I am 23 years old and I still love Harry Potter and I cherish the fact that so many brilliant writers continue to bless me with their fanfiction by submitting their ideas each and every day.
CHAPTER 14 IS UP! CHAPTER 15 IS IN QUEUE!
*cries overdramatically about not reading and reviewing this fic earlier* I have had exams finished them yesterday!!! WOOO Anyway Like always I read everyone elses reviews and got a little upset cause now I know some things that will happen in the next few chapters..but meh Ill get over it im about to read them anyway..ANWAY ok i liked this line...
The room simply screamed 'Chudley Cannons fan lives here'.....
hehe I thought it was cool. What else o yea HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!! ..im pretty sure i got that right...ok this review is gettin long and its pointless so ill move on to the next chapter and leave another one WOOO!!! This sequel is gooooood. *10*
Author's Response: THANK YOU FOR WISHING ME A HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!! I see you must have read my new and improved profile ;) I got a copy of Fantastic Beasts and Quidditch Throughout the Ages from my mom. AWESOME!!! I don't care when you review, it's just nice that you do!!!! Thanks so much!!!!
Im catching up WHEEE.. Okay my favourite lines were in fact different to your other faithful reviewers and they were.... ' Ron said, getting up from the floor and rubbing his posterior.' just because I thought posterior was the bestest word ever used to describe Rons (sexy) butt that I have ever seen... and..."Sentiment turns my stomach."...because its so snape...so there you go....and i know you have already named the crup (i read reviews im so sad) BUT I would have called him Louie....because that is the cutest pet name ever. What else OOOO I think Ginny got Harry a pensieve.. I guess i will find out in chapter three as im about to go and read it but i wanted to guess beforehand... Anyway moving onwards this fic rocks hehehe *10*
Author's Response: Teeheehee! You said Ron had a sexy butt :) I might say something like that too, but seeing as how I'm 29 now, that might seem a little oogy. He's still my fave out of the trio! Yeah, I just figured that Snape wouldn't really be into the touchy feely stuff :) I used to have a fish named Louie!! Guess you'll just have to see what Ginny bought for Harry. You'll find out in chapter 4!
Im catching up WHEEE.. Okay my favourite lines were in fact different to your other faithful reviewers and they were.... ' Ron said, getting up from the floor and rubbing his posterior.' just because I thought posterior was the bestest word ever used to describe Rons (sexy) butt that I have ever seen... and..."Sentiment turns my stomach."...because its so snape...so there you go....and i know you have already named the crup (i read reviews im so sad) BUT I would have called him Louie....because that is the cutest pet name ever. What else OOOO I think Ginny got Harry a pensieve.. I guess i will find out in chapter three as im about to go and read it but i wanted to guess beforehand... Anyway moving onwards this fic rocks hehehe *10*
Author's Response: Same as everything I said on the last review! Teeheehee! BTW, you are a very sneaky little reviewer! How come you didn't tell me you finally posted a fic!
OKAY lots for me to say..Im going to start by saying when the foursome go back to school will we see milius? I miss him so!! ....next okay Zeppie is gorgeous his character makes me smile and the part with him and crookshanks snoozing was soooo cute :)...The Mrs Weasley and Narcissa thing...very well thought out you always come up with good plots...*envies you so much for that*...Draco...I felt sorry for him..but im mushy that way and the whole 'can you read me a story' part was just cute ..until well the re-enactment (very traumatising)... okay and to the last things i have to comment on the idea of Ginny's ring is wonderful its so gorgeous and Harry saying 'Love you, My Ginny' was like the cutest thing ever..i love mushy bits bring on the fluff seriously.....last but not least Hermione wearing cute pink sweat pants...and the t-shirt 'Co-ed Naked Dentistry~Drilling and Filling is Our Pleasure' Hehehehehe...very clever so now im all caught up ...but im sad because I want another chapter to read :( hrmph... but its ok im sure 'yessir thats my baby' will be updated so I can obsess over that too. ...I know I said last thing..but I thought of saying this too... I think we can tell Harry got Ginny a Firebolt....hes going to get in so much trouble but he did say she wouldt 'see' it hehe....o and I still think Ginny got Harry a pensieve. What did Harry get Hermione...did you say coz if you did I forgot... :S *10*
Author's Response: Wow! You wrote a review that's a novel!!! I'm glad you like Zeppie, a couple of reviewers have been suspicious of him, but I assure you he has no cruel intentions (good movie; teehee). *blushing* glad you like my plot line! I tried to put a little more fluff in this chapter since the first two didn't have any really. And YES!!! You mentioned Hermione's t-shirt! It's my fave part of this chapter, and I giggled the whole time I wrote that little exchange between her and Ron. Naughty Ron!!!! ;) I promise to post chapter 4 of this over the weekend, chapter 3 of Baby is actually already in queue so watch for it. Harry got Hermione a special cat brush for Crookshanks that magically repels fleas. He got it right before he bought Ginny's crup.
