01/04/05
www.freewebs.com/labellehelene
Well, well, what to say.. errrm. I am sixteen, I like HP though I find HP himself a little tiring.. My favouritest ever character is Remus, and I love him. In a purely literary sense, of course.
I'm a tad pedantic and I abhor the misuse of apostrophes, as is indicated below..
You are a GRAMMAR GOD!
Congratulations! If your mission in life
is not already to preserve the English tongue,
it should be. You can smell a grammatical
inaccuracy from fifty yards. Your speech is
revered by the underlings, though some may
blaspheme and call you a snob. They're just
jealous. Go out there and change the world.
How grammatically correct are you? a>
Yes, I'm probably a very sad geek but I don't care. I don't write fic a lot but I read a good deal. Favourite ships: Remus/OC, Sirius/OC, Ron/Hermione, Draco/Ginny, Remus/Sirius puppyslash, glitterfic, Harry/Draco slash
I am music-obsessed (I play cello and saxophone and I sing everything from acoustic folk to opera and many in between), and almost totally computer-retarded. I'm shockingly bad at navigating my way round the net, but Mugglenet is wonderfully simple to use. I have a fairy-fixation, Iolanthe is the banished fairy in the Gilbert and Sullivan operetta of the same name. So that's me! If you read my fic, please don't hold back on the criticism, I want to improve! One thing - please be constructive, don't just rip it all apart and not suggest a way to improve it. Thanks :D
www.iolanthe.deviantart.com
*shock!* Just finished HBP (anti-spoiler alert) Just needed to say 'wow' and 'eh?' because it was so .. ming boggling! I loved it, but PoA remains my favourite.
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The Long Wait by ancientgirl
Rated: Professors •Summary: This story has been posted on several sites dedicated to the pairing of Hermione and Severus Snape. She is 22 in this story, and there was no relationship between the two while she was a student. If this pairing bothers you, please don't read.
Date: 03/03/05 Title: Chapter 29: Epilogue
sooo cute! i wasnt sure about this pairing but you pulled it off and made snape loveable.. almost. very well written, i love the character of osiris, and the animals have some fantastic one-liners. great stuff!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I actually began like you, I was sure at first about the pairing. I've read some great stories and some pretty bad ones. I tried to make it as believable as possible and Snape as loveable as I could without losing too much of his canon character. I'm also very happy you liked Osiris. I loved writing him, and he's been one of my favorites.
Date: 01/11/05 Title: None
It's a good start, you haven't given too much of the story away, and you've introduced the character slowly, but given the reader enough to make them like Briana. I'm interested as to what happens to her and Draco later...
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Ill check out some of your srotrys too. I am getting started on my 2nd chapter.