I am completely obsessed with Harry Potter, I compare my everyday life to it all the time. I love writing, drawing, painting, and reading. Hopefully you'll all like my fics. I have great variety, action, angst, romance, you name it, I've probably written it! I've some stories on Fanfiction.net, and I'm probably going to rewrite them (make them better) and post them on here. I try very hard, so I hope you'll enjoy my stories!
I like the idea, it's very interesting and unique. My only thing is, maybe you should take it a little slower. Let the girl tell more about herself, like the person before me said. Besides that, it's good. Just a bit more detail is all you need. Keep going, I'd like to see what happens.
Author's Response: ditto to what I said to the girl before you. And thank for the review! They make me happy :-)
O.O Nifty! I like this, although I still wish that you would put more detail. Anyway, it is good. Continue, I'd like to read more.
Author's Response: thank you, I'll do my best! :-)