Welcome to my inventory of stories.
OLIVER/YURIKO/PRUDENCE STORY
Moongate Beckons When The Canvas Sleeps (Oliver's spinoff story from The Boy Next Door)
If they are supposed to be together, why did it have to end? If they are supposed to be apart, why did it have to begin?
When a children's fairy tale begins to play itself out in real life with uncanny similarities, the ending would matter more than ever...
Readers who want to read the conclusion chapter, Chapter 13 We Find Shading Under The Same White Cloud, can access it here:
http://www.harrypotterfanfiction.com/viewstory.php?psid=160366
HARRY/GINNY STORIES
Lacy Lips
Her naughty lips vs. his lazy lips… her sheer lacy gown vs. his pair of sleeping shorts… who will win at the end?
MY GUARDIAN ANGEL (3-PART SERIES)
True love and everything that accompanies it, the sweetness, sourness, spiciness, and… the bitterness. How many are among the lucky chosen few in this world… to have such an experience to grace their lives, even if it may be for such a seemingly brief period of time…
My Guardian Angel (Part 1)
Remember that night… You and I… It was paradise…
The line that separates the dream world and reality disappears, leaving them lost in their reflections, unaware they have been selected as the lucky chosen few…
When I See Only You (Part 2)
While I see only you… your back is all I see. I journey by your side… our shadows forever apart…
How far will a person go in the pursuit of true love, a person who is not the lucky chosen few…
The Boy Next Door (Part 3)
The human emotion of love… the ability to love someone and the feeling of being loved by someone… is it a blessing or a punishment in disguise?
The four of them come from different backgrounds, but they all have one thing in common. They are the lucky chosen few, and despite all the sacrifices and pain, they will never regret being selected…
So cute and energetic. I wish I can write like that. I love the part where you had Ginny draw a picture of her and Harry in the Chamber. That scene was my favorite. Well done.
Author's Response: thank you. i submitted chapter 2, hope it gets up! Keep writing! thats the only way to get better!
Marvelous end to the chapter. It's always a dream to sail to the stars with the boy you love.
Author's Response: don't i know t! thx for rnr!
Author's Response: don't i know it! thx for rnr!
I refuse to believe that this is your first fanfiction because it's very very good. You must continue!
Author's Response: Gossipweaver I am so happy that you are my first reviewer! Thank you for your kind words...I'll keep working on the next chapters!
I think at one point I could actually hear Ginny's laughter during the spinning of the swings. Very good indeed.
Author's Response: Thanks for continuing to review gossipweaver (I always look for your review!)
I love your unique chapter titles and summaries; it shows you put in a lot of effort all the way down to the small details such as these. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks gossipweaver! I love stories where the plot is revealed in the chapter title...if you can understand the clues that is!
Gorgeous story. I love the way Hedwig was flying around, choosing the best company to be with. It's like a camera picking out the best spots to film. I am a Harry/Ginny shipper but who cares. I know Hedwig is a girl (She's a girl in my stories) but not that it is important but do you know if Pig and Errol are girls too?
Author's Response: Aw... I'm glad that my story has been able to touch the heart of a Harry/Ginny shipper... Really... it does my heart good to know that there are good and decent people that don't hate us H/Hr... Pig and Errol are both boys (to the best of my knowledge... im almost 100%positive!)
It was so dramatic when I heard Harry utter, "Mum" to Mrs. Weasley my chair was trembling. I've always wanted Harry to have a family and have a mother exactly like Mrs. Weasley. Thanks for writing this.
Author's Response: Wow... I've had that before (but not with my own story) mostly it was when i saw hp4 at midnight... i couldnt stop shaking, especially when Hermione was fussing over harry after the seccond task!
Is Harry going to glimpse at the mirror? What is he going to see?
Author's Response: That is an excellent question, but, no, he's not going to look into it. Yet. It's not actually there now, it was moved. But that is a very good point, and one I might weave into my story...thank you!
Don't worry with the quantity of reviews. I'm sure they'll come to you like an avalanche very soon. Just keep posting your story okay?
Author's Response: Ahh, thanks. I am in the process of writing Chapter 6, I hope I'll be done soon! Please keep reading!
I always hold a hope that Dumbledore is not really gone in HBP. That's why I really hope the last part of this chapter will become reality in book 7. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope JK does let Dumbledore speak to Harry in this way too - it'll put his mind at rest, I think. Thanks for the review.
After what happened, why would Draco be allowed back? He should be considered armed and dangerous. Why is it that all the bad guys seem to have free rein all the time?
Author's Response: Let's just say that those dearest to us never truly leave us...there is a reason why he's been allowed to return. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Wow. Harry as a first person point of view. Isn't that hard to do? Anyway, great start.
Author's Response: Yeah it is hard, but whenever I try to do something in 3rd person, I keep saying I and me instead of he and she! Thank you!
Very smooth story. One thing you might want to consider is to shorten the dialogue by breaking it up into two or three paragraphs. It will be easier visually and these breaks will allow you to describe the talker/listener's expressions as they are speaking/listening.
Author's Response: Thanks for the thoughts, gossipweaver! I received another comment to the same effect so I'm going to see what I can do to break things up a little more for easier reading.