08/21/06
Hey all! I'm a hyperactive girl named Laila who loves music, reading, and playing soccer.
Age: Finally 13. Took long enough.
Favorite ship: Well, I'm an avid Lily/Marauder era character (besides Peter) shipper. I also enjoy D/Hr, Severus/Lily, Neville/Luna, and many other unconventional ships.
Fav HP character: I really like Regulus, Sirius, Remus, Draco, Tonks, and Hermione. There isn't much on Regulus, but I like him anyways.
If you review one of my poems, it will really make my day. So make my day. Now.
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Gryffie Pride!!!!! *waves red and gold scarf*
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Fuzzy Bunnies by LoneWolfLoverGirl
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: What to do about your best friend's strange phobias? Remus, Sirius and Peter's method was perhaps not the best, but it had some rather pleasant side-effects...
Date: 10/25/06 Title: Chapter 1:
YAY FOR BUNNIES!!!!! i LUV bunnies! james' phobia reminds me of my brothers... he does NOT like my rabbit... at all. i refuse to believe we r rel8d. oh yah about the story... it seemed a bit rushed at the end and sorta lost its touch. but other than that... awesome fic! i must give u a 9/10...
Beeping Boxes by Wand_Waver2006
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Ron, kicked out of the Leaky Cauldron for the day, goes in search of a thing Neville calls a "micawave". Is looking at Muggle-made objects really as interesting as his dad makes it out to be?
The One-Shot challenge--Muggle Artifacts by Wand_Waver2006 of Ravenclaw House.
Date: 10/25/06 Title: Chapter 1: Beeping Boxes
lol the excitement pf beeping boxes and micawaves... no wonder everyone finds muggles so boring
Author's Response: haha, right. ^^
Taken by Amelia Bedelia
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Lily felt her heart jump into her throat. In fact, all she heard was her heart beating steadily throughout her body. ...Any minute, James Potter is going to walk through that door and sit down. At my table. By me...
Date: 10/25/06 Title: Chapter 1: Taken
oo sweet but u made sirius seem so... cold. wat year is this in anyways?
Author's Response: Yeah, this story was written sometime ago before the sixth book came out, I believe... Maybe even the fifth book... I\'m sorry for the confusion! As for Sirius, personally, I love him, but I\'ve always had that part of me that has wondered about whether he\'s really this lovable character that the fans usually portray him as... :)
This was just my little experiment. :)
Yours truly,
Amelia Bedelia
Summer Letters by Slian Martreb
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary: In which Sirius is bored, Severus is snarky and various bodily appendages are alluded to.
Date: 11/01/06 Title: Chapter 1: Summer Letters
lol.ololol hilariously AWESOME!!!
Author's Response: Thank you, from both of us!
Something Lost by Violet Phoenix
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary: It’s strange how things turn out sometimes, I thought as I watched Lily and James together the evening after their wedding. It could have just as easily been me in his place.
James Potter wasn't the only one who loved Lily Evans.
Date: 11/26/06 Title: Chapter 1: Something Lost
YES!!!!! u r da bestest! im constantly looking for lily/other character fics, but they're always with james. i luv how you portrayed her. everyone makes her like- omg im rambling sorry. just one problem: the lack of indenting REALLY annoyed me. it made finding were i left off wen i had to scroll down unbearable. oh yah and i have to agree with... er cant remember who but i have to agree that this was NOT boring. yeah 1000000/10!!!1
Author's Response: I fixed that problem. Very strange that it happened since I did leave spaces between each paragraph when I submitted. *grumbles at fact that each fanfic site has different coding* Anyway, thanks very much for reviewing. I\'m glad you enjoyed the story. =)
Castle On A Cloud by ColorOfAngels
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: One shot song fic to Castle on a Cloud from Les Miz... Its a cold Christmas Eve for a six year old Harry Potter...
Date: 11/23/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
oh this is really good! more songfics, more songfics!! the idea is really oringial as well. gr8 job!
The Curtain Call by Amelia Bedelia
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: James and Lily spend their summers together producing plays, though neither are happy about the presence of the other. With James, as the set designer, and Lily, as the actress, tensions run high.
Date: 06/17/07 Title: Chapter 5: Somewhere
Yay! *punches air* You updated! And with a nice long chapter, too!
I was so glad to see Sirius in here, nice to see a familiar face. However, I didn't feel he was very... realistic. Wouldn't he be a bit shocked to see Lily Evans polite? Did James tell him about the improvement? If not, I'm very surprised at the sudden friendship and lack of coldness towards the girl who gave them hate for so long.
Besides that, this was a perfect addition to the story! The museum was lovely, and I just adored James's friendliness and kindness. Excellent work, and can't wait for the net chapter!