The Unity shopping trip was such a fabulous idea! The gifts were really creative too :) I LOVED Grizzle and Howler. H.U.R.L had me in stitches and I just know Hermione will love her bracelet...when she gets it..if she gets it :( It was very cute that Luna and Hermione went to the tea shop together....it's too bad Lucius had to ruin everything, but it does put some action/suspense into the story....which I love just as much as the fluffiness. Oh and you mentioned the Blue-Crested Willawomps! ...I got all excited when I read about Luna's purchases. I wonder what Ginny got Harry? It's too bad about Charlie and Morgan...but I am sure things will pick up :) Here's looking forward to the next chapter... :D
Author's Response: Thanks Winky123. Things have been going along a bit too smoothly so I had to make something bad happen. But, I\'m also starting to head towards the climax of the story!!
Oh how I love a good fluffy chapter to pet and cuddle and share around. Well I already knew the ring would cause havoc because you hinted to me in my last review lol. Poor Ron I wonder if he has bruises from being thrown out of bed... and the bells...what a marvellous idea HA Molly is a clever witch. The Draco/Luna stuff was cute and hilarious! I think I would be too tall for a 'Draco's Chin Rest' shirt though.. hehe. Oh and the 'head scarf'.. Luna has a few weird admirers lol.... I do hope Morgan can return to normal! I loved the 'just ducky' line. Of course the all famous purple streaks made a cameo appearance too...and cute lil padfoot. Excellent! I just wish the mods could update HNG just as quick..hrmph. *10*
Author's Response: Well, Molly won't be feeling so very clever pretty soon. Glad you liked the Draco and Luna part. I figure a girl like Luna HAS to have odd admirers. And of course I have to mention the purple streaks. Wouldn't want anyone to forget them! I wish the update on HNG would be as quick too. It's been in queue for over a week, and I have the next chapter all ready to submit!
I want a medal...I never win anything!!! Pick me Pick me!!!!! you didnt answer me about milius.. but then my last review was loooong. Lets see am killing time till your next update..I KNOW! Ill go check on your other fic.. Im a review hog...o well. As for my fic Id prefer for people to stumble upon it...because if people really arnt interested then i dont want them to feel obligated to read. Lets see ...O yer thanx for reminding about the brush for crookshanks...good idea tooo okay im goin to see if your other fics posted yipee!!
Author's Response: *pins medal on winky123* There ya go! You get the bronze medal for leaving the 52 review! YAY! I didn't mean to forget to answer your question about Milius. Of course, he has to at least make a cameo appearance ;) The status of my other fic is, right now, frustrating. I have chapter 4 of Baby all ready to submit, but chapter 3 is STILL in queue!!!! I'm spoiled by this story, Chelsea always gets my chapters up SO fast. The other story takes about a week to get a chapter up. GRRRRRR. HOPEFULLY it will be up anytime. I don't care if you're a review hog, leave all the reviews you want :) I'll get chapter 4 for this one submitted probably tomorrow night. It's called: Happy Birthday, Harry. At this rate, even if I submit it tomorrow night, it may be up before chapter 3 of Baby. I know, I'm obsessing. Sorry.
