01/06/05
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Pyromaniac! only kidding...
Bday, 15th april, same as em ( who i no)
well, as this is where i rite bout my life so far, i guess id better start:
a monkey aged 118 years was bisecting an ostracised peanut while eating a very large piece of grass which had the essence of a pink elephants backside. then the elephant sed 2 the monkey, why do u eat peanuts and eat grass and walk in the centre of london? and the monkey replied, 'well, to know that i must tell u my life story' and so he told the elphant, and here it is:
there were 72 placated monkeys on a tree, having fun, wen a hunter came around the corner and shot one ded. it fell to the ground wiv a thump. then another monkey fell out of the tree, why i hear u ask? bcos it was attached 2 the first monkey. then, i, the third monkey in this story, fell out of the tree, bcos i was unfortunate enuff to think it was a game.......;(.......ive never been the same since. people tell me im not really a monkey, but how can i believe them when they all look the same, like shrivelled up mongooses. (sorry 2 n e 1 who is either a mongoose, monkey or elephant, not harm ment!)
Which HP Kid Are You?
Quick and agile, and probably a little on the small
side, you're a Seeker! You're the one person
who usually wins or loses the game for your
team by catching the snitch, but you don't
mind...you'll get that snitch if it kills you.
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You're Harry Potter! You're willing to do anything
to help your friends, and they'll do anything
for you. You have been known to break a few
rules, but you do it for the greater good.
Brave and loyal, you're well-liked (both on and
off the Quidditch field!)Sometimes, you're
uncomfortable with your popularity, but you try
to be friendly regardless. Now, get on your
broom and get to practice- you've got to help
Gryffindor win the cup this year!
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Date: 02/07/05 Title: None
very good, i like it a lot, very enjoyable. two tips: 1)make your chapters about 2000 words long instead of
Date: 02/07/05 Title: None
wot the hell, i typed loads but only a little came up in my review! ok, ill try again: 1)try to write about 2000 words in your chapters instead of
Date: 02/07/05 Title: None
??????????? it happened again!
wot the hell, i typed loads but only a little came up in my review!
ok, ill try again:
1)try to write about 2000 words in your chapters instead of less than 1500 as it allows the reader to become more engrossed and the plot to develop in a much more substantial way.
2) is hermione really the kind of person who would use such old fashioned words as dear? she may be a bit odd, but not in that sense.
apart from that, it was an extremely enjoyable read. i loved the detail and i have nothing wrong with harrys character or the fact he has a car. he has always striked me as the kind of teenager who is slightly childish in that he likes 'new toys (ie firebolt).'
well done! update soon, james.
-i found out it was because i was using a 'less than' sign and mnff obviously did not recognise it!-
Author's Response: Thanks. I've realized that I needed to make the chapters longer so I've done that.(on the second chapter though) and hermione no longer speaks like a 87 yr old grandma(also in second chapter which by the way I think yall will love :) ) Thanks for reviewing and stay tuned i guess. ;)
Date: 04/19/05 Title: None
I think it was a pink flamingo wearing dobby's tea cosey! good chapter, well done
A Letter for My Love by Beth Brown
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Harry is getting married, and it's to the woman he loves. Isn't it? Then why does he still look at Hermione and never want to turn away? Why does her presence leave him breathless and a mere touch send shivers of desire through him, leaving him wanting more? Surely this is just cold feet. Yet a single letter changes everything and Harry comes to discover that what his heart truly desires has been standing before his eyes all this time.
Date: 02/22/05 Title: Chapter 3: Simply Divine
gr8 story, evil gwen. i dnt even think the names any good, its a crap name (soz 2 n e 1 hoos called gwen!) gr8 writin!...:-)
Date: 05/08/05 Title: Chapter 1: Go to Her
That was beautiful, it really was. Excellent writing, i dont see how you do it, amazing!
Author's Response: Actually, the talent comes naturally. Thanks for the review. This response is long overdue, I know. But hey, on the birght side I updated! go look! go look!
Year Seven: Harry Potter & The Blood Debt by GringottsVault711
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Harry, heavy with the summer's grief and his future's burden, begins his final year at Hogwarts. He will hide something from his two best friends, but he isn't the only one keeping secrets; there's a mysterious organization on the rise, and Hogwarts is under fire from the public. The truth about the past will be revealed, while secrets of the present are hidden, and Harry must struggle to find his own sense of morality, all while knowing that his destiny is to kill. SEQUEL to Harry's Sixth Year. This story is PRE-HBP
Date: 04/24/05 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Ron’s Secret
All of us faithful reviewers can wait ages for a great story like this, cant we guys!