-Laila
Author's Response: Yep - the updates are getting quicker and they\'re just as long as the others! :D And, once again, I\'m really glad you pointed that Sirius bit out for me!
Thanks for the review - and the critque!
Yours truly,
Amelia Bedelia
Date: 12/03/06 Title: Chapter 1: Bennett Theater
lol aww this chappie wasnt slow! it ended nicely, and how it started with lily liking james (not fancying, just liking really) and james thinking she was annoying. i cant wait to read more!
Author's Response: Yeah, Lily started out giving James a chance - he\'s the one that blew it! :D
Thanks for the review!
Yours truly,
Amelia Bedelia
Questioning the Freak and the Whale by Phenioxsong22
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Lily has planned this meeting from the day she and James began dating. First, there would be the greetings between James and her parents. Then, dinner would come. This would be closely followed by a time to just chat and have her parents and boyfriend become acquainted with each other. Everything would be perfect. But this all changes after her sister’s insufferable boyfriend shows up, “Black” magic goes haywire, and her parents don’t return from ‘their honeymoon all over again’ until the next day. Couples battle it out, and it seems no one will make it out in one piece after three arm wrestling matches, a bounding black dog, and an angry exchange. This meeting is certainly not going as planned...
Chapter 7 Updated!!
Date: 12/10/06 Title: Chapter 1: An Angry Exchange and Nervous Pacing
lol hilarious! this is siriusly got a gr8 plot... curseyou how could i not think of this b4 u!
"I don’t care about your precious whale" was my fav line. that was just really witty. excellent, must add to my favs.
update!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!! Reviews like this keep me going! I LOVE the favorite list! Chapter two is almost done.
Christmas Kisses by Kerichi
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary:
Early Christmas morning, not a Malfoy or Weasley was stirring...except Draco and Ginny, who met for Christmas breakfast and ended up making a meal of Christmas kisses.
*A Tale of Two Matchmakers holiday outtake*
Date: 02/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: Christmas Kisses
yes, this has put me in my mood. here is the gift of Review, bestowed upon thou who loves series of unfortunate events and the princess bride as much as i do!
Author's Response: Thank you for giving me a lovely review to open! A shiny one too, from someone with excellent taste. ^_~
Hair of a Dog by Starbuckx
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: When Sirius and James hex Remus with a mustache, much fun ensues, and there's revenge to be had... of course. Therapy for those who just HATE the look of MovieRemus!
Date: 01/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Hair of a Dog
bwahahaha! hooray for remus! and yes, i do hate the movie remus look, but the acting wasnt bad. *quote* Oh, they’d been outwitted, outplayed, and outmaneuvered. And, by the quiet one, of all people.
Let the games begin. *end quote*
i loved the "quiet one" part. thanks for showing the marauder side of remus. i was sure by the looks of some fan fictions that the bad side was dead.
Author's Response: No, the acting wasn\'t bad, it was the horrible mustache and wardrobe.
And, I\'m very glad you liked it. I wanted to show that youngRemus was just about as mischievous as Sirius and James, just a little less conspicuous. :D
Grief. by WolfySiriusBlack
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary: When Remus Lupin was a child, tragedy transformed his life at an early age. What you haven’t heard, however, is how that one tragedy quickly multiplied, making things much more painful for Remus’ whole family.
Date: 02/04/07 Title: Chapter 2: Disaster.
woah. POOR REMUS!!! *sob!*. and yes, that was quite disturbing, but in a good way. it was very... descriptive and helpful to really understand what a werewolf feels. overall, awesome!
Author's Response: Thanks! I\'ll admit that somehow I even made myself sad reading that after I went through it again! lol. I\'v always thought someone should try to really accentuate what Remus\' transformations would be like from a personal point of view, and then one of my mates had the idea that I could do it myself! lol. So I gave it a go. I\'m glad you think I achieved that. lol! :)
Wolfy.
Lily by Eowyn89
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Read the note that launched a thousand ships.....or maybe just the romance between Lily and James...
Date: 02/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
You see others for who they really are,
Which is why I gaze at you from afar,
Too scared to approach when your door is ajar,
My love for you is quite bizarre.
I loved this verse, it was great rhyming technique!
For seven years I’ve been a gormless git,
No wonder you were inclined to throw a fit,
When I acted on impulse rather than wit,
Ne’er thinking of others one little bit.
I also really liked this one, my favorite verse. or is it stanza? oh forget it, i liked those four lines! Finally, james understands!
Author's Response: Thank you for your review! Yes, the rhyming scheme was a clever little thing that I totally did by accident...usually I\'m a rhyme with this line, rhyme with that line person....but I thought it would be neat to rhyme four lines together! Yes, they are known as stanzas I believe...and trust me, it was difficult to rhyme certain stanzas....thanks again!
