I grew up near Chicago and am currently living in Sioux City IA.
I'm a college student and into acting, TV/Video production, imrpov and stand-up. I hope to be famous enough to never have to hold down a 9-5 job. We'll see how that works.
This is probably my favorite of all your fanfics. It's so clever, and funny and not OOC. Any chance of more Krinky stories?
Hey! Another good chapter. I really like the dialogue. It feels natural. I just had a problem with one thing though.
“You know, I think I like you, Potter,” she said, smiling in a teasing way.
“Potter?” she giggled.
“What, you don’t like that?” Harry scowled. “Alright, HARRY.”
I'm confused as to who says the "Potter?" line. Is that Harry speaking and Marie giggling?
Author's Response: Harry says Potter, because the only people who call him that are his enemies. Sorry for the confusion. I may change it a little so its not so weird.
Hey, you've got an excellent start here. I'm looking forward to seeing how it all unfolds. I like the way you describe Petunia doting over Dudley. Very in character for her.