I am 23 years old and I still love Harry Potter and I cherish the fact that so many brilliant writers continue to bless me with their fanfiction by submitting their ideas each and every day.
That was awesome :) I am sooo glad Sirius is alive!! Now they can re-build their lives...and hopefully get ready to kill voldemort. I am devestated about Hagrid still though :( But then won't Harry be protected by Hagrids love now..after all he loved Harry just as much as his mother did and he too died for him..just a thought...I will read the sequel when I get a chance :) Definate *10*
Author's Response: Wow, once again loads of reviews! it's been a long time since I've checked the reviews for this story, and low and behold, there are loads! So jsut like Angle13, consider this one big response to your awesome reviews! Love ya!
I hate cats...but I like your fic. *10*
Im not going to say its ..funny? i mean u made me grin because i think so many HP fans can relate..but i think it more clever than funny :) Definately fooled me till the end...
errmm i would assume T.M.M stand for the masked man.. and naturally I'm thinking the masked man is non other than Draco Malfoy...ya'know coz this is a Hr/Dr fic... but i dunno i could be wrong i suppose....anyway.. keep writing..
Well looking past Ashwinder's nitpicks :) (Though I know the intention behind them) I was very impressed with the way you ended this amazing story. It didn't feel rushed, and your conclusion was realistic. I absolutely loved that Petunia made Harry realise how stupid he had acted and brought him to realise the reason behind Ginny's madness. I was also happy when I read Arthur's reactions, Ron's aswell. I feel lucky in a way to have been able to read through without much waiting on your updates, as I only stumbled upon this fic recently. However, I think it would have been nice to be able to follow the process. Well, all in all, I think you wrapped up a very emotional and magnificent piece of writing in an excellent way. SO..Of course :) *10* and I will definately have to read up on your future fictions.. Congrats!
Author's Response: Thank-you! Thank-you for reading and taking the time to review. I'm glowing from your wonderful compliments!
This story is brilliant. I usually leave a review for every chapter (and I regret not doing so.. ) but I was wrapped up in what was going on I just couldn't stop to review I had to read what happened next! This is the most original and wonderful plot line I have read for ages since I joined Mugglenet. I havent read many fics in Ginny's POV but this was excellent. All the trials that she had to go through right from being left at hogwarts to dealing with pregnancy..and hiding it!! She was so brave! There was never a point where I doubted such a plot line could occur realistically .. it felt to me like you put a lot of time and thought into your ideas and I thoroughly enjoyed being able to see them! I was in tears throughout chapters, them first cropping up when I realised where Dumbledore was sending Ginny and then throughout further chapters when I just couldn't believe how hard it would be for Ginny to cope with everything. I cannot commend you enough in this one review but I just wanted to you know there is one extra person out there who appreciates your wonderful writing! I am sitting on the edge of my seat to find out what happens next! *10* Easily.
Author's Response: Thank-you! It's so wonderful to hear from a reader that they've not only enjoyed my writing... but felt it. I've just packed chapter 15 off to my beta readers, so hopefully it'll be up soon. I hope you enjoy the conclusion as much as you have the rest of the story!
Excellent opening! I loved the in depth description of how Hermione was feeling and the scene was just ..brilliant..considering how serious it was. Your dialogue was good to :) Amusing. I love that Ginny has Neville on a tight leash hehehe. As for Harry's refrigerator well... hmm green sandwiches George is game..I wouldnt be taking a bite! so for this chapter *10*..and Im moving right on to the next one!
O my gosh..for a serious issue this chapter sure did crack me up. Fred and george...priceless. okay favourite lines ...“They broke up last night.” “They bought a truck?” said Fred....“Yeah, imagine getting something like that, you’d even have to pay the long distance phone bill.” ...ha! O and the whole geroge hermione possibility...gosh.. Excellent chapter!! I love it ..definately adding to my favourites *10*...as for Draco..Hopefully he has an incident involving a lawnmower...and pain...lots of pain.
