I am 23 years old and I still love Harry Potter and I cherish the fact that so many brilliant writers continue to bless me with their fanfiction by submitting their ideas each and every day.
Hes been a little kid for sooo long...i hope he grows up soon.. besides that id like to say very descriptive story well done :)
Author's Response: Thank you for the good reviews. I hope you continue to enjoy the story.
oo i love these stories... well done :) another wonderful chapter. (More people should be like dumbledore:)
Author's Response: i agree wholeheartedly- why can't more people be like Albus!?! he rocks. He's my favourite charachter.
...I'll be really sorry when JK kills him off. (i feel it's inevitable tho. *sigh*)
An update hehe im all excited. But I wish I picked up on the little things...meh ah well ill just have to keep reading and find out!! There were a few details I noticed though..I think...anyhooo... I'll just wait for more.
Author's Response: What did you guess? I'm having fun with this (keeping people guessing I mean!). Thanks for the review!
Very interesting..I am so not good at the whole deciphering clues thing...so I guess I will have to wait until the secrets are discovered...damn. I do think that there was a good reason as to why Hermione married Krum though... I love the Ron/Hermione interaction..of course its good to see them acting like they used to...even after those horrible circumstances :( Lily was also the first person to pop into my head when Remus said he was in love once... I dont know why..but a few others thought so too ..so im not mad. Anyway, I really enjoy this fic and I cant wait for the wedding...yay. *10*
Author's Response: There is a good reason Hermione married Krum (you'll get a hint to what that is in the next chapter!). And you're right about Lily because I believe Lupin was in love with her in Canon too (only JK will be able to convince me otherwise) Thanks for the review!
Ohh...I have already got predictions for this story roaming about my brain...but I'm patient so i'll just wait and see what happens eh :) keep up the good work
Author's Response: Hee hee, I'm glad you're thinking about what will happen (I guarantee some surprises). Thanks for the review!
*sniff* Wow. Well Ron's story is out..now Hermione's got some explaining to do. I can't imagine how Ginny would have felt starting such an emotional scene. I think it's perfect that Hermione was the one to comfort Ron...and share some of those painful experiences. Lovely, but sad chapter can't wait for the wedding though. *10*
*sniff* Wow. Well Ron's story is out..now Hermione's got some explaining to do. I can't imagine how Ginny would have felt starting such an emotional scene. I think it's perfect that Hermione was the one to comfort Ron...and share some of those painful experiences. Lovely, but sad chapter can't wait for the wedding though. *10*
Author's Response: Thanks. I know it's a sad story and the scene is quite emotional but now you all know why Ron's blidness is such a sensitive issue. The wedding will have some funny moments and it takes place in chapter 10! Thanks for the review!
What a way to start a chapter..gees Ron sure can be a sleeze. Despite previous reviews I think Snape is quite in character perhaps it wouldn't seem so without the aid of the first chapter, but I feel he is supporting his 'plans' in a very Snape like way. As for Hermione it is very nice to see her actions towards Severus through her eyes and not Harry's.
I cannot get over how obvious it is that Snape cares for Hermione..but can still be conniving and at times a little heartless. It just fits his character so well!...As for Hermione she is slowly developing into a woman..she has always been fairly mature but it is important for her to gain the wisdom of what it is to be an adult..and I think the loss of her parents also helps her character with that aspect. Very well done.. off to the next chapter then. *10*
Ooh he is such a good manipulator. The idea was perfect. Not so much Bill having an interest..however, the way Severus stops her from meeting him was brilliant! Excellent chapter..I am really enjoying this fic :)
Good gosh.. what an extreme chapter that was! I bet Hermione would be walking around in circles not knowing what to do after a kiss like that! ..I was reading some other reviews and I have to agree..intelligence is a very attractive quality... I'm glad this story is already finished because I can't wait to see what happens next!
Well in this review I have decided I am going to tell you my favourite lines. Starting with ... ' She’d probably, eventually end up in the bookworm-witch-lesbian-who-likes-Medieval-Poetry group by herself and ensure she’d end up alone somewhere with a multitude of cats.' ..because it was highly amusing and something I would never have thought Hermione would think...and yet it made sense. Secondly I liked this short line..' Unless he cared.' ..It was like a turning point for Hermione where finally her intelligence allowed her to see what she had missed before. I loved it.. Fantastic.. *10*
How do you come up with this stuff..honestly .. I would never have thought about the stasis potion which you have used so well throughout the fic..and I loved how you added the part with his first lecture .. I never would have thought about his excuses to Voldemort..I mean it makes sense doesn't it him being able to save people by claiming the use of their 'parts' egh.. Of course a *10* for your neverending supply of new ideas.
How do you come up with this stuff..honestly .. I would never have thought about the stasis potion which you have used so well throughout the fic..and I loved how you added the part with his first lecture .. I never would have thought about his excuses to Voldemort..I mean it makes sense doesn't it him being able to save people by claiming the use of their 'parts' egh.. Of course a *10* for your neverending supply of new ideas.
Well thats one chapter read and I'm eager to move on but I will leave a review of course. I'm impressed at how you've kept both Hermione and Severus in character.. Hermione's trickery was an example of her cleverness and I found some of Snape's thoughts quite amusing. I believe that his 'making plans' for Miss Granger fits very well with his egotistic personality. Soo moving on to chapter two then.. *10*
That was a superb and satisfying ending. I'm so glad that Severus became mroe than a manipulator..and less than a nobleman. :) This was one of the best S/HR fics I have read and I throroughly enjoyed it.. I will definately look up some of your other fics in future!
I absolutely loved the technique you used in this chapter, the reader seeing what she wants to say but doesn’t. It worked really well because for me it was slightly humorous to see Hermione’s impatience with him but also heartbreaking because she still loves him. Also considering that this will become a HG/SS fic I think to have Hermione and Ron together at the beginning is much more canon… and you have definitely captured my attention. I want to read more. So I will go to the next chapter. Excellent work!
Well we know Hermione really loved him if she skipped all those classes and cried for days and has this endless fury towards the new couple. Oh I had to find her hatred funny though. As for Snape, a little OOC for him to be all polite about Hermione clenching angrily to his papers... but then he is human and maybe somewhere deep down he has feelings. I am looking forward to future chapters though. (I was reading other reviews...and I have seen them for other Hr/S fics...and dont you just love the people that say 'they totally do not agree with a Hr/S pairing but it will be a great story'...It makes me wonder why they read the chapter to begin with? But then I suppose a review is a review.)
Absolutely beautiful ...its the first fic to make me cry yet ... and I shall look up that song.
Author's Response: Aw, I am glad that it touched your heart! Yes, the song I actually heard on the radio!! It's heartwarming. Thanks!
I dont know about the others but im assuming seeing as they have all been to 12 grimauld place before they shouldnt need another note really :S anyway i like it so far so keep up the good work :)
Author's Response: This story takes place before 5th year so they would need the note to know if they have to be there or not. ;)