How awesome was this fic? *slaps forehead for not reading your fics sooner* Harry was great sobbing all the time...Hermione was great..8 kids hehehe...Ron was great getting all jelaous and lashing michael corner...Luna was cool ..very cool..lol random comments are always funny from her.. Awesome idea!! All up definate *10*! ..*wanders off whistling weasley is our king*
Author's Response: lol...i'm glad you made your way over here to read it...and glad that you enjoyed it after you got here. thanks for the review =)
Hehehehe very clever I must say. I mostly enjoyed the 'which isn't a word, but it definately should be' moments and Harry having to endure a night of insomnia due to pondering on why thirtieth had two 'i's...how awful... :) I will have to read the next chapter...so off I go :)
‘We veri muhc licked yer story!!!!'...but of course not literally..anyway.. Your play on words and complete and utter randomness...is hysterical..and I as your first reviewer for this chapter..(which is actually posted in this chapter)..do remember what the second P stands for...Half Blood Prince Possibilities.. But ya' know I could be wrong...anyway on to my favourite lines...'Invited, yes; but never uninvited.'.... 'When they did so, they opened the front doors. Unbelievable, isn’t it?'..and last but not least...'including that stubbed toe he had gotten last week while pondering whether the Dark Lord preferred boxers or briefs'....and that is my completely pointless review....well except that now you know Im a twat..and I love your fic! *10*
This fic was absolutely hilarious!!!!!!!!! McGonagal and Snape rowing about their sexuality..who would've thought. I always suspected a Dumbledore/Mcgonagal relationship though... Not to mention all the teachers habits..very amusing....Snape's 'Playwitch', and Sprout an alcoholic hehehe. Who re-arranges their underwear draw?? :S very weird!... I of course saved the best till last..R/Hr..Dr/Hr... H/G..Dr/L Fantastic! My favourite line in the whole fic was definately 'Want to ride the Malfoy Express?' HAHAHAHA gosh..and the whole chocolate bar thing had me going. I was half expecting Draco to confess his love to Harry! Anyway with the help of your talent at writing and humour Fred and George have done it again. :) Smashing *10* (p.s I think im the first to review WHOOP, unless someone did while I was typing this out)
Author's Response: Thanks winky!! My first regular reviewer to read my new fanfic! Glad you liked it, I liked it better than Barbie Girl! Again, I willingly take your compliments that I did justice to Fred and George.
Very expressive I could almost feel how she felt.. poor Tonks :(
I like that I got to see both sides of their pain..her pain because he wont accept her and his pain because she wont let go. You really showed that Remus does love her but he loves her so much he wants to protect her from himself. Very nice work. :)
Author's Response: Hey thanks! That's just what I wanted it to be like. I'm happy! Yay thank you
That was hilarious! Gosh arm wrestles and thumb wars...very amusing :) I loved the way you mixed Remus' serius issues in with his ability to throw in funny sarcasm. Brilliant..well I had better move on to the next chapter :) *10*
I loved it... The development between characters is set up in a really great way and the fact that they are 'forced' into sharing a night together HA is brilliant. I really like what you have done with the two characters and I cannot wait to see what happens next :)
Fantastic! That was one of the best romance fics I have read on this site. The ending was perfect :) I had to laugh at Remus.. going to make up the sofa hah! Your description was beautiful, I could see the entire scene playing through my mind as I read. The two of them remained totally in character and when Tonks fell off the couch I had to smile..it was just so..well..Tonks :) *10*
A nice take on the guarding of Harry in the eyes of Tonks and Remus. Their reaction to Harrys situation 'the lack of pictures' etc was a nice addition to the scene. I loved that you made it Remus' fault that Tonks made such a loud noise and the line ...“No ultra-secret vital mission is complete until I fall flat on my – ”.. was hilarious to follow up with :) fantabulous chapter ...nice to see an update :D *10*
Author's Response: Thank you! I do like that little scene with the plate.
This is great! Another story to add to my favourites! I don't think I have ever read a Remus/Tonks before. Tonks is totally in character! I love that the whole first meeting is awkward it just seems better that way. My favourite part had to be Remus going over in his head about Tonks not being afraid of him, I couldn't help but agree! Excellent start..keep it up. *10*
Author's Response: Hee hee. If this is your first, don't let it be your last! Remus/Tonks are my favorites, too. I think I've got a couple listed on my own Favorites, you can check that (though the list is varied).
Well I don't think I have ever read such an informative chapter on werewolves. I love detailing chapters where you get to know the characters and a game of chess was the perfect way to launch into such a chapter. I loved all the description you added behind their dialogue too. Commenting on Remus' pain and disgust and Tonks' reaction to it all. Also the hair was a brilliant way to lighten the mood and a very clever idea too :) Congrats on another wonderful chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks. I really had to work at making that dialogue right. I think it's pretty good now, though the way I edit, I'll come back later and rewrite it again!
I think you did a great job with this chapter. Despite the odd surroundings of a night club..It is still believeable ..I mean why wouldn't they have a night out? Hermione was still IC you described her as hesitant and logical. Harry and Ron Breakdancing was really quite funny I could just picture poor Ron trying to do it as well as Harry. As for the scene with Hermione's 'mystery' partner I think you had excellent description of not only what was going on but also of Hermione's feelings towards this man. I also believe you left just enough clues for us to determine who this mystery man is, as I think I know who it is :) and I for one can't wait to see whats coming in the next chapter.