenious plan of Dumbledore's, Severus Snape and Harry Potter swap bodies. They're doing this to fight Voldemort.

Dumbledore says it's the only way Harry can survive. But can Snape get over the trials and tribulations of being a teenager again, and can Harry battle unruly Potions students and greasy black hair?

In short - will either of them survive?

The latest chapter is shown from Snape's point of view.

Reviewer: Obliviate Signed
Date: 12/28/04 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Eight

You really captured the essence of harry's and Snape's characters, good job. Please continue soon.

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Reviewer: Obliviate Signed
Date: 01/31/05 Title: None

I think you should keep the story the way it is. I think it is hilarious. Personally, randomness only distracts from the story, and is not funny. And that Monkey thing is disturbing, not funny.

Reviewer: Obliviate Signed
Date: 12/28/04 Title: None

This story is pretty good, so far. The first chapter was shaky, but the rest is good. As for a solution for Mrs. Weasley, it's real simple. The healer even said it. That is, treat him as he is acting, and seeking attention. Mrs. weasley is out shopping already, so she should buy Harry some diapers. He's acting like a baby, so treat him like one. Diaper him, feed him, dress him, bathe him, all of it.

Author's Response: . . . . . .?? I appreciate the good review. I'd be more shocked about your solution, but I have already had two e-mails with the same idea. It is just odd, I think. ????

Reviewer: Obliviate Signed
Date: 01/16/05 Title: None

I like it. It has humor and heart. Though Harry rarely cries in the books, I think any eleven-year-old boy would cry in that situation. You have good character development, keep going.

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Reviewer: Obliviate Signed
Date: 12/28/04 Title: None

Very good. You have a talent for fan songs.

Author's Response: I do? I mean, yes, I do! Well, I never really thought I would be good at this kind of stuff, but in came to me in the car ride home from picking up a Christmas tree. There was a song on the radio called "The Twelve Pains of Christmas," and I thought it would be funny to make "The twelve Pains of FanFics." It's mine and my friend's new favorite Christmas song ^_^

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Reviewer: Obliviate Signed
Date: 04/12/05 Title: None

I am so glad my reviewers recommended your story to me. I really like the details you write into your story. I don't know if you take reader suggestions seriously or not, but I do think Harry and Leilani getting into a tinsy bit of trouble together over the holidays would be good. Keep up the good writing and update when you can.

Reviewer: Obliviate Signed
Date: 04/11/05 Title: None

This is an amazing and complex story. This chapter was very sad, but now Harry will never want to leave his idea world. The story is so descriptive and realistic. Harry really sounded like somebody who would use drugs and then like somebody who is using drugs. If he does wake up he will definantly feel worse, like going through withdrawl.

Reviewer: Obliviate Signed
Date: 04/19/05 Title: None

I'm sorry to hear you had such trouble posting your story. I just finished it on the other site. It is really good, though it ended differently than I expected. I'll say no more, as not to ruin it for others. I really enjoyed all the detail you put into EVERY character. You really put some thought into their behavior, where others might have only done so with Harry, maybe Leilani. I only hope I have done as good a job with my own fanfiction. Though it is humor, I would appreciate your thoughts, if you ever have time to read and review; just look in my profile for the longer story.. I know how busy college is though, so don't worry if you can't.

The Great Valentine War by CarrickORourke

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: It seemed so simple. Give a valentine card to a friend that you hope (if you dare admit it) just may be a little bit more than a friend someday soon. But nothing is ever that simple between the four of them, is it? Harry/Ginny and Ron/Hermione as well as a good dose of many other familiar characters.

Reviewer: Obliviate Signed
Date: 02/11/05 Title: Chapter 1: The Great Valentine War

I just realized I wrote "long lovers" instead of "young lovers." Just wanted to clarify. Please update soon, or if it was a one shot, please mark as complete.

Reviewer: Obliviate Signed
Date: 02/05/05 Title: Chapter 1: The Great Valentine War

Thuroughly enjoyable. I do wish we had seen what was on each valentine. Please post the "dates" soon. Actually a date can be like punishment for long lovers.

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Reviewer: Obliviate Signed
Date: 02/26/05 Title: None

This is absolutely incredible. The characters are so well written and it seems so real. I especially like the vivid attention to detail. Hoping you update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks man. Means a lot as this is my maiden effort. Any suggestions for improvement?

Reviewer: Obliviate Signed
Date: 03/06/05 Title: None

I thought it was a very good chapter. You have a nice grasp of Dumbledore's exentricities. I really cannot wait to see how Serena teaches and if Harry gets in trouble in her class, he always gets in trouble. Anyway, I am waiting patiently for the next chapter.

The Third War by dumbledorefluertwins

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Harry's twins are starting Hogwarts this year and he will do anything he can to prevent them from going through the horrors that he had to endure.

This proves difficult as they are cast into the middle of another war, one which the Death Eaters have been planning for years...

Warnings are for later chapters although there are mentions of violence and character death from the start. All ships are canon.

**Gasp** Over two-hundred people have put my story in their favorites and I have nearly three hundred reviews!

All reviews WILL be answered.

Reviewer: Obliviate Signed
Date: 09/26/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1, The Offer

Your story is very well written. The character's personality quirks are still in tact, as far as I have read anyway. I only disagree with one thing, though it seems the rest of the story depends upon it. I got the impression from book six that Harry would not want to be an Auror if Scrimgeour was still Minister. All in all, very compelling first chapter. I will deffinently read more.

Author's Response: Hmmm, I see where you\'re coming from. You have a very good point but Harry just wants revenge on the Death Eaters at the moment (you\'ll find out why in chapter 6!) and so became an Auror to track them down.