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07/23/06

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Rated: •
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Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 12/08/06 Title: None

It was good, but short! YOU NEED TO UPDATE!

Life Goes On by scarlet phoenix feathers

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: The war is over and the Weasley's along with Harry and Hermione try to get on with their lives. Harry and Ron leave to fulfill their childhood dreams. Hermione, with the assistance of the new Minister of Magic, opens a new department in the Ministry, and Ginny finishes her last year at Hogwarts and then begins a career of her own.

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 07/01/07 Title: Chapter 21: Anger Unleased

You're a good writer and I love the story, but I really didn't like how you had all of the women stay behind. You made them seem incapable which is quite the contrary. Fleur was in the TriWizard Tournament and I thought it was out of character for them, especially Angelina, Fleur, and Cho.

Midnight Chills by Narcissa

Rated: Professors •
Summary: Severus Snape had just suffered the most humiliating moment of his life... or had he? The nickname Harry should have seen, worse than Snivellus. (language warning!)

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 11/28/06 Title: Chapter 1: Midnight Chills

It was definately interesting. I do think the cursing made it highly unpleasant to read though. The 'f' word is not a nice word at all, and you really shouldn't say it that much like that. Perhaps you have Tourette's? I feels forced, like you thought it would be funny to call him 'Shrivellus' and wrote the fic purely for that reason. I would suggest placing it in a different category, as I did not find it all too funny, besides the ending, which I stated my thoughts on. I like your writing style, but there was just no point to this story. Try again.
4/10

A Cinderella Story - In the Universe of Harry Potter by Powerful_Quill

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: What if, in the 1300s, Hogwarts was a kingdom? Follow the story of the young Prince of Hogwarts, a fair maiden, and one, not-so-orthodox fairy godmother. (AU)

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 02/17/07 Title: Chapter 1: Negotiations

That was cool! I loved the quote: "..."Divorce is something they only do at Durmstrang"..."! Good plot ideas!

Why Hermione Is Different Than All The Other Girls by GwendolynJames

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: If Hermione hadn't met the boys on the train that first day, things would most certainly be different. Featuring Metro!Ron, Loser!Harry, Stalker!Hermione, and Smoker!Ginny.

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 09/17/06 Title: Chapter 1: Why Hermione Is Different Than All The Other Girls

hahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!

October thirty first by padfootprongs

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: A poem in which tells the tale of the night Voldemort killed Harry's parents. It's lots better than it sounds. EXCERPT: As James drew his wand as his enemy cried "Avada Kedavra!" and then poor James died Please, Let me know you care! You reveiw my fic, and I'll reveiw yours!

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 09/16/06 Title: Chapter 1: October thirty first

That was a pretty good ryhming poem. It couldn't pass for sensory, but it was still good!

The Secret Files of Ronald Weasley by Ronsbiggestfan09

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: This is basically Ron's diary. It doesn't really get funny until part two. This takes place sometime after fourth year. This is just Ron writing down...well whatever you write in a diary! Oh there is a little bit of language and a little bit of crude humor. I hope you like it!

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 09/16/06 Title: Chapter 4: PART FOUR

OMG! That was hysterical! Write more!

Strictly Ballroom by goldenprincess

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Hermione takes a drastic decision to leave the wizarding world behind in favour of her dream of becoming a dancer. Her departure has a drastic effect on Ron's life, and when they are unexpectedly thrown together years later, there's sure to be fireworks once more. Based on the UK TV show 'Strictly Come Dancing'.

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 12/15/06 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

This is getting good!

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 12/15/06 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

YAY!

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 12/15/06 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

OMG.

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 08/15/07 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Love it! Really unique and I like how you've portrayed your characters. Particularly Ginny. Very believable. Please, please update soon!
10/10

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 12/14/06 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Hehe! I actually like it! I LOVE R/Hr! This is pretty good so far. I'll have to read the rest tomorrow! The only thing that quirks me is that Hermione isn't really the dancing type. Its still good though!
9/10

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 12/15/06 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

OMG! NOOOOOOOO!

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 12/15/06 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Whoa.

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 12/15/06 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Wow. I really love it. Keep writing.

10/10

Always by The Marauder

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: It's their last year and Lily is shocked to find that something is different about James...come to think about it...somethings different about Lily as well...will the two finally be able to find the love they are destined to share?

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 09/11/06 Title: Chapter 1: Always

Aw!

A Day in the Life by Ginger Hair

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: A Potions assignment gone wrong sends Harry and Ginny into the past while Lily and James are sent into the future. How will Ginny and Harry cope with the Marauders? Better yet, how will Lily and James cope with Ron and Hermione? Will they ever get back to their rightful eras? Read on to find out. Please read and review. From what my fans say, its funny. You decide for yourself.

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 07/23/06 Title: Chapter 6: Quidditch Through the Ages: Part 1

Actually, James is a seeker.

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 07/23/06 Title: Chapter 6: Quidditch Through the Ages: Part 1

Wouldn't it be 'that's why SLYTHERINS all sing'?

Empty Crib by Iheartrupertgrint

Rated: •
Summary: Something’s happen for a reason... Some just happen... But this, this just happened, and now, our crib will be empty; REVISED!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 09/23/06 Title: Chapter 1: Today is on my mind

That was very good. You even got just one little tear out of me at the end. Good job!

10/10

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 09/23/06 Title: Chapter 1: Today is on my mind

That was very good. You even got just one little tear out of me at the end. Good job!

10/10

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