Welcome to my inventory of stories.
OLIVER/YURIKO/PRUDENCE STORY
Moongate Beckons When The Canvas Sleeps (Oliver's spinoff story from The Boy Next Door)
If they are supposed to be together, why did it have to end? If they are supposed to be apart, why did it have to begin?
When a children's fairy tale begins to play itself out in real life with uncanny similarities, the ending would matter more than ever...
Readers who want to read the conclusion chapter, Chapter 13 We Find Shading Under The Same White Cloud, can access it here:
http://www.harrypotterfanfiction.com/viewstory.php?psid=160366
HARRY/GINNY STORIES
Lacy Lips
Her naughty lips vs. his lazy lips… her sheer lacy gown vs. his pair of sleeping shorts… who will win at the end?
MY GUARDIAN ANGEL (3-PART SERIES)
True love and everything that accompanies it, the sweetness, sourness, spiciness, and… the bitterness. How many are among the lucky chosen few in this world… to have such an experience to grace their lives, even if it may be for such a seemingly brief period of time…
My Guardian Angel (Part 1)
Remember that night… You and I… It was paradise…
The line that separates the dream world and reality disappears, leaving them lost in their reflections, unaware they have been selected as the lucky chosen few…
When I See Only You (Part 2)
While I see only you… your back is all I see. I journey by your side… our shadows forever apart…
How far will a person go in the pursuit of true love, a person who is not the lucky chosen few…
The Boy Next Door (Part 3)
The human emotion of love… the ability to love someone and the feeling of being loved by someone… is it a blessing or a punishment in disguise?
The four of them come from different backgrounds, but they all have one thing in common. They are the lucky chosen few, and despite all the sacrifices and pain, they will never regret being selected…
I really love your writing style. Brilliant story.
I really like the last part between Molly and Harry. I always wanted Molly to adopt him so he'll finally experience the motherly love that was stolen from him. Great job.
Author's Response: New reader? Sorry, just checking. That is how I felt. I love Mrs. Weasley because she reminds me of my mom. Exactly. The only difference is my mom doesn't have red hair. Poor Harry had no family except for the Weasley's so I wanted to get a little of that in. Keep reviewing!
Harry's emotions are the most difficult and complicated to capture but I think you did an amazing job at it. Two thumbs up!
I really like the way you did with the characters, very dynamic, upbeat, lively, and the way it flows. It's something I want to learn to incorporate in my writings.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot; It's hard to get the story to flow, so I apprectiate your comments!
You made Harry seem so cute there. Two thumbs up.
Author's Response: Thanks so much =) I'm glad you think so, that bit was particularly difficult to write.
Very cute and upbeat. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot.. I try my best ;]
You say you're old enough to be Harry's mother, but I thought you did an exceptional job depicting teenager mannerisms and behaviour. You make the characters so lively and energetic, something that I want to do more in my fanfictions.
Author's Response: Thank you!!!! I was so afraid that I was just too clueless to relate to today's teenager style. I am so relieved. I don't have children so I'm just trying to do my best from memory. Some things never change! Thanks again!
But I wanted to write a story about amnesia!! Oh whatever. I'm sure you'll do a better job.
What about having Harry struggling to put the neck chain on and having Ginny help him? I always have this image that Harry is clumsy with things except when it comes to defending and saving people from evil. The Superman thing is a nice touch.
Author's Response: Good idea! I'm just trying to keep them apart as long as possible. I'll think about an edit. I love those Weasley jumpers! Thanks for the review!
Blue bra and lacy panties?? Oh my goodness Harry is so descriptive and also in big trouble now... Great job.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I love to hear from everyone! Poor Harry, I'm letting Ginny torture him!
Having Harry give Ginny the lightning bolt necklace was a great call. Well done.
Author's Response: Thank you! Thank you!
I absolutely love the last part, "She looked at both of them, but her eyes spoke to Harry." I love eyes; they are indeed the window to the soul.
Author's Response: thank you so much for your continued reading and kind words, its very encouraging
I didn't find the chapter being rushed at all, unless the central theme of the story involves students having crushes on Harry. I like the part where Snape offered to help by offering himself. Great work.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. I love hearing from everyone! Thank! Thanks! Thanks!
The chapter was as sweet as treacle fudge. Well done.
Author's Response: Thank you! Keep reading and reviewing!
Once again, I really admire the way you write, the way you make these characters so youthful and energetic. Keep it up.
Author's Response: That is so funny! My friends will crack up when they hear that! I am delighted that you like my writing! Thanks for taking time to review!
I want to know how big is his quarters. Is it really as cozy as you make it seem to be? I would prefer that it be as small as possible, so the two of them can really warm up to each other.
Author's Response: Well, I described it as a sitting room, a bedroom and a small bathroom. I'd say that is pretty small. Harry's gonna get in trouble if they get too warm! Thanks for reviewing! I love reading comments!
Has anyone mentioned to you that your writing flows so beautifully and naturally? I wish I could write more like that. Well done.
Author's Response: For Merlin's sake! I don't think that anyone could blush more than I am right now!!! Such words and from people who write the way YOU do, is what keeps me writing!! Thanks so much, I'm truly honoured!!
The last part of the chapter was adorable, when you had Harry completely immersed in the heat of the moment and all he could say was, "Hmm..." Perfect!
Author's Response: Yeah, I liked that part myself. It's the kind of reaction you expect from your partner in a REALLY GOOD snogging session (at least I do)LOL Anyway, *sighs* young love....is quite... passionate!! Hormones you see!!LOL
Finally you updated! It was worth the wait. Excellent as always.
I agree with the previous reviewer; the title is super. Don't worry, the first chapters usually don't get too many reviews. Once the story progresses and there's some action then I'm sure you'll get more positive feedback.
Author's Response: Thanks, I knew that...didn't I? Well the second chapter got rejected, I'm going to try to fix it up and send it back.