Flowers Aren't Enough by SeaIsleWitch
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Romantic upheaval in Slytherin House on Valentine's Day. A missing scene from OotP.
Date: 03/17/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Ahh, fluff invasion! Sweet Pansy/Draconess. But it was a bit OOC on Draco's part. Just a bit. But other than that... Great!
Black Love by tc015
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: For the February One-Shot Challenge by tc015 of Gryffindor.
Ted Tonks thought that all was going well with his girlfriend, until a very eventful summer.
Date: 03/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Aww, and now we know it all turns out fine, they have Tonks and everything is fine... Until the Second War, of course... The world does seem brighter!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 02/20/07 Title: Chapter 1: the match
SHMEEGLE OMIGOD ITS FINALLY UP!!! IM LIKE SOOO PSYCHED!!!
OK, sorry. *bows to your greatness*. Great job! *runs off to tell all forum friends*.
Author's Response: Thanks very much IVI without YOU this wouldnt be up you know!!!!!!!! i know its finally up (cheers echo the small room)
You rock my socks!!!!!
Though i may not be wearing any. L0L
Author's Response: Thanks very much IVI without YOU this wouldnt be up you know!!!!!!!! i know its finally up (cheers echo the small room)
You rock my socks!!!!!
Though i may not be wearing any. L0L
Author's Response: sorry something happened.
Date: 02/20/07 Title: Chapter 1: the match
All right,this is Miss Beta Woman at the moment. *pushes glasses to edge of nose, looks pompous*
Now, if you want this to look even better than it does now, I would suggest newer adjectives. One's less common than 'black' and 'happy'. You also spelled reflects wrong at the end.
Now some praise... This is really excellent! This is a spectucular poem, and an excellent time to choose. Quidditch can be filled with a whirlwind of emotions, and is always a wonderful topic for poems.
*smiles brightly and gathers clipboard*
Author's Response: thank you, thank you, thank you very much!! I will use your concrits for my next poems. thanks for everything Miss Beta Woman. L0L
Date: 02/28/07 Title: None
Hey! This is an awesome start, excellent for a first story. Finally, a Sirius/Lily shipper! I've barely read any of those, but I love them when they come out.
But yes, I have some critisism. Its concrit, mind you. Concrete concrit!!! Please excuse that un-punny punnish sort of joke.
Now, i noticed you were telling more than you were showing. More detail would be good, and would flesh out this story a little more. Bright fresh adjectives can really help the fic, too ('Big school robes'? C'mon, I know you an do better than that!).
I loved your dialogue between James and Lily. Although it seemed more like something he would say when he was younger, it was really quite funny *sounds utterly formal*.
Ok, I'll stop being so critical. This was really excellent, and I'm eagerly waiting for more!
*Laila*
Author's Response: hey there Laila!
you are my very first review for this story! its nice to see that someone else loves Sirius/Lily shippers too!
this was basically a filler chapter, more than anything.
i loved the lily/james convo. it just seemed too funny to ignore! haha.
Trees But Not Forests by Pussycat123
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: One hot summers day, all is unusually peaceful for the Marauders, as they laze about in the Grounds. Of course, they can’t possibly stand for that sort of thing, so James decides to begin a word game with his friends that ends up with Lily being kissed, Sirius running for his life, and Dumbledore remembering his youthful days ... it could only happen to the Marauders!
Now available as AudioFiction Episode #100!
Date: 02/28/07 Title: Chapter 1: Trees But Not Forests
LOL!!!!
Very funny, but not to the extent of stupidity (thankfully). I must use this wordplay game on my parents. Then i shall prove fanfiction is good for the brain!! Muwahahahahaha!!!!
Ahem, moment over. I must say, a witty masterpiece so artfully crafted by the wonderful pussycat123!!!
Author's Response: *Is ecstatic* I can\'t believe how popular my bizarre imagination is turning out to be! Thanks very much for the review, and have fun with your parents. *Beams*
At Fault by Vindictus Viridian
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary: Harry and Ginny run into a critical problem one evening as she works at her newest project: fair representation for Azkaban prisoners.
A Post-Hogwarts spinoff to A Different Sort Of Peace.
Date: 02/26/07 Title: Chapter 1: -------
This is a great Ginny/Harry fic! It seemed a bit melodramtic, however. they didn't seem too angry, or like they were arguing for that long. But other than that, it sounds excellent! Great job!
Author's Response: Or under-dramatic, perhaps? I just had this in mind as a short sharp shock, rather than a drawn-out argument; Harry finally trod on something important to Ginny and just couldn\'t understand what she was thinking. It was tricky to write; Harry, for some reason, gives me difficulties. Still, I had to do it or he was going to nag me half to death. Thanks for reviewing!