This is exciting...the plot..the humour..the mushiness creeping in...its great!!! I like the “Look, Mr. Grammar, I said most of the time…” line and gosh RON TAPING HARRY! HAHAHAHAHA.. Bloody brilliant!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! How could Harry be so evil as to drag Hermione away from a cruise ship filled with hotties...hello...johnny depp!!... personally whipped cream and body chocolate wouldve just topped it off...but hey..you know... anyway...where was I ...o yea this fic rocks!! ...Are you god? hahaha...O and the prospect of Ron wearing her panties...hilarious! I dont know about Pansy..but if i walked in to find the man I was currently 'with' half naked staring at the john...id be a bit worried... *10* I just cant get enough of the humour.. marvellous :)
Yay Im the first to review this chapter...and a lovely chapter it was...'Re-write Shakespeare!!!' .. Anywho.. I absolutely loved the Harry/Hermione fluffiness not too much..not too little..perfect and the hats!! What an awesome idea :) O I can't wait for the next chapter...but I will.. (Just a note you might want to go over your chapter.. a few spelling mishaps..unless Hermione really is a 'guardian angle' hehe )
Yay Im the first to review this chapter...and a lovely chapter it was...'Re-write Shakespeare!!!' .. Anywho.. I absolutely loved the Harry/Hermione fluffiness not too much..not too little..perfect and the hats!! What an awesome idea :) O I can't wait for the next chapter...but I will.. (Just a note you might want to go over your chapter.. a few spelling mishaps..unless Hermione really is a 'guardian angle' hehe )
I think its beautiful.. *tear
Author's Response: You're too kind, really. I think I'll go cry now...
That was absolutely hilarious..seriously I dont care if you got the idea from Hitchhikers Guide.. I havent read it yet.. so for me your fic was new. I loved the whole scene set up between the trio. With Ron getting nervous about telling Hermione .. and Hermione quickly mentioning they were 'at Hagrids'. Then of course the biscuit story. I was laughing so hard I began to cry...and not just because Harry had made a fool of himself.. but because Ron and Hermione's (and my own) reaction to the story was so dramatic... even their reaction to Harry's dream was a little over excited ..example: when Ron says ' So you’re on her bed mate, what happened next?’.. the fact that you could just see the picture of their excitement in your head completely added to the hilarity of it all. Fabulous.
Its a little sad that this story is almost over...but I think you are finishing it at a good place. I love your style of writing and the way you have with words. The relationship between Hermione and her daughter is so realistic (do you have children of your own?) and well..the plot in general is excellent...keeps the reader interested. I read this story after seeing it recommended on the forum. The person said something along the lines of 'If you are a R/Hr supporter you HAVE to read 'Daddy'. They were right! Any R/Hr supporter would absolutely love this fiction and who could blame them. I must say I had to have a giggle when you wrote about Hermione forcing herself to have non-sexual thoughts...sour milk, Harry HA!!, etc. I thought it was quite amusing. Well.. congrats on a wonderful fiction and good luck with the last chapter. I cannot wait to read it! *10*
This story made my brain hurt...but i guess thats my own fault...Dunno how u managed to think of that plot!! anyway good job
Lily Evans and James Potter share absolutely nothing in common, not even their feelings for each other. Lily, perceived as a ‘model student,’ detests the handsome, popular, Quidditch star James, who she thinks to be something of a git. James, on the contrary, has been infatuated with Lily for years, and has let her and the whole school know it.
As time progresses into Voldemort’s ‘reign of terror,’ the two have to learn to trust, tolerate, and love each other.
Please note, this story is incomplete, and will likely remain so for a long time. I apologize!
This is one of the best Lily/James fics I have ever read. This chapter was really emotional. As soon as Mick talked to Lily about 'not wasting time' I was bawling it was so beautiful! Egh...and the ending of this chapter .. damnit Lily just say yes!! But yes.. I can see why things are the way they are..I can't wait until you find the time to update! BUt I wont nag..seriously take all the time you need the next chapter I know will be excellent! *10*
good gracious.... if i were hermione i wouldnt let him go sticking anything up..there...lol another excellent chapter though :)
its sad it had to end there... i really enjoyed the previous chapters but like everyone else i am left confused as to whether it did happen or it was just a dream :S it just seems like you chucked a rushed chapter in to finish it off... but besides that i thought it was awesome
Definately A... Harry should be able to learn his lesson...whatever that lesson may be