Author's Response: I've submitted Chapter 14. It's in queue :)
Date: 04/26/05 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: The Perfect Gift
It was perfect, thanks for updating for us, we really appreciate it!
Date: 03/08/05 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Harry’s Promise
ver very gd, an thnx tommy 4 that info, go on katie, go 4 it!
Date: 03/15/05 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Siobhan, Spiders, and Summoning
no words 2 describe how good this is, spider bit was xtremely funny, cudnt get enuff of it...interestin girl, i suppose there is something big planned 4 her eh? and the wandless magic also added a gr8 new section which rewviewers luv 2 c, all wandless magic fics are highly appreiated. well, best of luck. james
Author's Response: oh, thanks so much! I had no idea wandless magic fics were so popular! Thanks again!
Date: 07/26/05 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Siobhan's Confession
Wow, that was great, surprising yes, but great nevertheless!
Date: 06/25/05 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Searching for Answers
Wow, that was great, a lovely rcovery from your break! It really was a pleasure to read, as most people would agree, and hey, im a hermy fan, dont like the idea of kati/harry and really thought Ginny was one of those characters ho should linger on in JK's world, but this is your story, your fanfiction, and because of the writing style, the character emotion, your way of portraying Their different views, and of course, your reasoning behind everything you write makes this an incredible story, the best short story i have ever read! :) I really hope you continue to write so well, as people love this the way it is, and i hope you can get a good bit of writing in before book 6 comes out next month. Just one point about your actual content in this chapter. When Harry and Hermione both wonder what can possibly defeat Voldemort, is Ron mumbling 'Floo Powder' to the fat lady going to be of any importance? Just wondering, probably just me thinking too hard! I shouldnt really think at all, my doctor said it was bad for my helth...Well, thats me done, thanks again. Jenry......:)
Author's Response: You can never think too hard! I'll own up to the fact that 'Floo Powder' was nothing more than a random password.
It's only fair since there are plenty of rumours I haven't been willing to come clean on, no matter how true or untrue they are ;)
Date: 03/21/05 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Lessons with Alex
what can i say to such an incredible chapter! it was definately worth the wait, as it may have even surpassed my favourite chapter so far (including those from your prequel). it was a very good time for you to show just how close Hermione and Harry are, as they both really need each other at the moment what with everything going on. please let there be another way to destroy voldemort as i dont think JK is going to make Harry use the killing curse. in the official prophecy of Harrys birth it says he has the power to destroy, it does not mention killing. yes, as you said i am growing to like siobhan, and as Alex is playing a crucial part you have exposed a lot more of her character and i am glad to say that i like what i have seen of her so far! hope your doing good, best of luck with future chapters, james
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review. And as I told tommy, Harry's method for vanquishing the Dark Lord is clear cut in my mind ;)
Date: 01/18/06 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: A New Resolve
Jenna, really sorry i havnt reviwed for so long, its damn out of order of me :(. I want you to know though, that whenever i have a bit of free time on the computer, i go straight to this story, or the prequel, and read what ive read before over and over, because its just great quality stuff. Recently, ive had my GCSE exams, which are important ones in England, so i havnt had any leisure time at all. I loved this chapter, one of the best youve even written, and thats an incredible achievement, considering there was no 'action' in it. The emotion coming out was brilliant, and the realistic character development you have achieved over the two stories is incredible, look at what Harry is like as a person in this chapter, and look what he was like at the start of the prequel. Anyway, thanks for the read, and ill keep checking daily again now exams are over for updates, cant wait till the next one :) James
Date: 03/06/05 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Hogwarts Letters
impossibly good!
Date: 04/05/05 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: The Sphinx Militia
loved it as always, never better! well dun Tom! can i share the cookie? *puppy eyes*
Date: 04/06/05 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Ambition Decisions
Woot, soz, but im goin 2 a midnite openin of HBP in waterstones in London! Also, im on work experience that week in...Leavesden Studios!(HArry Potter Studios)
Date: 07/03/05 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Snape's Duty
That really was great, i loved both chapters 17+18, they were superb! How you come up with this, I will never know, but your best trait is undeniably your ability to mimic JK's style of writing so closely, that you would think you are reading an official HP book. Thank you once again for such a great read, and i hope you can update again soon. Oh, and thank you for clearing up my 'floo powder' query from chapter 16! Jenry:)
Date: 03/16/05 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Siobhan, Spiders, and Summoning
oh, in ur answer 2 another persons review -sorry 4 4getin ur name- u sed that we shud grow 2 like siobhan! a clue/hint there? hope ur well, james